Ashlok OS- Teri Kaun Hoon Main(Last part-pg43)

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meerab

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Posted: 11 years ago

#131

Originally posted by: roshanii
just wow
Shlok and Aastha can never be apart😊

thank u sooo much dear...😛

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Aman3010

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Posted: 11 years ago

#132

That was intense...waiting for next chapter

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crazygul

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Posted: 11 years ago

#133

yeh kahani puri filmy hai...loved d twist .

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@rbb1

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Posted: 11 years ago

#134

aww poor Shlok it's good Astha found him, Hope Shlok finds out it was Abhay

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Aishwarya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#135

Originally posted by: meerab...

Thank u sooo much sweety...

and yup its a song from movie daag...😛

its simply awesome song...my inspiration for this os...''.teri kaun hoon main''😛😳

😳 .shlok wl confess in that state:o?! Dnt answr me nw update soon😃

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Aishwarya

@Aishaa3

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Posted: 11 years ago

#136

Hey its 4m daag the fire na..anothr 70s ki film bhi hai namd daag

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537048

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Posted: 11 years ago

#137

u r making it so interesting
ok so shlok is in front of mandir nd i think astha saw him
nd abhay ne brakes fail kiye the arghhh
bt indirectly he is going to let dem meet each other toh uska plan toh backfire ho gaya
nd as far as i knw pregnancy mein shaadi nahi hoti sry if i m wrong
bt waiting for the next part
do update soon

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banoo2012

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Posted: 11 years ago

#138

another awsome update kyp it up

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Neelum.drashti

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Posted: 11 years ago

#139

Beautiful meerab!

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Jasmine

@jasminerahul

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Posted: 11 years ago

#140

I had guessed that Karan was Gaurav.Bcz he was Shrenu's former hero.now waiting 4 ur Ashlok Swathy OS n ur imaginary swathy.Happy that Astha didn't complete her pheras with Karan.Shlok's accident was unexpected.Aastha cud hear Shlok's cry.That's the luv which her heart connected 2 his.Abhay was d one behind his accident.Y did shlok send him 2 jail?Is it bcz Abhay tortured Jyoti?What did Aastha see at d end?Did she see Shlok bleeding?

Thx a lot 4 updating regularly.

U have always given us beautiful romantic os.So I'm asking u.Have u written any Valentine special os?Then plz giv me d link

Edited by jasminerahul - 11 years ago