Hi,
I usually don't read other author's work due to the fear that unconsciously I may end up using the idea. But I am missing advay and chandhini a lot and I want to read their original story. Someone recommended you and here, I am :)
So coming to the first chapter. I agree that advay oozed sensuality and certain animal magnetism. The character you have depicted so far really matches it. Hmm so he is hungry and need to be fed but will it be chandhini or someone else in Allahabad who will first face it. I am excited to see!!!
I am interested in his and chandhini's first meeting. Please, keep up the rawness of the character, don't mellow it down.
I am not sure about the level of hotness this story will bring. I prefer males who have ''normal'' ,for lack of better word, sexual desires but I guess all sort of tastes do exist out there. And Advay he never had normal tastes, that was clear from that hand scene.
But my question is will chandhini like it? I mean what I have understood from my research is that human desires are based upon the experiences. Chandhini is virgin and inexperienced, she won't know her likes and dislikes until she has tried it and sometime a person exposed to certain things will behave only in that way like with christen gray. He was exposed to a dom and for him that became a norm. I hope that you will explain if Chandhini is actually okay with it. What if it becomes too much to handle. Sometime even normal relationships are too much to handle particularly if emotions are involved.
At the end, I would like to say, please update regularly. I know I am the last person who should be asking this since I am irregular myself but real life do become hectic. So, pen it all down, the rough ideas and then, you can add on things later on.
P.s. if you need a beta reader, I am always available😳
Edited by .Ashleydevlin. - 7 years ago
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