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Risha

@--Risha--

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#31

Holy Hell woman! Believe it or not but - THIS IS EXACTLY THE ENDING I HAD THOUGHT OF TOO

Them proposing together 😆

RES for the rest

UnRes

Okay so I had a general idea that this would be the perfect ending, given their takkar kee ishqbaaazi and all but I had literally NO IDEA how I was gonna get there. I have to say this is just perfect. The way you transitioned Shivaay's annoyance/anger at Annika and Rudra to reluctant admiration and finally, full-blown and unabashed love bordering on reverence - just great!

Its also connecting very well with the first part and the flow has been maintained and youve really kept in mind the characters and how they connect with each other

And all the good things about the piece really shone out in the part where he's seeing their insta posts. Such an Annika thing to not let Shivaay's love go to waste like that. Must say, a very apt way youve used the setting.

Also the way they're both so in love at the moments right before tghe proposal that its not even a competition anymore - its just the natural thing to do in that moment and its born out of the love they have for each other. <3

All in all, great job Kriti. Dont think anyone else could've done a better job :)

Edited by --Risha-- - 7 years ago

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PenguinBaby

@PenguinBaby

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 7 years ago

#32

Both proposing together! Wow I hadn't expected that, it was great!!

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Shri

@Shri_12

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 7 years ago

#33

The Instagram bits were nice. Omru and Anni partied where shivaay was going to propose. Kya ullu banaya bechare shivaay. Ending was good wondering what's next

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Anya

@elysianights

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 7 years ago

#34

Reserved for 1
Unreserved.

Risha the starting was just so amazing! I wonder How I felt it out? :P
But really, my busy schedule is the one to be blamed anyways, the movie part was hilarious, I can understand what Shivaay was going through when everyone of them were cutting him off 😆 and if I would have been in his place I would have said all those stuffs without thinking ;)
And believe me I fought the urge to stand up and applaud for Shivaay for his stunt of describing Annika when she was crying beside Om and Rudra(he was just so sweet) were cherry on top of the cake ❤️

Shivaay is really a fool, he keeps on running away from the situations but annika is too a chant, she keeps on arranging stuffs in an attempt to propose him 😆

I loved how you bring Khanna into biew, I don't know but his cameo always had that spark of comic that I can't help but adore him 😳
And the last line that he is double agent had me snicker as well wonder what will shivaay do to him?
Shivaay se yaad aaya, uske saath Bahut hi accha hua, he was the person to be found while now h will be one finding annika ;)

Okay enough of my talks, now I run to go and read the other part ;)

Love,
-Anya.

Edited by elysianights - 7 years ago

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Anya

@elysianights

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 7 years ago

#35

Reserve for part 2
Unreserved.

Krishi🤗
This was such an amazing part, totally adorable' just the way Annika have been Calling Shivay throughout the story 😆
the way Omru had that date with Annika which Shivaay have so beautifully arranged was amazing beside the Instagram Bits were entertaining. Saumya just to irritate Tudra didn't said a word about him while Rudra as he is become grumpy and started complaining. I just loved this ❤️

Lastly both of them proposing each other at the same time was unexpected;) just loved the twist!
Waiting eagerly for this to continue ❤️

Love,
-Anya.

Edited by elysianights - 7 years ago

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AparnaChinnu

@AparnaChinnu

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#36

OMG that was unexpected and awesome...

Both went on knees and proposing each other...

awww that is superb...

The aniomru moments was so adorable

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Ruchi

@Rachna.KG

Navigator

Posted: 7 years ago

#37

Thank you Thank you Thank you

Wanted to read something which can change my mood and this is perfect. It's so sweet and I am smiling. You all are doing such an amazing effort with this Twist& Turn Tales. Loving it. Please keep writing.

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Anya

@elysianights

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 7 years ago

#38

Unreserved both the posts on page 5 ;)

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Nohsin10

@Nohsin10

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#39

Fantastic update

Loved the bonding between aniomru⭐️

Thanks for pm

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abhilasha

@jaansahiba

Explorer

Posted: 7 years ago

#40

God, black maniac, you nailed it!!

The date bight with the amazing devars was adorable. I really liked the idea of using instagram. And Rudy and Om's captions were so good. And soumya and Rudy fighting was so good. And o have to say, if not a good bodyguard, khannaji would've had definitely made a good cameraman. And Shivaay using the notification bell just for Annika, I was awww... He's so adorable (*okay, sorry Shivaay, I won't call u that*) And Rudy laughing when he gets to know that Shivaay thinks Rudy called him adorable, but when Om said stop it, I'll crash the car, I was literally ROFLing... 🤣. But the end was another story altogether. It was so beautiful when both of them knelt down. Loved it.

Love,

Abhi

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