Three Shot - Shivika -|| Chaahat || Part 1,2&3 on page 1[COMPLETED - Page 3

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: palakdeepkaur29

This was just sooo beautiful. Annika's smile had me in tears and say awww at the same time.
Shivaay coming face to face with the important facts of his life was also well written.
And Omkara's Shayari was the best 👏



Thank You!
So happy you liked the part 2 as well!
I did make an effort for that shaayri but it din't come then I left it and it striked me when I was in class!!😆
Thank you for your lovely comment!😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
#22
gosh!!! that quote was so beautiful. loved it so much. highlight of second update for me.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: minamma

Aawww

Finally realisation
So cute shivika


Thank You Dear!
Part 3 is up! Hope you like that as well!
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Posted: 7 years ago
#24
awesome story yar. ...
it was beautiful...
loved the confession scene so much...it was simple and sweet
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Now that it's complete I'm gonna read it...
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: vivacious_gurl

Now that it's complete I'm gonna read it...


Don't blame you for it Di!😆(Hides face)
😃
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Beautifully written. Loved it...the gradual build up.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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You had a lovely time writing this, I had a lovely time reading this!!! It was simple and beautiful. It was so elegant. I was smiling the whole time while reading it. Somebody might've even thought that am I maniac to smile like a joker in a maths class(*actually this was my first awesome maths class b'coz I was reading it at that time* *or else, maths sucks*). I'm so incompetent in describing what I feel usually and right now, I'm cursing myself, that I cannot describe how wonderful I'm feeling!!
The Annika, was so so so (what shud I say, whatever I will say will be less). The Shivaay, was so so so (u know na how bad I'm at expressing.) The embrace was the best. This was such a good one. As already the CVs have done OMM of the show, I'm not hooked with it, but this work, just delighted me to an invaluable extent. Plz do keep writing more of these awesome works.
Love,
Abhi
P.s. Rudra smiled widely, "How are you still single?"
^^ This was my most favourite line from my most favourite person ;)
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Posted: 7 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: jaansahiba

You had a lovely time writing this, I had a lovely time reading this!!! It was simple and beautiful. It was so elegant. I was smiling the whole time while reading it. Somebody might've even thought that am I maniac to smile like a joker in a maths class(*actually this was my first awesome maths class b'coz I was reading it at that time* *or else, maths sucks*). I'm so incompetent in describing what I feel usually and right now, I'm cursing myself, that I cannot describe how wonderful I'm feeling!!

The Annika, was so so so (what shud I say, whatever I will say will be less). The Shivaay, was so so so (u know na how bad I'm at expressing.) The embrace was the best. This was such a good one. As already the CVs have done OMM of the show, I'm not hooked with it, but this work, just delighted me to an invaluable extent. Plz do keep writing more of these awesome works.
Love,
Abhi
P.s. Rudra smiled widely, "How are you still single?"
^^ This was my most favourite line from my most favourite person ;)


Haha Abhi!
Glad you loved it as much as I did!
Honestly even I Haven't been much interest in IB ever since the KRR track! The first track that I don'tlook forward to and am praying end soons!
Happy to hear that!
Thanks for your lovely comment! :)

ETA-
I love that Ruddy's one line as well!!😃
Edited by Khidki - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#30
amazing story annika,
just beautiful, he want her to b like herself with him too,, its was so awww.
Edited by Blink_Cat - 7 years ago

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