FS- [ Punishing Her Demons ] - AniRi- ft Obros-On Track: UPDATE pg4 - Page 3

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Note -
This was an unplanned and impulse driven story. Was supposed to be a two shot but I felt the need of another shot.

I had written the next part but was not half convinced myself. So I am reconstructing it. Will try posting it soon.

In the meanwhile, here is a lovely banner.

I absolutely love the banner. Hope you do as well!


https://i.imgur.com/VZhxpuB.gif

Banner Credit- rai-kishori (FFG)

Love how she made this banner with a few pics I provided.

The banner symbolising Gauri's anger and disgust & Anika's pain concern and determination to punish the one who dared to cause harm to her sister!



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Posted: 7 years ago
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Please update soon dear... Egarly waiting... .
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Cant wait for the next part *_*
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Part 3-

"Shut Up Rudra! Aise itni jor se koi aisi baatein karta hai kya!" Bhavya scolded Rudra as the entered the Mansion. The house was unusually silent.

Rudra chuckled and looked around. "Hum galat ghar mein aa gaye kya? Itna sanaata kyun hai? " he peeped around looking for a trace of a human.

"Kuch bhi MATLAB...bakwaas..." Bhavya stopped mid way as Khanna walked up to them.

"Oye Bhaiya ke Saiyaa, Sab kahan hain?" Rudra asked putting his hand over Khanna's shoulder, getting a glare from his wife for the special name he took.

"WO.." Khanna hesitated.

"Khanna Ji sab theek toh hain naa?" Bhavya had sensed something wrong studying his face and hearing his hesitant voice. Her professional practice had taught her much about body language and reading expressions and listening to what was not said.

Rudra pulled away his hand, sensing something serious.

Khaanna briefly informed them about the attack on sisters by the actor.

"What!?" Bhavya exclaimed shocked.

"Bhaiya aur O kahana hai? Bhaabhiyan Kahaan hain? " Rudra asked looking around his face serious.

"Omkara sir ab tak laute nahi aur Shivaay sir meeting pe gaye hain!" Khanna informed looking at the floor.

"Arey toh unko bulaaya kyun nahi. Phone do." Rudra spoke frustrated. Rudra and Bhavya had left their phones at home, to get away some personal time sans disturbance. Bhavya however din't like the fact that Rudra was always less in the moment and more on SnapChat and Instagram.

"Tab se try kar raha hoon. Shivaay Sir ka phone unreachable hai aur Omkara sir ka switched off. Aap dono ka bhi try kiya thaa, aap logne uthaya nahi !" Khanna spoke out his helplessness.

Rudra's eyes went wide. "Bhaabhiyaan kahan hai?"

"Wo Abhimanyu kahan hain?" Bhavya asked at the same time.

"Room mein. Usse humne basement mein band kar rakha hai, hosh mein nahi hai!" Informed Khanna.

Rudra didn't wait to listen to about the whereabouts of the man. The moment he knew where his Bhaabhis were, he had sprang into action and was running up the stairs.

Bhavya and Khanna followed.

"Bhaabhi!" He whispered as he saw Anika and Gauri sitting side by side, holding each other's hand.

"Rudra!" Anika exclaimed getting up. At once Rudra was holding her hands. "Aap theek hain naa?" Soon he extended another hand to Gauri who was now standing next to Anika. "Chulbul Bhaabhi!?"

"Himat kaise hui uss insaan ki!" Rudra spoke angrily.

Gauri had never seen Rudra like that, save the day when Shivaay was leaving the Oberoi house.

"Rudra! " Anika held his hand. "Rudra!"

"Usse main nahi chodne wala.." He spoke with a voice that was ready to declare war.

"Rudra is waqt, josh nahi Josh she kaam Lena hai." Bhavya quickly hugged the two women. "Aap log theek hain naa?" Anika nodded.

"Bhavya, usne Bhaabhi ke saath badtameezi karne ki koshish ki. " Rudra looked at her angrily.

"I know. Par usse saza aise nahi de sakte jaise aap soch rahe hain. He is a celebrity, he has power, wo surf Bhaabhis ko nahi iss parivaar ki izat pe ..."

There was a commotion downstairs. The four of then rushed downstairs. It was the actor's wife. "Mere husband kahan hain?"

Bhavya went forward smiling, "Arre Mitali Ji, aap yahan..any problem?"

"Mere husband kahan hain?"

"WO..WO toh kab ke nikal gaye thee." Bhavya informed pretending to be baffled. While Rudra stared still with boiling blood in his veins. Anika kept a straight face and quickly walked back, to the guest room with Gauri.

"Mrs Bhavya, let me inform you, Unke phone ki location aapka mansion hai." The wife stared at the woman.

"Mitali Ji, I don't know. But I m sure he left, hain naa Khanna Ji?"

Khanna nodded.
"Agar kal subha tak wo nahi mile, toj aap Oberois ko kya kya jhalena padega, you have no clue."

"Mitali Ji, aap toh dhamki pe utar aai. Hum keh rage hain naa, WO yahan nahi hai!" Bhavya maintained her cordial tone.

" Arre wo yahan nahi hain naa. koi heera to hai nahi wo jo hum usse , chupa ke baithenge. " Rudra cut in the conversation sharply. "Now, please, we have other work, if you'd help yourself out."

Bhavya stared at Rudra disappointed by his behavior.

Mitali glared at him and left after murmuring a few warnings.

"Yeh kaise baat kiya aapne, unhe shak ho jata toh,"

"I don't care. In fact main toh kehta hoon aide aadmi ko beech sadak mein sable saamne maarna chaiye. "

"Rudra, aap ye bhul rahe hain, ki agar uss aadmi ko saaza milegi toh doosri ore Baabhiyon ki izat pe bhi ungliyaan uthengi. Yeh duniya kasoor pehle aurat ka samajti hai. Aur jitne log uss Abhimanyun ke fan hai, usse apna bhagwan samjte hain, wo sab ungli bhaabhi pe uthaaenge. "

Rudra stated in shock. He hadn't thought of so far.

Anika who had been walking back from the kitchen to the room with a jug filled with water., heard that. She hurriedly went to the room.

Shivaayreached home in a hurry. He had drove like crazy when he had seen so many missed calls once he was in range of network. He had then read the message to come soon. He wondered what had happened.

"Rudra , Bhavya, tum log theek ho? What happened?"

Rudra stared up at his face, clearly upset at him.

"Rudra!?"

"Bhaiya WO..."

Shivaay couldn't understand the aloofness in Rudra's expression and silence.

"Anika, Gauri ,Om Sab kahan hain? Sab theek hain naa? Kya hua? Will you both sya something!"

"Aapko garh pe hona chaiye that bahiya. Yeh party aapne rakhi thii na, toh aapko yahan hona chaiye thaa. "

"Look I don't understand. What happened? Aur sab kahan gain?" He looked around.

Bhavya finally got the courage and explained how Abhimanyun had attacked Anika and Gauri has intervened, resulting in a quarrel. Of course that version was what Rudra and Bhavya had been told by Khanna. The same version Anika had told Khanna.

Shivaay stepped back and his eyes were wide open in shock. He was making it to the stairs up to his room, when Bhavya informed that the sisters were in the guest room.

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P.S

Firstly,
I had an idea about this which I forgot amidst all the siyaapa in my life. But I am with a mission to complete everything here. A task but I m on it.
Secondly,
I would love if another writer would collaborate with me on this or a reader can discuss the plot with me, because I feel I m heading to a block.

Lastly,
Please do leave your feedbacks, suggestions and thoughts might help me sort the track out in my head.

Thank You😳


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Posted: 7 years ago
#25
Hi Annika, I really love your work and I am so glad that you have decided to complete all your stories. I think that you need to complete all the existing works before starting a new one. If you get a new idea pen it down but don't post it. I think somehow that will help you in your mission.
About discussing plot, you can PM me for it. Although I can't guarantee the best solution since I am currently busy with my studies as well as I am not a writer. I have not written anything except for some reviews. But I will try my best to help you to sort it out.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#26
Awesome update dear
Loved it..
Very well written
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Posted: 7 years ago
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wow the great SSO is back
please do continue
bye sumi
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Posted: 7 years ago
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I haven't read a take on this yet, so I'm liking it
Loving Anika in a fierce mode
I can only imagine what they're all going to do to him

Waiting for more 😃

Loads of Love,
- Sims 🤗

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