SS- HUMSHAKAL, last part updated on 16/2/14 on pg 31

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meera.rajeev

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Posted: 11 years ago

#191

Originally posted by: Geeta.R
Fantastic ss was a pleasure to read xx

Thank you 😊

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Anusha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#192

meera sorry dear... Ive been stuck for the week...

ill comment on the weekend after reading ur SS... on hold till then...

huggs!!!🤗

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meera.rajeev

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Posted: 11 years ago

#193

Originally posted by: TehsinaJFJ
Aha!So Shlok sweetu gave one point to Astha finally!😉Hai na meri pyari behna?!😛Dt kiss on her hand meant he was impressed by her this time,and declared her da winner gracefully for da 1st tym!Dt is surely is a first tym for sure..And an indication dt he is melting..😉We did not get dt in da show yet,but u gave dt to us thru dis OS!!!Thank u so much sis!🤗Love u and ur work!Do write more wn u do get da tym!😉

thank you so much di. Sirf aapko meri idea samaj me aya. Thank you so much. Love you

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meera.rajeev

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Posted: 11 years ago

#194

Originally posted by: jeenia123
Meera beautiful update but you kleft us confused...complete it sweetie...
Love you and miss you a lot... sham ko online ho jaya kro...
today evening i will be free.will try to be online...
please come for some time.so many days have passed...

thank you so much di! Will clear the doubts soon

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meera.rajeev

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Posted: 11 years ago

#195

Originally posted by: Anusha16
meera sorry dear... Ive been stuck for the week...
ill comment on the weekend after reading ur SS... on hold till then...

huggs!!!🤗

take your time dea!

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meera.rajeev

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Posted: 11 years ago

#196

final part - 2

So here goes the last part. Was not planning to write it. But had to clear all you lovely people's doubts.

Shlok was walking back to his room, when he recalled the all the events of the day. Astha had done something which he never thought she will. Astha has actually gone all the way to insult him and make fun of him. And that thought bought a small smile smile to his face. That is when he remembered his kiss on her hand. Though he has kissed her and been so close to her and hugged her many times, this tiome it felt different. Much to his shock it felt rigt to his heart. But his brain said what you did their was really stupid. Astha ne kya socha hoga??? Yahi ki who jeet gayi he aur tum ye maan rahe ho!! He heard someone say this and he frantically looked around to see who was talking. That's when he saw his on image leaning on to the wall a couple of steps down to him. He got stunned at this. He asked in a shaky voice "who are you??". "Kaun mein??? Me tumhara dil hum r. shlok agnihotri. Jiski baat tum kabhi nahi suntey." His replica replied...

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part 2

SHLOK : you??? And my heart's voice??? Are you kidding me?

Inner voice: tumhe toh yahi lagta hena ki tumhara dil swati ke saath hi khatam ho gaya?? Nahi shlok ye sach nahi he! Tumhara dil toot zaroor gaya tha, par ab who jud gaya he! Astha ke pyaar ne use jod diya he! There is not even a small crack left on your heart. Par pata nahi kyu tum hi ye baat nahi samajna chahete ho. Mera tumhare andar dum khut ta he!! Bas astha ka pyaar hi he jo mujhe sukoon deta he. Par tumhare ego ne ab use bhi mujh taka ne nahi dete. Aakhir tumhara problem kya he yaar? Itni achi toh biwi he! Ye revenge vivenge ka chakkar chodo aur use leke kahi ghoomne jao. Use maafi mang lo. Who bohat achi he. Tumse bohat pyaar bhi karti he, maaf kar degi tumhe. Even if she trows some tantrums bare it... she all worth it...

SHLOK : kya bakwaas kar rahe ho tum????

INNER VOICE: acha beta!!! Saari stupidity tum karte ho, muhjse mera pyaar tumne cheena, aura b ulta mujhe data rahe ho??? Ye achi baat he!!! Oye. Me tujhe ek baat saaf saaf keh deta hu, tu na astha se pyaar karta he, tu jitni jaldi use manega wahi tere liye acha he...

To be continued soon...

Edited by meera.rajeev - 11 years ago

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Posted: 11 years ago

#197

oh dia is interesting

do update soon

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meerab

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Posted: 11 years ago

#198

Originally posted by: meera.rajeev

final part - 2

So here goes the last part. Was not planning to write it. But had to clear all you lovely people's doubts.

Shlok was walking back to his room, when he recalled the all the events of the day. Astha had done something which he never thought she will. Astha has actually gone all the way to insult him and make fun of him. And that thought bought a small smile smile to his face. That is when he remembered his kiss on her hand. Though he has kissed her and been so close to her and hugged her many times, this tiome it felt different. Much to his shock it felt rigt to his heart. But his brain said what you did their was really stupid. Astha ne kya socha hoga??? Yahi ki who jeet gayi he aur tum ye maan rahe ho!! He heard someone say this and he frantically looked around to see who was talking. That's when he saw his on image leaning on to the wall a couple of steps down to him. He got stunned at this. He asked in a shaky voice "who are you??". "Kaun mein??? Me tumhara dil hum r. shlok agnihotri. Jiski baat tum kabhi nahi suntey." His replica replied...

To be continued soon...