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Priyaarora570

@Priyaarora570

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Posted: 7 years ago

#11

Oh my god! You have described everything so beautifully that I am mesmerized. Also I love your twist and turn tale's idea. It is working very well.

Waiting for the next update eagerly to know how Shivaay reacts.

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abhilasha

@jaansahiba

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Posted: 7 years ago

#12

That was so beautiful...

I really loved the magic you played with the words.

Annika loves Shivaay, but the more happier thing is that she has guarded her emotions so well. Annika being an exception for Shivaay was so good. But I loved it when Shivaay noticed the way how she was good- mannerly different with his brothers, the galib book and the watch acting as an icing on the cake. And I loved it how dadi asked Annika for the jalebis. And thank u so much fo not having tia as shivaay's fiance here. Oh god, I have no other word except love for everything in your story. But the best thing that took my breath away was the bullet thing. Oh my mata! That was so awesome to sum it up with the story. Plzzz give us the update tonight... Plzzz. Weekend without Shivika sucks:(. And if possible pm me.

Love,

Abhi

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1012277

Hibernated

Posted: 7 years ago

#13

An amazing start, Anni. So beautifully written. Loved it. Continue soon please. Eagerly waiting. 😳

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Khidki

@Khidki

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+ 4

Posted: 7 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: Priyaarora570
Oh my god! You have described everything so beautifully that I am mesmerized. Also I love your twist and turn tale's idea. It is working very well.
Waiting for the next update eagerly to know how Shivaay reacts.

Thank You!!⭐️

Honestly, I m enjoying it too!!! Once all stories are wrapped up will put up a thread for a Reader-Writer discussion!!

Yes updating shortly😳

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Khidki

@Khidki

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+ 4

Posted: 7 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: jaansahiba
That was so beautiful...
I really loved the magic you played with the words.
Annika loves Shivaay, but the more happier thing is that she has guarded her emotions so well. Annika being an exception for Shivaay was so good. But I loved it when Shivaay noticed the way how she was good- mannerly different with his brothers, the galib book and the watch acting as an icing on the cake. And I loved it how dadi asked Annika for the jalebis. And thank u so much fo not having tia as shivaay's fiance here. Oh god, I have no other word except love for everything in your story. But the best thing that took my breath away was the bullet thing. Oh my mata! That was so awesome to sum it up with the story. Plzzz give us the update tonight... Plzzz. Weekend without Shivika sucks:(. And if possible pm me.
Love,
Abhi

Thank you so much for that lovely comment!

My efforts totally paid off!

I had an amazing time writing this story, so I m very Happy that you and other readers are enjoying it!

I wanted something simple and yet heart-felf so I write it myself: p

The second part is updated.

The last part will be updated tomorrow!😃

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Khidki

@Khidki

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+ 4

Posted: 7 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: Gurveen
Amazing story
Anika is in love with Shivay
She infact saved him from being shot
Maybe this is start of their love story
Update soon please

Yes indeed she is!

Or maybe a start to their togetherness!? ;)

Part 2 updated😳