SS- HUMSHAKAL, last part updated on 16/2/14 on pg 31

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niki795

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Posted: 11 years ago

#181

awesome update
astha outburst
but y shlok hugged her and left
plz give shlok pov

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Roshani

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Posted: 11 years ago

#182

good

great

awesome

mast

but why didnt you PM me dear😊

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latha_555

@latha_555

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Posted: 11 years ago

#183

nice update, but shlock didnt say anything so left a little confused. I'm assuming as he heard her convo at the restaurant about loving him he changed his mind?

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meera.rajeev

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Posted: 11 years ago

#184

Originally posted by: roshanii
good
great
awesome
mast
but why didnt you PM me dear😊

As it was my first work never felt confident enough to send pm's. Just did to people who found it and commented. That too only for the 2nd and 3rd update. Sorry 4 nt sending u 1 dear. But if there is a next time then will do!

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Roshani

@lively_roshani

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Posted: 11 years ago

#185

Originally posted by: meera.rajeev

As it was my first work never felt confident enough to send pm's. Just did to people who found it and commented. That too only for the 2nd and 3rd update. Sorry 4 nt sending u 1 dear. But if there is a next time then will do!

dear please clear all the doubt of readers in this story 😊

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meera.rajeev

@meera.rajeev

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Posted: 11 years ago

#186

Originally posted by: roshanii

dear please clear all the doubt of readers in this story😊

Sure dear. Will soon clear all the doubts. Will write shlok's pov on all this!

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meera.rajeev

@meera.rajeev

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Posted: 11 years ago

#187

Originally posted by: latha_555
nice update, but shlock didnt say anything so left a little confused. I'm assuming as he heard her convo at the restaurant about loving him he changed his mind?

you'l soon find out what is exactly running in shlok's mind!

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Geeta

@Geeta.R

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Posted: 11 years ago

#188

Fantastic ss was a pleasure to read xx

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TehsinaJFJ

@TehsinaJFJ

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Posted: 11 years ago

#189

Aha!So Shlok sweetu gave one point to Astha finally!😉Hai na meri pyari behna?!😛Dt kiss on her hand meant he was impressed by her this time,and declared her da winner gracefully for da 1st tym!Dt is surely is a first tym for sure..And an indication dt he is melting..😉We did not get dt in da show yet,but u gave dt to us thru dis OS!!!Thank u so much sis!🤗Love u and ur work!Do write more wn u do get da tym!😉