The Ring (ff) new chapter updated in pg 12

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It was a long day for Chandni the engagement was a tedious affair, with the innumerable rituals being performed throughout the day she just wanted to slump on her bed and fall asleep. She looked at the ring on her finger it was too big for her ring finger. What more could have been expected from Arnav Singh Raizada. He had made it quite clear that had it not been his parents' dying wish he would never have married someone like her. The unsized ring was a proof that he hardly cared about her comforts and preferences. She sighed a little and her eyes caught sight of their photograph before he left for London.They were smiling in all their childish innocence, it was Veer who had insisted that he would click the picture. The happier version of Advay or her Dev, the happy sixteen year old who was a friend, philosopher and guide to the eight year old Chandni. There were times when she wished that time would have been frozen and they would remain in their childhood forever, but Chandni knew it was not possible for Advay to remain Dev after losing his parents and being displaced to a foreign land. With the passage of time she realised that people are bound to change due to unavoidable circustances and Dev was a happy memory for her with no connection to Advay whom she had met after fourteen long years. Had it not been for her baba's health she would not have thought of marrying Advay, ever since she had agreed to the wedding his health had drastically improved. With these thoughts looming over her mind Chandni leaned over her favourite window and stared at the ever beautiful banks of river Ganga.
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The Ring (chapter 2)
The ring on his finger was too tight and when he tried to take it off it inflicted a sharp pain on his finger. 'Damn' he cursed, the ring was almost stuck with him forever. 'The Vasishth's only know how to adorn their daughter' he blurted gulping his neat whiskey that burned down his throat. The burning sensation made him recall the events of the day and his mind replayed the image of the woman clad in red ascending from the stairs. He was irritated by the thought, it was hard to forget the waves of emotions that splurge across his body when he caught her sight. He had met her twice before the engagement and the first thing he noticed was how young and fragile she looked and secondly she completely rebuked his bearded rugged look. But this evening he just could not stop staring at her, the long tresses, her illuminating earrings, the unique way in which the saree was draped around her and unknowingly his eyes went a little lower to the delicate chain around her creamy waist. He wanted to run his fingers...he had been in complete rage when he came out of his trance. Such was his anger that he almost crushed her fingers during the ring ceremony, it was only her soft cry that made him realise what he had done. While recollecting the events of the day one thing was clear to Advay that even Chandni was equally or more unhappy with their upcoming wedding. A slow rage and alcohol overtook his whole being. He wanted answers from her, why had she agreed to marry him, she could have easily rejected. His coast was clear it was his parents dying wish and since he never believed in finding a special one he thought this marriage to be a rational solution. But he wanted answers from her, after gulping his last shot he stormed out of the house.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice update
Please continue in this thread
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice update.
Continue soon please.
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The Ring ( chapter 3)

He roared his Harley towards the Haveli and in no time he was staring at that one particular room from a safe distance. The bright lights and the hustle and bustle of people inside the haveli was a clear indication that the celebration continued even after the engagement ceremony. 'You must be really drunk' he chided himself, for a moment he thought of quitely returning, he was a misfit among them with his rough leather jacket and suburban boots. The sleek and tidy Dev who had come to the haveli in the early part of the day was the future son in law they adored. They would cringe at this tough and aloof Advay, a part of him ached at the thought that amongst 'they' there was also 'her', the moment he remembered her anger triggered through his body making him rush towards her house to seek answers.
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Sweet update
Please continue
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The Ring (chapter 4)

This was a bad idea he thought, how would she react on seeing him at her window? Why was he here in the first place he had just forgotten. At this moment he knew had made the most stupid decision of his life, he could have simply called her over the phone, fix a meeting and throw his queries on her face. What made him come here? Then he realised the factors that led to his stupidity. Firstly, her indifference towards his high handedness, secondly the subtle hint of hurt in her eyes during the rarest of times when they had eye contact that hurt which made him go weak on his knees. He knew she was not happy with this marriage but why do was she still going forward with it. Did she hope that her old Dev would eventually surface, it made him irritable to confront to his own self that at times he was jealous of the old Dev because she adored him. 'No' he had to clarify certain things, so he stood in front of her large window his eyes searching for her and as the delicate fingers pulled the curtain their eyes met.
For a moment Chandni thought she was dreaming, those dreadful eyes with pools of emotions most of them to complex to understand, when she opened her mouth to speak his large palms covered it.
'You can't be here?' She blurted.
'I know' he replied with his regular ease. He took her hand and started stroking her fingers, touching the engagement ring on her index fingers he smirked a little.
'Sorry, about the ring will get of your size', he said in his husky voice gently stroking her fingers to his lips. She was stupefied, never had they talked to each other for so long. In the short encounters they had he was mostly indifferent. Of course he had grabbed her towards him off guard in several occasions but they were normally to save her from small accidents. She tried snatching her fingers from his grasp but he grabbed her arms and pulled her hard towards him,
'Please let me go', she begged tearfully.
' Why did you agree to this marriage Chandni' He growled.
She struggled to free himself and his grasp tightened.
'Jiji are you there', there was a sharp knock on the door.


To be continued 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
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wow I am loving this so much.
Do continue soon please.
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Nice update
So he has come to clarify things
Please continue
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Nice updates. Waiting for the next

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