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Originally posted by: rinku95

superb

thanks for pm
continue soon


Thanks Rinku :)
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: jaansahiba

God, black maniac, you nailed it!!

The date bight with the amazing devars was adorable. I really liked the idea of using instagram. And Rudy and Om's captions were so good. And soumya and Rudy fighting was so good. And o have to say, if not a good bodyguard, khannaji would've had definitely made a good cameraman. And Shivaay using the notification bell just for Annika, I was awww... He's so adorable (*okay, sorry Shivaay, I won't call u that*) And Rudy laughing when he gets to know that Shivaay thinks Rudy called him adorable, but when Om said stop it, I'll crash the car, I was literally ROFLing... 🤣. But the end was another story altogether. It was so beautiful when both of them knelt down. Loved it.
Love,
Abhi


Thank you so much Abhi ❤️
Uh, I always mistook Khannaji for a cameraman you see😆
I am glad you liked the Instagram part. Had to think a lot for it.

Oh, the end. My favourite part, it is :D

Glad it made you laugh.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: sosweetsumi

OMG i so want this to happen

hehe these both are adorable
please do continue
bye sumi


Thanks Sumi :) There are so many things we wish could have happened😆
Edited by Black_Maniac - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: ridz13sdqt

This was such an awwdorable part.. so so beautiful.. Shivaay's love for Anika and his admiration for her knows no bounds.. and Anika's selflessness when it comes to him is beyond comprehension ❤️ loved it .. thanks for the PM 😳


Thank you Rida <3 I am happy to see you guys liking it :)
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Posted: 7 years ago
#56
this is something really beautiful
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Angoothi Ki Nok Par!

Written by:

First part:--Risha--

Second part: Black_Maniac (Krishi)

Third part: SanyaEterna (Sanya)

PART 3

Words: 1338

They looked at each, surprise framing their faces. To everyone present around them, they looked like mirror images. Sitting down, she on her right knee and he on his left one, stunning rings in their hands. A platinum band for him, a solitaire for her. Faces pink, eyes narrowed, teeth gritted and lips mumbling non-coherent words.

"What are you doing?" They both whispered to each other together, again.

"What do you mean? Can't you see?" Once again, questions were asked together in hushed tones.

"How dare you propose to me when I am proposing to you!" She said, clearly pissed off.

"What? I did not know that you were going to propose!" He lied.

"Yeah right! I know you knew it and you are, deliberately, sabotaging my proposal!" She said, glaring at him.

"I really had no idea!" He lied again and she rolled her eyes.

"You are Shivaay Singh Oberoi for God's sake! You know everything, don't you?" She asked with a raised eyebrow.

"I do but not always." He said, shrugging.

"Then you shouldn't call yourself the Know-it-all Oberoi!" She said haughtily.

"What? When did I ever call myself that!" He questioned.

"That..you..oh, I call you that." She mumbled to herself.

"Anyways, leave that. Put the ring back, I am proposing to you!" He said, indicating her to put away the ring.

"Really? You expect me to do that? How sexist can you be?" She smirked.

Unknown to them, the guests had started whispering to themselves, wondering what was taking so much time for the couple to propose to each other. Most of them thought that the young couple, in their low tones, were making endless promises of love and respect to each other. Only the family knew what was going between the two people who sitting, in the middle of the dance floor, on their knees, glaring at each other.

"Sexist! Why am I a sexist?" He asked, surprised.

"Oh my God!" She chuckled. "You can't see a woman proposing to a man in the 21st century because you want to safeguard your manliness? Huh? Isn't that sexist?" She said, staring at him.

"I..I..it's not sexist..it's supposed to..to be-

"To be what? Romantic?" She asked.

"I..yes..maybe-

"Fine then!" She said and took her hand back and stood up.

"Annika!" He said, tensed and stood up as well, pocketing the ring. "Listen to me-

"Shivaay! Will you marry me!" She screamed, quickly getting back on her knees and taking out the ring again as Shivaay stood there mortified.

"What-

"Will you marry me Mr Shivaay Singh Oberoi! Will you have the honour of being the husband of Annika?" She asked, smirking away.

The guests chuckled at, what was clearly Annika's plan. To distract Shivaay and propose to him when he wasn't. The media was going to have a field day!

"I would love to!" Shivaay Singh Oberoi suddenly smirked, shocking his beautiful fiancee.

"Wha..what?" She frowned, looking at his grinning face. not believing that he actually said yes!

"I said, I would love to marry you and become Mr Annika!" He said and holding her wrist, slipped the ring in his ring finger as she sat there in surprise.

"Now get up my love, your knee must be hurting!" He said and held her shoulders, helping her to stand on her feet.

"Well, as you can see, I am engaged!" He announced to everyone, while Annika stood there confused and surprised. "I would like to spend some alone time with the woman of my dreams! Everyone, please enjoy the party and shift your focus from us to the light of the party, that is, my parents, Mrs and Mr Shakti Singh Oberoi!"

Everyone clapped and Shivaay took Annika's hand in his and walked out into the garden.

"What was that?" Annika asked as they reached the garden.

"What?" Shivaay asked, admiring his new ring.

"How did...why did...how-

"Oho meri hone wali biwi ji, cat got your tongue?" He chuckled and shook his head.

"Yes, it did. You got my tongue. Mr Bagad Billa!" She said, crossing her arms and looking away.

"Don't call me that, Mrs Bagad Billa! Or should I say, Billi?" He laughed.

"I just don't get it! How did you say yes?" She said, wondering what made Shivaay say yes to her, in front of hundreds of guests and the media.

"Well, you wanted to propose to me right? That's what I did!" He shrugged.

"So you let me propose because you pitied me?" She said, tears pooling in her eyes.

"What? No. I let you propose bec-

"Because you thought, bechari ladki, look how desperate she is to propose to me! I will let her do that, dil reh jayega ladki ka, right?!" She said angrily as Shivaay just looked at her.

"Annika, no! Why would you think that?" He said, alarmed at her sudden tears.

"You don't love me anymore, all you do is pity me! Give me my ring back!" She cried, rather dramatically, and almost jumped at him, trying to pull the platinum band off his ring finger.

"Anni...Annika...what are you...stop it...Annika...ouch it's hurting!" He shouted, trying to pull his hand safely from the clutches of his raging woman.

"No! I said give my ring back!" She shouted, the tears falling on her cheeks.

"Oh God woman, I said stop it!" He shouted and she stilled.

"What. Did. You. Just. Do?" She said angrily, word by word. "Did you just order me to stop?" She screamed and he gulped, taking a step back.

"I just...you were...all over me...

"So now you have a problem with me being all over you? If not me, then whom do you want all over you? Your ex-girlfriend Tia? Or that Ragini? Or that tiny Tanya?" She said in a heated tone.

"Annika! Tia was my girlfriend in sixth standard! I haven't met her in years! And Ragini was just my colleague! And Tanya was-

"Was what!"

"My ex-fiancee but she broke the engagement to marry her boyfriend, don't you remember!" He said, trying to calm his fiancee.

"Oh, so do you want me utaro her aarti!" She said, eyebrows shooting up.

"When did I ever say that! And what's wrong with you, why are you so hyper all of a sudden!" He asked, confused.

"I...I...don't know!" She suddenly started sobbing. "I want to sit down!" She said and slowly sat down on a bench, holding her stomach.

"Annika, why...why are you holding...your stomach?" He asked, a loud alarm going in his head.

Is she preg...no, no...but she can be...is that why she's...acting so moody?

"Annika, are you hiding something from me?" He asked, sitting on his knees, in front of her.

"What?" She asked, frowning.

"Are you...are we preg...pregnant?" He slowly asked.

"What? No! How can we be! I just had my period today!" She said, tears pooling in her eyes once again.

Oh so that's what this is! The famous PMS!

"Oh. Okay." He chuckled. "Come on. He said and cupped her cheeks, wiping away her tears. "Don't cry. It's such a happy day. I said yes to you!"

"Yes." She said. "Our kids will have a hell of a story to tell their friends!" She chuckled, anger turning into happiness.

"They will indeed. And so you know, I didn't let you propose because I pitied you. I said yes, because I watched the movie again and saw why the proposal meant so much to you. It was a bold declaration of love and how could I miss that, coming from my own woman, exclusively for me"? He said and she chuckled.

"I know. I am sorry, I shouldn't have said-

"It's okay. I am not upset." He smiled as the garden filled with a beautiful romantic song. "Mrs Almost-Shivaay-Singh-Oberoi, would you care for a dance please?"

"Yes, Mr Nautanki!" She laughed as he chuckled.

The music was lost,

They didn't care.

Their hearts were in rhythm,

While their feet danced away.

Edited by SanyaEterna - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Res for Krishi's part.😳😳
Unres may take time. Sorry in advance.😛😛

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You are a pro at writing light-hearted stuff, Krishi.⭐️⭐️
This stuff was another example of the same. 😛😛
Chantomai Annika used the same place for enjoying date withher Devars that Shivaay had decorated for her. 😆😆
She ghomaaofied Shivaay fully making a fool of him. Pyaar aur Jung mein sab jaayaz hai. 😉😉
The whole message to Rudra thing was hilarious. More funny was the Instagram bits. Loved the little part of Saumya there. 😳😳
Amazing work, Krishi. 😊😊

P.S.: Sorry for the delay. Forgot that I had to unres my reserves.
Edited by Rainy-Season - 7 years ago
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Res for Sanu's part.😳😳
Unres may take time. Sorry in advance.😛😛

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Awesome continuation, Sanya.😳😳
Annika is chantomai in this whole fiction. Kahin bhi baazi palat deti hai. 😆😆
Chalo, finaly Annika proposed and Shivaay accepted being Mr.Annika. That was really cute.😃😃
Achanak se Annika became so much emotional. Trust me, I was feeling bechara Shivaay. But, she had a reason for such behaviour. 😊😊
Lovely work, Sanu.⭐️⭐️

P.S.: Sorry for the delay. Actually, this slipped from my mind and these reviews were staying in my phone since forever.

Edited by Rainy-Season - 7 years ago
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Sanu, it was adorable 🤗
Them arguing while on their knees and Anika's smart move😆

Lol, when Shivaay said he'd want to spend some alone time, I was expecting something else 🤣 you gave us a strip tease pehle toh I had other sort of expectations 🤣☺️

But still, Anika's moodiness made up for that. Shivaay agreeing that the proposal is beautiful. Aww Billuji actually watched the movie for his Billi again

It was a khidkitod ending to the story😳
Edited by Black_Maniac - 7 years ago

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