RiKara TWO SHOT - SCRUMPTIOUS - UPDATED Pg ONE *COMPLETE*

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Hello everyone 🤗

Now that we are about to bid adieu to 2017, I want to thank many people because this forum, the stories and the people here are a vital part of my life.

I have come with a simple romantic RiKara Story for all my active readers, silent and vocal. To all the people who have supported and encouraged me with their comments and suggestions over all the stories that I did. Support from all of you means a lot.

I have always done stories investing my effort and time and thank you to all of you that you made it worth it. I always look forward to the comments and appreciation I receive for my work and it is because of that encouragement that I have done various genres of stories.

A special mention to the anchors of my RiKara titanic. The awesome people that I get to name as friends now. An adorable bunch of people they are. @Priya_86, @AmusingMe, @Zehnaseeb, @Priya_Iyer, @Fayemia, @Yayini, @RiKara94, @TasnimRodela, @GoWithTheRythm, @Annie, @Ms.Lizzie, @Savina, @Sweetrose, @PerFICtionist, @KashishSR, @Farri, @Priyadil, @amieo, @GratitudeMe, @aphrodite26, @aradhya, @chippertreat, @arshifansiri, @Aarathi, @deewanimastani.I know I might be forgetting names but I am genuinely sorry.

I want to thank all of you for being there for this impulsive and whimsical little chirraiyya who is an IF exclusive writer.

About doing this story ... Tasnim you owe every credential of inspiring me and giving me an important idea to work on this story with your love for cakes and pastries. Dessert plays an important role here.

With that I would like to dedicate this piece of work to my favorite stories which are 'CHANGED' by @KashishSR, 'Girl Friday' by @Ms.Lizzie, 'The Path of True Love' by @Annie, "Amor Intermissus by @WriterGenie, 'Fixed me' by @Fayemia, 'Tu hi hain meri manzil' by @Yayini, 'The love I don't deserve' @GoWithThe Rhythm.

I hope all the readers like this story. Scroll below for the updates.

HAPPY RiKara READING!


SCRUMPTIOUS


"The secret ingredient is always love."
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SHOT ONE

Gauri juggled between the kitchen, the display counter and the payment desk, it was the early morning rush in her bakery just like everyday but she was doing everything with extra enthusiasm today ... its her birthday. She has served coffee with muffins and cookies to every service person stopping by, all the freshly baked bread is sold out ... the school going kids have come to purchase biscuits and cream rolls. Everything is functioning smoothly.

And binged her phone. It was her sister Anika who had reminded her that she had to deliver a red velvet cake to Omkara Singh Oberoi's studio apartment. As far as Gauri knew, Anika had told her that Omkara was not a fan of sweets ... but she realized it was something really special when Anika asked her to ice a "Will you marry me? on it instead of a birthday or anniversary wish.

Gauri did not know much about Omkara, just that he is Jahnvi Aunty's son . ... Anika excitedly kept chirping about everyone in the Oberoi family ... enjoying her time of working with them. As the morning service at the bakery got finished ... she instructed her assistant dandi to take care of the place and customers for a while because she had to deliver the cake and before that she had to change her flour adorning clothes.

With a gentle knock on the door ... Gauri tapped her foot nervously. Looking at the cake box in her hand. She did various kind of orders when it came to cakes, pastries, puffs and rolls but never she did a delivery and that was what she was going right now standing in front of the door of his studio apartment and why? Because Anika had insisted to do so. She tried to calm herself down ... after all its just a cake, she is just delivering it and he is just a man. A very handsome man indeed ... her heart thumped reminding her.

"Hey ... I was expecting you sooner. Omkara said opening the door and Gauri stared at him with the innocent eyes of a child. He is so tall. Extra tall.

"Should I be sorry about it? Gauri asked cutely ... giving it a thought.

"No ... just come on in. He smiled and moved aside to welcome her.

"Hmmm... I just came to give this cake. She said handing over the box to him.

"Yeah ... but I think we will have to talk ... please, I will not take much time. He insisted and she had to step in.

"She looked around the unclean place. She could see half molded clay and dry clay too. Embossed sheets of foil, carved wood, sculptors, paintings, books ... Scattered pens, pencils, brushes and paint cans. The room looked attractive in a very disorganized manner.

"I will arrange stuff here as soon as I find some time. He explained to her eyesight of a cleanliness inspector.
"I bet I create more hassle with flour, sugar and baking powder. I know how things can get out of control. Both of them chuckled.

"Can you show me around. She asked.

"Yes ... definitely. He walked ahead to unwrap his canvases.

He kept explaining to her the concept of each painting and she observed his strokes and even the way he spoke. He was all about expression. Art.

"Hey I like ... what you are wearing with your bangles. He complimented the pompoms and the tassles.

"Your shirt looks good too. She complimented in return feeling so victorious. She really liked his red and black checkered shirt and she is going to find herself something similar.

"Now will you please tell me ... what is so important for you to talk to me about it? Gauri asked after almost half an hour of what seemed like art tutoring.

"Have a seat ... I will be back. Omkara said and tuned to make some coffee for both of them. Returning with two cups ... he saw her sitting on one of his sculptor table with a paintbrush in one hand and a pencil in another. Making both the things fight. She is such an adorable baby. Looking at him she kept both the things aside and waited for him to speak.

"Why did you invite me in? She asked curiously. He kept aside both the cups and opened the box of the red velvet cake and showed it to her.

"Will you marry me? What she iced on the cake was felt more like a question now.

"Yeah, I wrote it ... see this is good handwriting, I know this sounds odd for a cake but Anika told me you wanted it so ... and this cake tastes good. Nobody is going to dislike it. I am telling you ... I also take orders, cake... pastry ... buns ... bread. Tell me. Omkara sighed as she blabbered whatever came in her mind.

"I am asking you ... Miss Gauri Sharma ... WILL YOU MARRY ME? He said in a very serious and straightforward tone towering her with his hands crossed on his chest.

"You said what??? Gauri shook her head and rolled her eyes.

"I technically proposed you young woman, now I need an answer. He leaned onto her holding the sides of the table.

"Is this a prank, I know people are hiding here ... or are there cameras. Everyone is going to laugh at me. She complained with moist eyes.

"Relax Gauri ... I am very serious ... and I can explain the back story. Omkara consoled wiping the a single tear from her eyelid.

"Go on. She snapped and looked away. Really not able to understand of what the hell was going on!

"Anika works with my mother ... in a consultancy firm. He began.

"I know! She spoke in a shout of a whisper because if this would end silly ... she knew she was going to cry and he was going to get a good jhaap.

"My mom saw your photograph ... in her phone on some work day. He continued.

"We both share the same blood mister ... she is my sister. Gauri was getting annoyed.

"Yeah ... and my mother asked to your sister if you would like to marry me. Omkara completed.

"So your mom wants that I become your wife ... like we come a couple ... like Mr. And Mrs. Oberoi? Gauri asked thinking deeply.

"Yes Gauri ... everything like that. He confirmed.

"Just by looking at a photograph? Gauri became doubtful.

"Yup, even my Dadi liked you ... both my women said that you can be the right person to be my wife ... and I trust their choice. Omkara trusted their experience.

"And you want to marry me? Gauri asked with an astonished raised brow.

"Well ... I have been thinking about it ... so yes.

"What if I don't want to ... what if I say no ... What if I say that I have a boyfriend? Gauri enquired every possibility.

"It's okay if you don't want to ... I will be fine if you do not accept me and for that matter I know you do not have a boyfriend. Omkara was very well prepared.

"Anika told you everything right? Gauri spoke with a slight blush.

"Yes, you are the only person my whole family keeps talking about for more than a week now and they tease the hell out of me. I know your favorite fragrance, I know that you want to go to udaipur for a holiday and I know that your favorite color is yellow but trust me red will suit you more. She was amazed. This man had studied her.

"You will not feel bad if I say no? Not even a little bit? Gauri felt sad ... yeah he was telling her that he wants to spend a lifetime with her but it felt so different.

"Yes ...even now I am feeling many things standing here with you and I am going to feel many things if you deny me but I am very choosy about what I let the other person know when it comes to my emotions and what is more important is that you don't have to feel any pressure. Omkara said comforting her.

"Omkara ... you really want to marry me? Gauri was not able to believe his proposal.

"YES.

"Why?

"Because you are a beautiful woman Gauri, you give me a lot of positive vibes... and meeting you I realize that you have a lot of patience ... you can bear with me ... I know, even if we don't get married we can be good friends. He said trusting her.

"I felt so good that you talked to me about this ... but how come Anika has been tight lipped in front of me for so long? Gauri asked him.

"I had asked her to ... because I wanted to meet you and talk to you and about her secrecy ... she is planning a big surprise party for tonight and she has instructed me that even if we have talked about our future plans ... we ought to act surprised. He chuckled.

"You considered me Omkara ... you thought so much about me ... a genuine man like you is worth my efforts ... even I am feeling that we can be good together. She said admiring him.

"Thank you Gauri ... He said embracing her lovingly.

"You are such a sweet heart. She said giggling in his chest.

"I am a possessive man Gauri ... and I really like you ... I want you to be in my life. He said caressing her hair.

"And for that you make me bake a cake on my birthday and make me write that if I will marry you! She laughed quizzically.

"Anika said you liked red velvet. Omkara began scratching his head.

"I do ... I do... She nodded her head.

"So... He smiled at her

"So... She smiled at him

"Happy birthday Gauri.



Edited by Cinnamon_Kisses - 7 years ago
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SHOT TWO

365 Days Later...


He sat on the couch, casually glancing through the newspaper and sipping his favorite roasted and ground brew. Mornings could never be sane and sensitive without a favorable portion of coffee.


And watching her.


She was more interesting than any infomercial anyway and hotter than any beverage too.


He could see the curves of her body through his generous red and black checkered shirt she was wearing as she padded barefoot around the kitchen, pulling out flour, sugar, eggs and butter. His eyes took in the ripe swell of her bosom as she bent over in front of the refrigerator, to take out the bottle of vanilla essence and a bowl of cream along with some chocolates. To him the woman expecting their baby was more prettier than a romantic wife.


She stood back and smiled at him, buttoning up her cleavage in the shirt and tying her apron. He smiled back and then pretended to go back to reading the paper. He watched as she measured out and sifted the flour, beat the eggs and butter together.


"Apple pie," she told him, tucking a long brown strand behind a delicately curved ear. "For Rudra has a pretty date today!." How can he forget ... his brother had called them as early as the rising sun and cried a demand from Gauri to bake him something. And Gauri being Gauri ... had said a yes caring less about her nausea and early morning sickness.

"Then I will make you some fudge. She said biting her lower lip in a smile.


He nodded and watched as she hefted a knife and began peeling and slicing the apples. He watched her fingers. They moved efficiently, slicing through the seeds of the fruit. Then set the chocolate chips, some dark chocolate and butter on the double boiler. Omkara was still not a fan of sweets but the fudge she made for him was something with bitter chocolate and salty peanut butter. Just yum.


"Om ... I need the blender. She called for him and he got up to open the cupboard and give her the blender from the upper shelf.


Going back to the kitchen, she finished dicing the apples. Small white cubes littered the chopping board.


He was behind her observing the subtle movements of her body from behind, his hands curving around her waist, face against her hair, taking in the scent of floral shampoo, mingling with the clean cotton of the shirt.


His hands ran up and down her body and she let out an unconscious sigh. Without warning, she turned around to face him, arms around his neck in an instant, with her soft, pliant lips against his. Her hips bumped up against the counter as he pressed his body into hers.


Reaching behind her, he grabbed the open bottle of honey. She chuckled a little as he broke the kiss. He reached down, swiftly untying the knot that held her apron tight. He kissed her again as one hand found purchase on the smooth column of her throat. He unbuttoned the shirt as well.


Caressing the slight bulge on her stomach, he deepened the kiss, sliding one hand downward to confirm what he already knew: she wore nothing more than a shirt. She gasped into his mouth as his finger slid into her wetness. He growled in his throat, breaking the kiss to guide her body downward to lie on the cool tile, with only the thin cotton of her shirt between her skin and the floor.


He stood there for a moment, enjoying the sight; flushed skin and parted lips, sleepy eyes half-closed in pleasure, before taking action. He knelt down, putting the bottle in his hand to good use.


He started with her left breast, anointing the pert crest with a glimmer of honey, before stretching the trail of stickiness across to her right, and then down the soft bulge of her belly. Slowly and delicately, his tongue worked its way across her flesh, taking in the sweetness of the honey with the salt of her skin. He felt her heart beating, the rhythm strong and steady through every feeling of her body. He took pleasure when he heard her moan softly beneath his touch.

Working his way downward, his mouth finally reached the sweet, soaked spot between her thighs. Her hips rose up to meet his mouth and her pulse rose, thudding in her chest as he licked and sucked, teasing her to climax. Her breath came faster and whimpers became screams, her fists wrapping themselves in the cotton of her shirt as her body convulsed in release, arching her back as pleasure took every fiber of her being.


She lay, panting and he watched the rise and fall of her chest pulsing up and down.


He smiled down at her and reached down a hand to help her up. She met his eyes.


"We're not done," she said, grabbing his hand and pulling him down.


He landed on top of her, the hardened beads in her chest pressing insistently against his. Her hand reached downward, feeling his insistent, throbbing manhood. She ran her fingers up and down its length, lightly stroking, taunting him with the lightest caress. Her pregnancy hormones had certainly added to her sexual appetite and he was not complaining.


She grinned up at him and he didn't expect it when she flipped him over, the heated skin of his back against the cool tile. Suddenly, she was on top of him, wetness against his stomach, Her mouth tasting like oat and almonds as her tongue played with his. He reached up, unable to resist cupping her swelled chest , stroking his fingers against the tight little peaks.


She let him hold on to it as she slid downward, picking up her hips. Slowly, torturously, she slid herself down onto him, letting him feel every millimeter as she allowed him to fill her up. And just as slowly, she lifted herself upward, until just the tip remained inside her. And, smiling, she lowered herself again, picking up the pace in a slow and gentle manner her warm muscles opening up to him as he sheathed himself inside her. The friction mounted to a climax as he watched her bosom, bobbing above him. He watched her face, enjoying the blush and the contortions as she gasped and moaned above him.


His manhood tingled to tease, and he knew that he was close. She smiled and increased the pace for a few moments, before remaining utterly still, meeting his eyes when he was completely covered in her flesh. He felt himself pulse into her, could feel as her muscles clenched around him in orgasm, her breath coming fast and her face contorting with pleasure.


She allowed herself to collapse on top him taking care of positioning her stomach, her cheek against his sweaty chest. She could smell him as the aroma of warm chocolate filled the kitchen air. His fingers tangled in her long dark hair as he stroked a finger down the length of her body.


He kissed her, savoring the moment.


"You know," she said, breaking the kiss. "You should help me like this more often."

"Gauri. He called in a soft murmur ... tracing her tress near her earlobe.

"Om. She said kissing his nose.

"Happy Birthday.




Edited by Cinnamon_Kisses - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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😳 Uff...I feel like having some cake...and I love the nice touch of the red checkered shirt..I love that on him..and picturing Gauri wearing it now ...my mind going wild with all sorts of thoughts.
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Originally posted by: AMIEO

😳 Uff...I feel like having some cake...and I love the nice touch of the red checkered shirt..I love that on him..and picturing Gauri wearing it now ...my mind going wild with all sorts of thoughts.


Vivi 🤗

Thank you so much dear, even I wanted some dessert, thank god its Christmas week ... I can have some cake tommorow or the day after. My maasi will make me some 😛

About the shirt, I am so much in love with it ... That I have actually buyed one just like Gauri wanted to. I like it since KJ's initial IB promotion days.

Thank you so much for the read Vivi ... I wanted to portray a romantic relationship and I am glad I was able to do so.
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Wow that was such an amazing update loved it so much.
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Originally posted by: sirimiri

Wow that was such an amazing update loved it so much.


Thank you so much
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Originally posted by: Cinnamon_Kisses


Vivi 🤗

Thank you so much dear, even I wanted some dessert, thank god its Christmas week ... I can have some cake tommorow or the day after. My maasi will make me some 😛

About the shirt, I am so much in love with it ... That I have actually buyed one just like Gauri wanted to. I like it since KJ's initial IB promotion days.

Thank you so much for the read Vivi ... I wanted to portray a romantic relationship and I am glad I was able to do so.


🤣 We are so much alike! Im not going to lie..I bought one too for myself!!!!
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Originally posted by: AMIEO


🤣 We are so much alike! Im not going to lie..I bought one too for myself!!!!

Same pinch then 😉
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Ahaan..!! What a delicious ending of the year..!!
You know how much I love cakes and pastries...and I'm glad my continuous blabberings inspired you in a way to pen down this one..feeling lucky shucky..
Main bar bar kehti hoon that I love simple stories..they always lightens up your mood and make you feel more relieved...and that's why I loved this one so much...
Kara's family chose Ri for him..and after giving thoughts to their choice, he liked her for himself..I loved the way he proposed her for the marriage...matlab she went to his place with a cake and ended up knowing that it was for her..can anything be more adorable than this...??
Ri's character is stated as an innocent one which I liked a lot..she was unable to believe someone was proposing her..but when he explained everything she couldn't but give in to the proposal..
It was written in the simplest way...and the simplicity just made it more beautiful...
Finally Ri got the shirt to wear..Kara's red and black checkered shirt is one of my fav from his wardrobe..he looks so yum in that shirt..I can image a petite Ri wearing the shirt covering her up to knees...
Well, the baking session was quite hot..Ri's preggy hormones did a lot for the readers.. *wink wink*
It was too sanskaari behna...I loved it..
They came a long way in a year..and you've captured their moments in your writing..I know you did a lot to make it perfect..but believe me it seemed so effortless to me that I was murmuring while reading ke it's Behna's baaye haath ka khel...
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