T & T Tales!(Shivika)-Angoothi Ki Nok Par-Completed - Page 5

Originally posted by: --Risha--

Holy Hell woman! Believe it or not but - THIS IS EXACTLY THE ENDING I HAD THOUGHT OF TOO

Them proposing together 😆

This was the only thing I was very sure of. Baaki toh I kept wondering till I just wrote the rest of it.😆

RES for the rest

UnRes

Okay so I had a general idea that this would be the perfect ending, given their takkar kee ishqbaaazi and all but I had literally NO IDEA how I was gonna get there. I have to say this is just perfect. The way you transitioned Shivaay's annoyance/anger at Annika and Rudra to reluctant admiration and finally, full-blown and unabashed love bordering on reverence - just great!

Even I didn't have any idea. At first, I thought I should just jump to the proposal and then continue but that wouldn't leave a lot of creative space for the next writer isliye I kept on thinking of ways to reach that point. I am glad you liked this :)

Its also connecting very well with the first part and the flow has been maintained and youve really kept in mind the characters and how they connect with each other

Somehow, AniOmRu, the bond is very pure. I love them so much😆 <3 I am happy their bond showed.

And all the good things about the piece really shone out in the part where he's seeing their insta posts. Such an Annika thing to not let Shivaay's love go to waste like that. Must say, a very apt way youve used the setting.

I didn't want to let your mehnat of describing the place go waste, lol. Ab Billuji ne itni mehnat ki hai, somebody aught to enjoy.

Also the way they're both so in love at the moments right before tghe proposal that its not even a competition anymore - its just the natural thing to do in that moment and its born out of the love they have for each other. <3

All in all, great job Kriti. Dont think anyone else could've done a better job :)

Originally posted by: SanyaEterna

Both proposing together! Wow I hadn't expected that, it was great!!

Originally posted by: Shriishqbaaz

The Instagram bits were nice. Omru and Anni partied where shivaay was going to propose. Kya ullu banaya bechare shivaay. Ending was good wondering what's next

Originally posted by: elysianights

Reserve for part 2
Unreserved.

Krishi🤗
This was such an amazing part, totally adorable' just the way Annika have been Calling Shivay throughout the story 😆
the way Omru had that date with Annika which Shivaay have so beautifully arranged was amazing beside the Instagram Bits were entertaining. Saumya just to irritate Tudra didn't said a word about him while Rudra as he is become grumpy and started complaining. I just loved this ❤️

Lastly both of them proposing each other at the same time was unexpected;) just loved the twist!
Waiting eagerly for this to continue ❤️

Love,
-Anya.

Originally posted by: AYUSHIVISHU

OMG that was unexpected and awesome...

Both went on knees and proposing each other...

awww that is superb...

The aniomru moments was so adorable

Originally posted by: Rachna.KG

Thank you Thank you Thank you

Wanted to read something which can change my mood and this is perfect. It's so sweet and I am smiling. You all are doing such an amazing effort with this Twist& Turn Tales. Loving it. Please keep writing.

Originally posted by: Nohsin10

Fantastic update

Loved the bonding between aniomru⭐️

Thanks for pm

Originally posted by: virikasri

Wow lovely...Awesome...Update soon