Index FF: My Heart Whsipers, but I can't hear...Chap-28 UP.16.12.2013

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Hey Guys..started a new Fan Fiction... on Astha andShloK. quite different from Track of Show...
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Its a story of Four Friends, Astha, Shlok, Varun and Gauri. First year MBA... Varun and Gauri committed to each other while Shlok and Astha best Friends...

Astha a girl with Moral values and self respect and Shlok , A rich arrogant boy but cool with his buddies...
what happens when Love strikes between Astha and Shlok...
How they accept it or Deny it????



Character sketch


Shlok Agnihotri: a Rich , Arrogant MBA student but cool with his friends including his best friend Astha. not very fond of Girls due to his tragic past and also doesn't like his family which includes his parents.. Niranjan Agnihotri and Anjali Agnihotri. As he thinks, his parents are reason behind his past. always ready t do anything for his friends, lives separately from his parents in Mumbai.

Astha Kirloskar: An Intelligent MBA student with moral values and self Respect, topper of the class... never ready to take help from anybody including her best friend Shlok. Loves her parents very much, can do anything for them

Anjali and Niranjan Agnihotri: Shlok's parents, Rich business man... Man of rules and Lady to follow them..but nice people...Live in Mumbai but their only son Lives separately from them. Very fond f their son, who use to emotionally blackmail them to fulfill his wishes...

Kalindi and Avdhoot Kirloskar: Astha's Parents from Pune. A middle class private job's person.. suffering from Paralysis... Love their only child Astha very much.taught her to respect relations and maintain self respect.

Varun and Gauri: Astha and Shlok's friends...Love birds... but very nice to them .make their group complete.stand by them through thick and thin.



Links to Updates...

Link to Thread-1
Link to Thread 2 and Part-20
Part-21
Part-22
Part-23
Part-24
Part-25

Part-26
Part-27
Part-28
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Preview of Chapter-1
Introduction of Characters, their friendship and relations.
For More, here is the Link...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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very interesting please continue am for it
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Preview of Chapter-2

Shlok saves Astha from Goon. Getting possessive for her and helps her indirectly...
For more...
Here is the Link...
Part-2 Page-5 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/95485253
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Preview of Chapter-3

Shlok and Astha help Varun to arrange surprise b'day party for Gauri... and night out for them,
Astha's wish to meet her parents. Shlok to fulfill...
For more Here is the Link

Part-3 Page-9 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/95502716
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Preview of Chapter-4

Road Dance in Moon Light... Visit to Pune by Shlok and Astha...Invitation from Agnihotri Mention for all of them for Party... and A big Boom...

For More, Here is the Link...

Part-4 Page-16 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/95675097
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Originally posted by: mayabharathi

very interesting please continue am for it


thanks a lot dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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its superb jeenia...u can only write such a story like these...
congrats gohead dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: saranyagulam

its superb jeenia...u can only write such a story like these...

congrats gohead dear...


thanks a lot dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Preview of Part-5

Clarification of ow Shlok got pics of fake wedding, how did Astha react?
How did Agnihotris react?
a bit about shlok's past and what next?
For more, Here is the Link...

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/95736043

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