The Ring (ff) new chapter updated in pg 12 - Page 2

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Posted: 8 years ago
#11
Great start. Pls post next chapter soon.
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The Ring (chapter 5)

'Jiji, where are you its us please open the door' she could almost feel her sisters' impatience.
' Coming' she managed to call out somehow, in the mean time she realised the sharp knock had led to her clasping his jacket tightly and he was breathing heavily on her neck. Somehow, there was a certain vulnerability in the way he was holding her like a schoolboy too stubborn to let go off his favourite toy. Chandni felt a sudden warmth for him, very slowly she took his hand and disentangled herself from his tight grip. When he slowly opened his eyes quietly led the way to her changing room.
'Stay here till they leave and please be quiet' she whispered. She was about to go when her wrist was tightly grasped and in no time she was clinging to the human wall.
'I will be waiting for your answers Chandni', he warned her in his dangerously husky voice.
She ran to open the door only to find two annoyed faces staring back at her.
' Why did you open so late Jiji?' They were rambling and before she knew it her little sisters' had already climbed on her bed.
'Hey bholenath' was all she could say to herself they were here for a sleepover and Advay was behind the curtains so basically she had three self invited guests in her room only her Bholenath could take her out of this bizzare situation.

To be continued 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#13
Very nice ... loved it.. waiting for the next update
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Posted: 8 years ago
#14
Wow that was another wonderful update.
Loved it so much.
Continue soon.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Short and sweet update
He is trapped in her room with the sisters
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Eagerly waiting for the next part.
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It was a green field stretched till the eyes could see and there it met with the blue sky at a distance a brook gurgled while the yellow wild flowers danced with the breeze. He saw his mother smiling warmly from the distance whereas his father and little brother laughingly played football, 'Dev' he heard his mother's melodious voice...
He opened his eyes to meet with those warm but resolute orbs eagerly waiting for his response. She was kneeling next to him, her hand on his arms, for a moment he felt the familiar warmth of his dream gushing through his body. The first rays of the sun radiated through her concerned face the rays were also a reminder of his brashness the other night. Perhaps their close proximity or perhaps the alcohol losing its effect he could not figure out what it was but he felt extremely embarrassed. As though she understood she took his hands and guided him out of the room. Her sisters were sleeping soundly on her bed as they hurried passed the stairs he realised that the whole haveli was under deep slumber after the commotion of the other day. Their hands were still clasped when they reached the gate. He opened his mouth many times but no words escaped.
'Please hurry up and leave I can not even imagine what will happen if anyone sees us here at this moment' she said in a slightly irritable tone.
'But aren't we suppose to be fiancee's' he regretted his words immediately.
' Your impossible Advay Singh Raizada', saying this she shot a hurtful glance.
He inhaled the fresh morning air along with a familiar wisp of sandalwood and jasmine it was then that he realised she had draped her shawl around him while he was sleeping behind her curtains. He caressed the pashmina and it reminded him of her soft skin. This girl was his doom he just could not accept it.

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wow loved the update so much.
This is so captivating.
Continue soon.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#19
Smashing update
Loved it
Please continue
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Posted: 8 years ago
#20
Read all chapters at once
Wonderful story
Please continue soon

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