RiKara SS: Redemption [Part 4 - page 11: 17/03/2018] - Page 7

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Posted: 7 years ago
#61
I love the way you showed the phase of their relationship it was really nice.
waiting to know Om's past
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Posted: 7 years ago
#62
Awesome... the chapter was beautifully written...
The way their relationship progressed... Om getting to know about Gauri... everything was beautifully described!!! Loved reading this chapter
And now it's time for Gauri to know about Omkara's past!!! Aur ye achanak Tej ko kya hua... can't he live and let others live in peace...
Continue Soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: _crownunknown_

Such cliffhanger moment

Waiting for the next update already
Continue soon


Haha! Will try to update soon 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: GoWithTheRhythm

I LOVED IT DEAR
IT WAS AMAZINGLY WRITTEN
My favorite chapter so far!
The way you chose to make Om wait for Gauri to tell him the truth and how they finally confided in each other! Loved how Om made it clear to her that he was a human with flaws that he wans her beside him not behind him
That was definitely the best part

Lovely penned down
Gauri loves him and she was so sweetly scared to be a burden! I loved How Om made her see sense and how she finally called him Om instead of Omkaraji


TEJ IS AN IDIOOOT
Can't wait dor Gauri to learn all about his past


Thank you so much

Glad you like it

Will update soon 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
#65

Originally posted by: priyadil

nice update..

loved it
Pls continue soon


Thank youu

Will update soon 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
#66

Originally posted by: Ms.Lizzie

It was wonderful

Like the slow pace their relationship is taking

Tej can never be a good father. He hurt om so much

Waiting to know om's past


Thank you so much

Tej may not have been a good father. But he did hurt Om so much.

Will update soon 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
#67

Originally posted by: sara1990

I can't believe Tej said that to Om... Looking forward for the next update


Tej did hurt Om.

Will update soon 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
#68

Originally posted by: sh_aarohi

I love the way you showed the phase of their relationship it was really nice.

waiting to know Om's past


Thank you so much

Will update soon 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
#69

Originally posted by: devildiva21

Awesome... the chapter was beautifully written...
The way their relationship progressed... Om getting to know about Gauri... everything was beautifully described!!! Loved reading this chapter
And now it's time for Gauri to know about Omkara's past!!! Aur ye achanak Tej ko kya hua... can't he live and let others live in peace...
Continue Soon


Thank you

Glad you like the progression. And yes, it's Gauri's turn now.

Will continue soon 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
#70


NOTE:

Hello People

Kinda had a writer's block and life had been a bit hectic

Sincere apologies for the delay

Mostly will update this week :)

Thank you for the support 😊

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