FS- [ Punishing Her Demons ] - AniRi- ft Obros-On Track: UPDATE pg4

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FS - Punishing Her Demons


"Shivaay, iss waqt?" Anika made a puppy face.

Shivaay looked at her. "Alright. I will stay!"

Anika frowned. "What about those clients?"

"They can go back. I don't care." He went closer, "my wife is my priority."

" Aapka dimaag phir gaya hai. Chup chaap jaaiye, MATLAB itni Badi party rakhi his deal ke liye, usse hi haath she phisalne denge? Aap aadmi hai yaan..

"Paagal ho kya tum. Tum Ne hi toh.."

"Shivaay mujhe bigaadiye mat aur jaaiye jaldi..." Anika pushed her husband back into their room from poolside.

"Jaldi change kariye!"

"Anika par..

" Shivaay" she folded her hands like a strict principal.

"You are mad totally mad!" He said and disappeared. "Acche khaase mood ka chop kar Diya!" She smiled when she hear him whisper that.

She quickly helped him with the coat, while he fixed his hair. While he continued combing his hair she ran about the room gathering his phone's charger, his file, his medicine and so on.

He smiled through the mirror.

"O mere Rajesh Khanna , Baal ban gaye toh jaayenge aap.?"

He laughed. While she went closer and dusted his coat despite no dust.

"Dawaai le le na, aur...

" phaunch ke phone karna. Gussa mat karna. Anything else?" He smiled.

She blushed nodding in a no.

"Kabhi Kabhi mujhe aisa lagta hai ki main biwi hoon aur tum pati!" He spoke as they moved down the rear staircase.

"Acha listen jaldi she party wrap kara Lena aur..guests.."

"Pata hai pata hai!"

He smiled. "OK then."

"Rudra aur Bhavya nahi dikh rahe?" She asked him, "aapne dehka unhe?"

He inched closer and whispered in her ears," Long drive !"

"Iss waqt?" She asked baffled

He shook his head. "Anika! They wanted to spend sometime together so.."

"Ooo. " she said understanding.

He chuckled, she blushed hitting him on the shoulder.

"Now. Go. Main aur Gauri Sab sambhaalenge." She said.

"Tum dono behen ho hi itni Kamal.."

She gave a cute smile at that. "WO toh hai.." She waved as he left.

"Ab ye Gauri kahan hai?" Anika sighed to herself.

Anika instructed the servants to wrap up quickly, the guests had almost begun to dwindle.

She went back to her room and got her phone. She called Gauri. She din't pick up.

Maybe she was downstairs. She decided to dial once more but her phone switched off. Frustrated she lightly threw her phone on the bed.

"Aaj kal ke phone, ek call lagao nahi ki tu-tu-aur-band. Shivaay ka phone pe gussa jaayas hai!" She spoke to herself reaching down. Omkara had left two hours back to receive a few of his German clients. He said he would only return in the wee hours of the morning. Great, she and Gauri could spend some Girls Time Together, Anika thought excitedly.


She looked for Gauri as she greeted the guests and thanked them for being a part of the celebration.

Almost everyone had left. The servants were all outside wrapping up the dinner and taking the chairs in the lawn back to the garage.

Anika decided to check on Gauri in her room. She walked down the corridor. "Shaayad thak gayi hogi...isliye..pehle hi yeh kapde...pasta nahi Uss zammane ki heroine kaise pehnaa kart thii inhe.;" she murmured to herself.

As she got close to Omkara-Gauri's room she heard certain noises. "Gauri.." She ran wondering what had caused the sounds. Perhaps something had fallen due to Gauri's clumsiness.

The room was dimly lit. But what Anika saw made her eyes go wide and her heart skipped a beat. There Gauri was on the bed and a man above her, trying to shut her mouth with his hand . Gauri was pushing away his other hand and struggling to be free. The two hadn't noticed her.

Anika panicked and screamed. The man looked at her shocked. Gauri's eyes grew wide as tears continued to flow.

The man charged towards Anika, Gauri saw in shock.

Anika quickly grabbed the first thing she found- a vase. She hit it on the man's head. "Himmat kaise hui teri..!" She spoke.Nothing happened. He groaned and caught Anika's hair, her bun opened.
She struggled and slapped the man with her free hand. The man enraged pulled Anika closer and tried to get a grip on her hand.

"Jiji!" Gauri panicked scrambling out of bed and looking around for something like a rod.

"Chod!" Anika screamed in pain.

He laughed. "Buy one get one free huh?"

Gauri looked at the curtain rod. She had removed the curtains the previous day. Thanks to Omkara. But due to her height, even on the stool she couldn't reach and put the rod back up. So the rod was left aside on the ground.

She quickly picked it up.

Anika raised her knee to hit the man. The man moved and missed it. She tried hitting her elbow into his face. That didn't work as well. Enraged the man twisted her hand behind causing Anika to be ushered closer to the man. Anika felt disgusted.

Suddenly the man zoned out. Gauri had struck his head from behind. In a mad rush the man turned and charged towards Gauri she hurriedly stepped backwards. Anika looked at the scene wide eyed, catching her breath.

But before the man could reach Gauri he collapsed. Gauri let out a sigh and fell to the floor crying. Anika at once made it across to the room to her."Gauri ...Gauri..." She hugged her and cupped her cheek. "Tu atu think hain naa!" Gauri held her hands and hugged her nodding.

"Jiji aap theek hain naa?" She asked concerned.

Anika nodded and crid hugging her. The two looked at the fallen man in disgust. They sat their like that hugging each other and sinking in, all that had happened in a few minutes. Aniak repeatedly kept asking Gauri if she was alright.

Anika quickly wiped her tears and then Gauri's. "Mujhe bata tera phone kahan hai." Gauri pointed to the pieces of the broken phone.

Anika sighed, in despair.

"Mera phone room mein hain." She spoke tensed.

"Yaahan se chaliye please." Gauri pleaded

"Magar ye ...utth ...gaya ...toh..'

Gauri looked around tensed. Then suddenly her face lit up. " Basement. "

She walked up to the statue and twisted it and turned the lamp upside down. A hole opened up. Anika looked on shocked.

"Isse yahan daal dete hain." Gauri suggested.

Anika nodded simply still astounded at the little secret opening.

The two pushed the man inside.

"Bade Bhaiya khana hai?" Gauri asked.

"WO..meeting ke liye gaye hain!" Anika replied tensed.

Gauri's eyes couldnt stop watering.

Anika held her hand,and went closer. Wiping Gauri's tears she spoke, "Main hoon naa saath, kuch nahi hoga."

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Part 2-
Gauri's eyes couldnt stop watering.

Anika held her hand,and went closer. Wiping Gauri's tears she spoke, "Main hoon naa saath, kuch nahi hoga."

"Aisa karte hain, tu..pehle...tu change kar phir Sab mil ke theek karte hain. Kuch nahi hoga!" Anika hugged and kissed her forehead.

Gauri walked to her cupboard and quickly removed her clothes and walked to the washroom turning back and giving Anika a glance.

Anika nodded. Once Gauri was gone. Anika knelt down, covering her mouth with her hand. She was afraid, very afraid. What could have happened of she hadn't stepped in.? Tears din't stop. She cried in silence. She could not cry before her. She couldn't make her weak. It was time for her to be her protector. No one could mess with her little Chutki like that. She wiped her tears, her eyes bloodshot. She would make sure the man was punished. She wiped her tears and stood up waiting for Gauri.

Gauri washed her face with trembling hands. She had gone through worse in life. But what happened today had left her like a tree uprooted. She had perhaps thought her fights were over and her life was all sunshine. At time when you think your life is all but a bed of roses, it surprises you by revealing its thorns. She turned on the tap and cried. What if Anika hadn't come in? She cried. What if that man did something to Anika? She would have died, alive. She looked at her hands, the very hands that had hit the man with the rod.She trembled. When had she become so weak? Quickly washing her self and changing into fresh clothing she stepped out. Staying alone for a few minutes also, tortured her. She got to Anika's side and hugged her. Anika hushed her saying as long as she was alive nothing could happen to her. She was her mother figure. At times of the hardest despair a child could only turn to one person, mother. Anika was Gauri's everything. She had always been her saviour. Be it from those brat kids who would pull her hair at orphanage or the warden who would mistreat her or now be it this man not less than a demon.


They quickly moved to Anika's room. Anika quickly kept her phone for charging and changed out of the uncomfortable dress. She slammed her eyes shut remembering how the man had pulled her close. Her blood was boiling. She could just imagine what Gauri must be feeling.


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"Out of reach!" Anika said in panic as she dialed Shivaay's number for the fourth time.

She tried Om's number again. "Switched Off!" She announced yet again.

Gauri looked tensed.

"Rudra ko milati hoon " Anika said in little hope.
"Nahi uthaya!" She said annoyed.

"Bahvya?" Gauri suggested.

Anika tried. She nodded in negative.

Gauri sat on the bed tensed.

"Chal" Anika said extending her hand.

Gauri looked up at her questioningly.

"Hum baith ke Rone waalon mein se nahi hai, uth ke ladne waalon mein se hain. "

Gauri looked aside.

Anika knelt before her. " Jo Chutki, ek poore gaaon se lad sakti hai, WO ek ghatiya insaan se dar nahi sakti! Haina?"

Gauri nodded and held her hand they walked down.

The sat waiting for the members of the family to return. Calling the police wasn't an option as they knew that he would escape in luxury.
They had tried seeking help from the Women's Helpline. On repeat they were told the line was busy. For what good an emergency helpline was?

Khanna appeared from no where to inform Anika that the lawn had been cleared. Anika had almost forgotten he was there.

"Khanna Ji!" She addressed him relieved.

"Ma'am all ok?" He asked switching his galnce between the drained faces of the sisters.

Anika gulps and briefly tells him how the actor tried to assault her. Gauri looks up when Anika puts herself in narrating the events. She also informs him how they had pushed his unconscious body into the hole.

Khanna looks seriously. He suggests to tie up the man until Shivaay came back, lest the man should run away or cause trouble. Anika agrees.
"Lekin hum wahaan jaayenge kaise?"

"Basement se ek aur raasta hai!" Gauri informed.

The three of them walked in the dark and reached the spot. The man was still unconscious. Khaana quickly tied up his hands and legs and pasted a tape over his mouth.

Gauri and Anika stared at him in disgust almost hugging each other.
Khaana saw them and gave the man a disgusted stare. "Ma'am chaliye." He said making way for the two women.

While Anika and Gauri sat waiting, Khanna stood all the while a little distance away. Anika looked at him gratefully.

An hour flew by. The women were lost in worlds of their own thoughts.

Khanna suggested them to go and rest upstairs he would be around and notify them.

Anika thought that was best looking at Gauri dwindled of all energy.
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P.S
Would love to have a respond from your side.
Hope the above two parts were liked.
This is more of writing on impulse then planned writing.
Looking forward to a response.
Edited by Khidki - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Amazing...im so glad that gauri is safe and nothing happend to her...love aniri bonding...cant wait to see how the obros react to the entire situation..
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Posted: 7 years ago
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awesome update yar...
Totally loved it
They both are being strong and fighting for themselves
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Posted: 7 years ago
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BEautifully written
Having Anika and Gauri fighting together against that beast was sooo soothing... Loved that Khanna came up with the idea to tie that bas***d down.


Waiting for ShivKara and their reaction
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: nikki-73

Amazing...im so glad that gauri is safe and nothing happend to her...love aniri bonding...cant wait to see how the obros react to the entire situation..


Thank You Nikki?
Happy to get a response😊

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: AYUSHIVISHU

awesome update yar...

Totally loved it
They both are being strong and fighting for themselves


Thank You Aparna!
Seeing you after so long!😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
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wow so eagerly waiting for next part
i hope every person in oberio household kick that bas***d.
please do continue
bye sumi
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Posted: 7 years ago
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What a great story !! 👏 Loved the way they fought ! I would've loved it if it was shown like this in the show wonder how shivOm will react to all that ! Update soon 🤗
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Just loved this story. Waiting excitingly for Shivoms reaction. Khidki just love ur stories. Btw can I know ur real name? Continue soon😳

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