Originally posted by: jeenia123
Good morning... aa gye aap? was waiting for you...😊
Will update in a while... just giving final reading...
hmm I'm waiting😊
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Originally posted by: jeenia123
Good morning... aa gye aap? was waiting for you...😊
Will update in a while... just giving final reading...
Part-22
Astha came out in the hall and found no one was there...
Where are all? She asked from Shlok, who came afterwards...
May be they left us alone...he smiled winking at her placing his hand on her waist...
Shut up Shlok... Astha showed him fake anger and called Gauri...
Gauri where are you?
So you got time? Gauri chided her...
Will tell you once I come, how much you people have teased me... First tell me where?
At shlok's flat, come soon...
Ya coming...saying she cut the call...
Hummm? Shlok asked...
At your place...
what are they doing yaar from here to there...anyway let's go...he smiled...
As they reached at shlok's place ... Gate was open, lights were off ...And they found no one...
Gauri... Astha called...
As she called for Gauri, suddenly all lights were on... Varun, Gauri and Swati came to them for a group hug shouting
...congratulation and celebrations...
Both Shlok and Astha looked at each other...and then towards hall. It was beautifully decorated with a cutout on the wall...
Congratulations... Astha , Shlok...
On the table, a heart shape cake was placed with a candle on it...
Gauri, what's all this? Astha held her hand...
On the name of our friend's true happiness... Gauri spoke pushing her towards Shlok, who held her from waist pulling closer smiling and looking at Astha ...
Astha was blushing like a new bride...when Shlok pressed his hand on her waist and whispered...see my effect on you when I am just near you...what will happen when...? He winked...
Shut up Shlok... Astha punched him running to Gauri, who was giggling seeing Astha...
Hey guys, I have an announcement... Shlok shouted to change the atmosphere...
Ya... We are listening... Varun came closer...
That I proposed Astha and ... He looked towards Astha... And...she said yes...he completed... When all other clapped for them..
Hey liar, when did you propose me and when did I say yes? Astha shouted...
Didn't I told, I love you...
You just told and didn't ask me...
Shut up... He brushed off...I don't need your permission, when I know you belong to me only... Shlok chided her...now come and let's cut cake...he held his hand taking her to table...Shlok tried to pick knife but due to bandages, he could not Astha picked the knife...held his hand and both cut the cake feeding each other...while others hugged them, soon Astha's shyness was gone and they all were feeding cake to each other...
Varun, take Shlok to doctor...his hands are still bleeding... Astha asked Varun and both left soon...
When Gauri hugged Astha kissing on her cheek...I am so happy for you sweetie...
Shut up and tell me why you all cheated me? Astha shouted...
No dear, it was not they. It was just me and Shlok who planned...Swati held her ears... I am sorry...
You know how hurt I was in last one month and how hurt I was today when I listened everything was a plan...
Actually we did all this to make you confess but our plan backfired... But you love him a lot na..
Astha nodded in yes with smile... yes, I love him a lot but I am not going to confess him so soon. Its time for him to struggle now as much as I have...
So, you did not tell him, you love him? Both the girls were surprised...but does it matters? He knows...
Ya, he knows...but he wants to listen from me... Now I will make him wait...Astha smiled...
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Both Gauri and Astha were resting in their room when Shlok came there...
Astha, let's go...he held her hand making her get up from the bed...
But where Shlok? She asked..
You are still n night suit? Look at the time...he spoke opening the Almirah taking a top and jeans from it and giving in her hands...get ready soon...
But first tell me where are we going? Astha stopped him...
Your office...you are getting late... He said casually...
But Shlok... she paused for a moment...
Shlok cupped her face into his hands... Astha, I know, you left because of me...but you know, I am the owner of that place...
But...she resisted...you don't like...
But I know you want to work Astha... Your career is your dream and I assure no one will come in between your career...No one...you will work like this till you want to... You will do everything that gives you happiness... Saying he placed a kiss on her forehead smiling at her...
Astha too smiled nodding in yes moving towards washroom to get ready...
Ahaan? Nice... Gauri chided him... so you will let her work even after marriage?
Did I say, I will marry her? Shlok winked...
Shut up... Saying Gauri threw a pillow on him...
Of course Gauri...she will work till she will love to... bus farq sirf itna hoga...now she is an employee and then she will be employer of Agnihotri group... She will take care of the company...
Then what will you do? Gauri winked at him..
I will take care of her only... And both were laughing...ok Gauri, she will be late today...
What? Shlok, me and Varun never left her alone at night and you... On very first day of your proposal, I will be alone here? Gauri shouted...when Shlok blocked his face with his hand...
Shhh... Please yaar, I have planned a surprise for her ...she didn't say till now, she loves me... I am just trying to make her confess... I promise we will be back by twelve, till then I will say Varun to stay here...
Anytime for you yaar and all the best Gauri gave him a high five... When Astha too came...what happened?
Nothing, let's go we are getting late...saying Shlok pulled her to the gate...
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After office, Shlok took her to his flat...
Shlok why did you brought me here? Gauri must be waiting, its late...
She will not, she knows you are with me...
Again cheating me? Astha shouted...
No...its not cheating...Shlok whispered pulling her closer...I have a surprise for you...
Ahaan? Astha smiled...
Look on the bed...something is for you...
She looked it was a packet, he signaled her to open... as she opened, it was a red color dress...Astha looked surprisingly at him...
I love to see you in Red...he smiled kissing on her cheek...saying he left the room...
Astha looked at the dress, it was a beautiful long sleeveless red gown .she smiled on seeing and went towards Washroom...
Outside Shlok He had settled food bowls on the table, switched off lights and was glowing candles on the dining table in beautiful candle stands... When he saw Astha coming outside wearing the dress... He was paused for a moment on seeing her... while Astha was blushing noticing his gaze fixed at her...suddenly the matchstick placed in his hand burnt to the end making him feel heat...
Aww...he shouted throwing match stick...
Shlok. Are you ok? Astha came running taking his hand and blowing on it...
Now ok...he smiled...
Stupid...can't you see your finger was burning...she smiled..
These days , I can't see anything beyond you...he pulled her into his arms...by the way I have another surprise for you...
Another?
These will you get every day. He smiled...
So what's next?
Check the food..he smiled...
She checked the bowls...it was Astha's favorite Rice and Manchurian...
So what's special about it now? She crossed her arms...
Chef Shlok presents you favorite food Princess. Shlok bowed down with a smile...
Don't tell me, you cooked it... Astha was surprised...
Only for you my Jaan... He placed a peck on her cheek. While Astha was shocked.
Now taste it and tell how it is? He smiled...
Didn't you taste it? Astha asked...
No... first right on my first cooking is just yours my princess...he smiled...
Astha looked at his smiling face and took a spoon from food...Wow...it's delicious...
Really? Let me check...Shlok smiled...
But Astha pulled spoon from his hand... Forwarding her hand towards him...dance?
Not bad? He smiled pulling her closer and starting the music...
He placed his both hands on her waist while she wrapped her hands around his neck...but this time, he was not leaving nay gap between them, he pulled her as closer as he could... looking into Astha's eye, he started moving slowly...
Kuch na kaho, kuch bhi na kaho ,Kya kehna hai, kya sunna hai
Mujhko pata hai, tumko pata hai, Samay ka yeh pal tham sa gaya hai
Aur is pal mein koi nahin hai, Bas ek main hoon, bas ek tum ho
Kuch na kaho, kuch bhi na kaho...
He slowly bent down placing a kiss on her shoulder...shivering she tried to move away but he wrapped his arms around her stomach pulling her closer while dancing...Astha closed her eyes with pleasure...
Kitne gehre halke, shyaam ke rang hai chhalke
Parvat se yun utre baadal jaise aanchal dhalke
Aur is pal mein koi nahin hai
Bas ek main hoon, bas ek tum ho
Kuch na kaho, kuch bhi na kaho
Shlok collected her open hair from her neck and brushed his hand on her exposed area slowly placing small kisses on back of her neck... she could not take it anymore and hugged him tightly...
Sulgi sulgi saansein, baheki baheki dhadkan
Maheke maheke shyaam ke saaye, pighle pighle tan mann
He broke the hug slowly and place a kiss on her front exposed area trailing kisses from her neck to each corner of her face... Finally taking her lips into his own...
Aur is pal mein koi nahin hai,Bas ek main hoon, bas ek tum ho
Kuch na kaho, kuch bhi na kaho,Kya kehna hai, kya sunna hai
Mujhko pata hai, tumko pata hai,Samay ka yeh pal tham sa gaya hai
Aur is pal mein koi nahin hai,Bas ek main hoon, bas ek tum ho
Kuch na kaho, kuch bhi na kaho
They both were lost in their moment unknown when the music had stopped...finally broke to inhale some air...
So will you say something even now or not? Shlok smirked...I am still waiting...
Keep waiting...Astha gave him a naughty smile
Ahaan? Don't worry, more you take time to say...more I am going to tease you later...he spoke huskily placing a kiss on her shoulder making her shiver badly...
shyly she moved away and sat on the chair for having dinner...
Made one plate for them and picked another one...Shlok held her hand...
Astha looked questioningly...
Ek sath khana kane se pyar badta hai...he smiled pulling his chair closer to her, taking the spoon and feeding her...
Are you going to feed me or I will have wait since you finish? Shlok smiled feeding Astha...
Shlok actually...she hesitated...
What? He held her hand having spoon and put into his mouth...Astha immediately pulled her hand lowering her eyes...
Thu... Thu... Thu... Shlok threw the food of his mouth as soon as he took it. Astha it's too salty and you are eating it?
Because you cooked it for me for the first time...Astha caressed his face...Shlok you did it for me, that's most important...not how its taste is...saying she placed her lips on his...
Ok, I will try to improve it...saying Astha stood up taking the food and improved it a bit making it eatable
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Yaar I am fed up...ye astha pta nahi kis mitti ki bani hai... I am not able to handle it anymore... She never says she loves me... shlok was shouting in frustration in front of Varun... who was laughing at his condition. Astha was always with Shlok only, both sharing each day , each moment but Shlok was trying hard to make her confess...but all in vain...
When Gauri too came there with Atsha...
Hey what are you talking about? She asked...
Nothing yaar, wahi shlok ka roz k drama... Varun folded his hands in front of Astha... Astha meri maa...ek baar isse keh de you love him...aur ye hamari jaan chode...
Astha smiled at Varun. Varun, I have cried for one month... ab itna to banta hi hai...and all were laughing except Shlok who was holding Astha's hand tightly removing his frustration...
When Gauri's phone rang...
Ji..ji Mom, ya, I will don't worry, yes, I will get you courier today... Thanks a lot mom...
Who was it ? Varun asked...
You mom... she smiled...tomorrow is karwa chauth and she wants me to keep fast for you, as we are engaged now...she has sent sargi for me...
Good... He smiled... So sweet of you...
Karwa chauth...Shlok thought... I am sure Astha will keep fast for me... ab dekhta hun how will she not confess tomorrow... Wait Astha...your game is over now. He smiled thinking to himself...
Hey liar, when did you propose me and when did I say yes? Astha shouted...
Didn't I told, I love you...
You just told and didn't ask me...
Shut up... He brushed off...I don't need your permission, when I know you belong to me only... Shlok chided her...now come and let's cut cake...he held his hand taking her to table...Shlok tried to pick knife but due to bandages, he could not Astha picked the knife...held his hand and both cut the cake feeding each other...while others hugged them, soon Astha's shyness was gone and they all were feeding cake to each other...
and astha telling her plan to tease shlok to gauri and swathi is nice
like gauri and shlok part
and shlok surprise is wonderful... finally he became a cook in her love😆
nice song👏
loved shlok and varad part.. shlok fed up😆
the Karwa chauth part is good
so shlok is planning to make hr confess on that day😃
continue soon
and very sorry for the late
awww🤗
occupied my place😛
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