Ashlok FF: My Heart Whispers, but I can't Hear...Part-1 to Part-19 - Page 16

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: jeenia123

i think it will be a photo from some college drama or something?🤔

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Posted: 11 years ago
@lechu...are you mind reader?yaar kyon mere ff kA kachra karti ho har bar???? Lol...yup good guess. ..
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: jeenia123

@lechu...are you mind reader?yaar kyon mere ff kA kachra karti ho har bar???? Lol...yup good guess. ..

yipee😉because after reading the chapters i was thinking on the possible chances😉
this one is the only sensible one among my wild guesses😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow awesome
loved it
very shocking...!!!!
when this happen????
can't wait now for next
continue soon
thanks for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: LECHU123

yipee😉because after reading the chapters i was thinking on the possible chances😉
this one is the only sensible one among my wild guesses😆


Wow... great people think alike...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: niki795

wow awesome
loved it
very shocking...!!!!
when this happen????
can't wait now for next
continue soon
thanks for pm


Thanks a lot dear.will update within a while...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Hey guys, thanks for the response, really happy for tis new story, getting better feedback...So here is the next update

Part-5

Shlok slowly went towards Astha, held her hand and brought her to stage, she was like a statue, didn't know how to react...

As she reached stage... He introduced to all...Ladies and gentlemen, please meet my wife.. Astha... Astha Shlok Agnihotri...a few people started clapping bringing Astha back to sense...she gave a super angry look to Shlok and turned to run from there...he immediately pulled her taking into tight hug in front of all and slowly whispered in her ear. Astha please. I am sorry. I had no other option... please just two minutes. We may talk...

Even Varun and Gauri were standing annoyed in the crowd looking at Shlok and Astha...looking into the whispers going on around. Niranjan immediately handled the mike and with a fake smile announced... We are sorry ladies and gentlemen, we really didn't know, our son is so big now... Anyways, we welcome our new family member Astha...with whole heartedly and request you all to wish the best for them...

People started clapping slowly. Finally he announced...and Dinner is ready...

As people started moving, Astha ran from there outside in the lawn followed by Gauri and Varun...

Gauri held her shoulder...she immediately hugged her and started crying badly.

When Shlok came and tapped her shoulder slowly...Astha... I am sorry whatever...

Before he could complete... Astha turned and gave a tight slap on his face...

I am sorry Astha, I deserve it...you can slap me as much as you want. He spoke lowering his head... Varun held his collar in anger... Shlok, I didn't know, you will use those pictures like this...

Shlok didn't speak a single word while Astha was cursing the moment when these pictures were clicked.

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it will be a story of one girl who has lost all hopes in her life, lost everything including her family... it will be how she gets love and earn her respect back...The director was narrating the story to class for a play that had been to be pictured on the Fresher's party function by their class.

Raise your hands who all want to participate in the play... The director shouted.

Everyone was ready to participate.

No, I need one couple having beautiful chemistry, infact the story will be more portrayal than words... a couple who can express their feelings without speaking... you can say who may talk with eyes...

For that there will be auditions, only couples can participate, all who want, can register their names... saying the director left the room.

Varun and Gauri were too happy...

Hey lets go and register our names. Gauri shouted...

Ya, let's go...varun too spoke excitedly.

YA, go and waist one precious week on stupid play... Astha twisted her face.

Astha, yaar, it's a matter of one week... Nothing will be lost, it will be a new experience... hey why don't you also give audition? Gauri spoke..

With whom? Astha was surprised...

With Shlok, whom else? Both Astha and Shlok were a bit surprised...

Shut up yaar... We can just fight in a good way, can't pretend to be lovey dovey... Astha spoke.

Ya, Astha is right... Ye sab mere bas ki baat nahi hai... Shlok too dismissed the idea...

Ok, at least come with us to cheer us... Varun said...

K buddy, let's go... And four of them moved towards auditorium.

Students were giving auditions there and were being rejected, Varun and Gauri were nervous while Shlok and Astha were sitting making fun of all...

Shlok, Astha... agar itna hi mja aa rha hai then why don't you people try? Its too easy to sit and laugh on others. A frustrated student came and shouted on laughing Astha and Shlok.

Shlok's anger raised high... he stood up from chair while Astha tried to control him... Shlok, leave yaar, he is frustrated due to non-selection...

Ok, I am frustrated na, please you two also try. You are best friends na, stand by each other always, show your chemistry, physics, biology or anything else here... the boy shouted..

Shlok was really angry now... he held Astha's hand...and pulled her towards stage...

Astha tried to stop him...Shlok stop yaar ... I can't do it...

Not even for me? He looked towards her...

Finally they both reached the stage and Shlok took one page script from director.

It was the last scene of the play... the boy had to go to girl, hold her hand, take her to temple and put sindoor into her head with few dialogues...

Ok, Ready... ...Shlok you are Karan and Astha is Pallavi... Should we start? Director asked

Yes sir. Astha spoke with a long sigh...

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Karan, ye kya kar rhe ho tum? Pallavi shouted... Tum jante ho na, main is sab ke layak nahi hun... she pulled her hand back from his hands...

Nahi pallavi, mujhe koi farq nahi padta, tumhara past kya hai, sach yahi hai, mai tumse pyar karta hun.

Par ye samaj? Ye samaj hamare pyar ko izzazat kabhi nai dega... She turned back again...

Karan got angry...Ye samaj kaun hota hai hamein rokna wala... he dragged pallvi with him to the curtain like temple... Their he took sindoor and put into her head.. then they exchanged garlands... Pallavi had teaars In her eyes...

Karan wiped her tears. nahi pallavi ab to khush hone ka din hai , rone ka nahi.aj ke baad in ansuon ki tumhari zindagi mein koi jgah nahi...

And they both shared along eye lock...

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Cut it.. Director shouted.. Excellent chemistry...amazing... this is the chemistry I want to see in play... You two are finalized for the play...

We, they both were shocked removing their garlands and other attire...no, not at all sir. This was just a challenge so we did it, otherwise we are not at all interested...both of them denied...

But I would love to cast you two. Director spoke again...

No. not at all sir. Saying both left the auditorium laughing loudly...

Vaise Shlok, it was real fun... Astha spoke laughing...

Ya really. Once I was completely lost in character... Shlok said...

YA, and me too...Astha too said controlling her laughter...

And we were also lost dear. Varun and Gauri spoke coming there... Just look at the pictures...I have clicked in your cell Shlok... You two were looking amazing...Varun showed them the pictures of the scene and all were laughing to their heart seeing the pics.

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Astha... Shlok spoke slowly...

Don't you dare to take my name Shlok...saying Astha started running towards gate.

Astha, please don't go. You are my best friend... please help me... Shlok pleaded...

Shlok, you made fun of me... I cannot forgive you...you made mockery of our friendship... Astha shouted.

Astha please... Shlok sat on his knees. Forgive me.. It's just a matter of today... Do you think, my parents will accept my marriage? I just wanted to show them what I can do... I promise, tomorrow everything will be over and if questions raise after tomorrow, I will say, were separated... Shlok spoke in one sentence...Please please please... He was folding hands sitting on knees...

Astha's anger was bit cooled down on his requests... she looked towards Gauri and Varun...

After silence of a while... Gauri looked towards Shlok, who was still on knees...and spoke hesitatingly...

Astha, vaise , this is really a matter for a day...

Are you mad Gauri? This is about marriage... Astha was shocked...

Astha, Shlok is our friend, and we can help for one day... Varun spoke tapping her shoulder...

She looked in a shock towards them...and moreover what will I say to my parents? Such a big lair...

Yaar , no one knows you from this party. This matter will finish here in party only...Shlok spoke standing on his feet... and its not necessary to tell everything to your parents always...he had got a bit confidence on seeing Gauri and Varun on his side..

After a struggle of half an hour, Astha was finally ready. ok... she wiped her tears. But just for today...nothing more than this. Till next time, you will solve this problem... She warned...

Thanks thanks. Saying Shlok moved further to hug her...she pushed him away. Be away from me... Don't try to be friendly. I am really angry...Astha warned her...

Ok baba...can we go inside now? Shlok asked with a smile.

Ok...she nodded and moved towards hall...

As a hubby wife... he spoke holding her arm...

She gave him angry glares and finally held his arm moving inside...

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Anjali had not spoken a single word to Astha while Shlok was introducing him with all as his wife with a smile.

As the party finished, Shlok was about to leave with friends, when Anjali stopped him, Shlok we need to talk...

Not now Mrs. Agnihotri... I have to go...he insisted...

But Anjali held Astha's arm... And to you too... As much as I know, you have met just six months before na? When did you get married? All those pictures are fake, you are cheating on us, and I didn't know a girl can go so low for money...she spoke looking towards Astha.

She was shocked, she looked towards Shlok... Shlok was really angry. He removed Anjali's hand from Astha's arm... and shouted, she is my wife and you don't have any right to touch her or to say her anything, Moreover, it was me who forced her for marriage not she. Got it? And I am adult now. I have all the right to choose girl for myself...

Shlok, Behave yourself in front of outsiders... Niranjan shouted and then controlling his anger... he looked towards Astha...Astha beta, I am sorry for whatever is happening...it's your first visit to our home...I am sorry we didn't know, otherwise we could have made arrangements.

Anjali...he looked towards her...

Ji ...Anjali spoke annoyingly...

Bahu ke greh pravesh ki tayari kijiye... Niranjan ordered...

What? All were shocked...Astha looked in anger towards Shlok...

Par ... Anjali resisted...

Anjali hum ek baar apna beta kho chuke hain kisi ladki ke liye, dubara nahi khona chahte...is baar hamein uski pasand pe koi Aaitraaj nahi hai... Niranjan spoke... which came as shock for all the friends... they all were looking towards Shlok while he had pain in his eyes...

Ji, you are right...she had pain in her eyes for losing her only son...I just do preparations...she nodded in yes and spoke after thinking for a while...

Shlok shouted ...no, nothing such can happen...

What do you mean? Niranjan asked...

I mean...he stammered...we are married one month back... Now these rituals don't mean anymore... We have to go. Let we people go now...he held Astha's hand and about to leave,

When Anjali stopped him... Shlok, your baba is right. I also don't have any objection from your choice... you want to leave...ok, but not today...you may leave day after tomorrow.

He looked towards Anjali with a questioning look...

She continued... Tomorrow is Karwa Chuath... Astha's first fast...please let her complete that here...Please beta, stop here.. Anjali folded her hands in front of Astha with tears...While they all were shocked...

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Posted: 11 years ago
OMGGG I AM SO GLAD YOU STARTED ANOTHER FF !!! 😃 Thank you thank you THANK YOU !! 😃 I really love read your stories and as always your doing a marvelous job with this FF as well 👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
loved it...and how astha agreed to help him sooo cute...what can i say...as usual a piece of perfection...awesome update dear...👍🏼👏
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Originally posted by: Miracle_lover

OMGGG I AM SO GLAD YOU STARTED ANOTHER FF !!! 😃 Thank you thank you THANK YOU !! 😃 I really love read your stories and as always your doing a marvelous job with this FF as well 👍🏼


Thanks a lot and Welcome to my new FF... hope you liked it...

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