RiKara SS: Redemption [Part 4 - page 11: 17/03/2018]

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Farri25

@Farri25

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#81

Goodness ! so beautiful so well written this was ! I loved loved how you described marriage... My babies were so cute... This so deserves a track..😭... their past... how can it be left out simply..😭... TejKara deserve a track tooo...😭

This was so very beautiful ❤️

Waiting for the next one 😳

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uma_dey

@uma_dey

Explorer

Posted: 7 years ago

#82

Wow another lovely update from you the way you make both of them stand by each other when their past came across in their present I just loved it. Om is already in his way to make everything right for Gauri what she had to face or lose and now Gauri will take her step to make everything right for him. Will be waiting for next update.

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wanderlust786

@wanderlust786

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#83

Originally posted by: _crownunknown_
I just loved this part.
The way you explained marriage was unbelievable.
The way Gauri trusts him i think nobody does.

Omkara is a real child at heart when it comes to insecurities.

Ri is kara's home and likewise

Thank you so much 😊

Gauri's ideal relationship is based on trust. So she would trust him no matter what

Omkara never really had anyone in his life. So he became a child infront of her.

Yeah. Both need each other. They can be themselves when they are together

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wanderlust786

@wanderlust786

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#84

Originally posted by: GoWithTheRhythm
I loved it
How she followed him stopping him from taking the drugs, from getting addicted again
and then finally Om breaking down in her arms

telling her all the things that made him who he was
his child like questions were too heartbreakingly beautiful
He was scared she would leave someone as flawed as him

Both sides were beautifully portrayed

Thank you so much 😊

Glad you like it

He is such a child at heart and Gauri is the only one who can understand him like no other

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wanderlust786

@wanderlust786

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#85

Originally posted by: snehaltalware
what a beautiful part it is...I am very overwhelmed with it...you portraid their relation very well...thanks for such lovely update

Thank you so much 😊

Glad you like it

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wanderlust786

@wanderlust786

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#86

Originally posted by: priya_86
Meghna...in one word Excellent...Awesome...
The breakdown...the fear...the apprehension...the comfort...the assurance...all so beautifully explained...lovely 😊

Priya dii

Thank you so much

And thank you for the support dii. It means a lot 😊

Glad you like the way the emotions have been portrayed.

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wanderlust786

@wanderlust786

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#87

Originally posted by: sh_aarohi
Meghna di i loved it
i loved the way u potrayed their emotions his breakdown
how she gave him courage and promised to take away his pains
Fantastic

Arey...I am not that olds *Inserts Pinky's voice* 😆

Call me Meghana. And congrats on changing colour ⭐️

And thank you so much

Glad you like the chapter 😊

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wanderlust786

@wanderlust786

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#88

Originally posted by: AfrinHrid
Wonderful update
Finally Gauri confronted him and now everything is alright between them.
He was scared of losing the love of his life
gauri is very understanding and strong.. trust is the main thing of a marriage.. gauri's trust for his husband is unbreakable
Very beautifully written!!
Loved it so much

Thank you so much 😊

Gauri has unwavering trust on her husband. And both will be alright with each supporting the other