ASHLOK FF LOVE V/S EGO part 2 updated

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jeenia123

@jeenia123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#41

Wow... am lucky one...got first place...

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Suri

@BlackJack.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#42

It was utterly awesome yaar!
you do it so well!
the flashbacks were senti...
keep rolling in more!

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Neelum.drashti

@Neelum.drashti

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Posted: 11 years ago

#43

awesome update👏...the flashback made me sad😔...waiting to know more about ashlok past.

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@rbb1

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Posted: 11 years ago

#44

great update, OMG they seem so happy wonder what happend between them that she had to leave him

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Shalini

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Posted: 11 years ago

#45

Wow... nice update

Waiting for the next part.

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Pveenat

@Pveenat

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Posted: 11 years ago

#46

Awesome update. Waiting for the next one.👏

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niki795

@niki795

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Posted: 11 years ago

#47

awesome update

loved it

everything seems good between them

then y they got separated

continue soon

thanks for the pm

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maivelli

@maivelli

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: jeenia123
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Wow. what a great update.
They were too much in love... Astha planned surprise for him..but he was late...and beautiful gift..specially the album...
just loved her surprises and she called his mother too...
Then why so much differences? or some misunderstanding?
Please update soon...

P.S: ... hey if in tomorrow's update of my FF... you find a bit resembence...i assure that is not your copy...I have already typed and that is starting of major twist of my FF...

thanku so much !!!!!!!!!

yeah dear in comin updates will let u know

oh dear i know u are a fab writer i have read your both work and i am big fan of ur writing skill

so even if our ff matches a bit its like a privilege to my work...