Ashlok OS- Teri Kaun Hoon Main(Last part-pg43)

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meerab

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Posted: 11 years ago

Ashlok OS-Teri Kaun Hoon Main

Part-1

Astha u r looking beautiful in this bridal dress...kalindi said setting her mang tikka...

Kalindi:Astha beta r u happy???

Astha:aayi tu kush hai???

Kalindi:haan astha...i am very happy that u r going to start a new life with him...

Astha:tu kush hai tu main bhi kush hoon aayi...

Kalindi:I know karan will always keep both of u happy...he is a golden hearted person...soon he will win your heart with his love...

Her eyes filled with tiny tear drops...aayi merey dil main kisi aur ke pyaar ke liye koi jagah nahi hai...mera dil aaj bhi shlok ke liye hi dhadkta hai...astha said looking into kalindi's eyes...

Kalindi :bas kar astha ...jis insaan ko apni patni aur aaney waley bachey ki koi parwa nahi us ke liye apney ansoo mat zaya kar...she wiped her tears...

A girl came running ...kalindi aunty ...kalindi aunty...karan aur uss ki family waley aa gaye hain...they are waiting outside...jaldi chaliye...

Kalindi:astha wo log aa gaye hain...tu jaldi se tiyar ho ja...main un logon ko sambhalti hoon...saying this she left with that girl leaving astha alone in the room ...

Astha looked herself in the mirror and remembered the time she spent with shlok...

Pardesiya itna bata sajana
Teree kaun hu mai

Astha:Kash uss din aap mujhe aik baar rokh letey shlok ...sirf aik baar...tu mujhe ye shaadi nahi karni padhti...par main apney aayi baba ko aur ziada takleef main bhi nahi dekh sakti... her pain was flowing in form of tears from her eyes...

Please let me know u like it or not...ur response gonna decide that whether i should continue it or not...

Part 2- Pg 9
Part 3-pg 18
Part4-pg24
Part5-pg 36
Last part-pg 43

Edited by meerab... - 11 years ago

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latha_555

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Posted: 11 years ago

i like the story, please continue

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Jasmine

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Posted: 11 years ago

I as waiting 4 a serious os from u as its been a long time.Thx a lot.Ashlok got divorced n she is getting married 2 Karan.Hope Shlok comes n stops the wedding by confessing his luv.waiting 4 d next part eagerly.loved d pics.plz put up Karan's pic also.i mean ur imaginary Karan.Wud like 2 c him at last in ur os

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Roshani

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Posted: 11 years ago

continue continue

i am dying to read next👏

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meerab

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: latha_555
i like the story, please continue

thanks dear😛

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Posted: 11 years ago

superb start plzz continue with the story

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meerab

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: jasminerahul
I as waiting 4 a serious os from u as its been a long time.Thx a lot.Ashlok got divorced n she is getting married 2 Karan.Hope Shlok comes n stops the wedding by confessing his luv.waiting 4 d next part eagerly.loved d pics.plz put up Karan's pic also.i mean ur imaginary Karan.Wud like 2 c him at last in ur os

thanks a lot dear...its always a pleasure reading ur comments...yup i will surely introduce imaginary karan...😆

but what if shlok not confesses his feelings for astha...😉...