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Poorva Chakraborty

@Cinnamon_Kisses

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Posted: 7 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: tasnimrodela
Ahaan..!! What a delicious ending of the year..!!
You know how much I love cakes and pastries...and I'm glad my continuous blabberings inspired you in a way to pen down this one..feeling lucky shucky..
Main bar bar kehti hoon that I love simple stories..they always lightens up your mood and make you feel more relieved...and that's why I loved this one so much...
Kara's family chose Ri for him..and after giving thoughts to their choice, he liked her for himself..I loved the way he proposed her for the marriage...matlab she went to his place with a cake and ended up knowing that it was for her..can anything be more adorable than this...??
Ri's character is stated as an innocent one which I liked a lot..she was unable to believe someone was proposing her..but when he explained everything she couldn't but give in to the proposal..
It was written in the simplest way...and the simplicity just made it more beautiful...
Finally Ri got the shirt to wear..Kara's red and black checkered shirt is one of my fav from his wardrobe..he looks so yum in that shirt..I can image a petite Ri wearing the shirt covering her up to knees...
Well, the baking session was quite hot..Ri's preggy hormones did a lot for the readers.. *wink wink*
It was too sanskaari behna...I loved it..
They came a long way in a year..and you've captured their moments in your writing..I know you did a lot to make it perfect..but believe me it seemed so effortless to me that I was murmuring while reading ke it's Behna's baaye haath ka khel...

You know how much I love you right. You are one of my cutest ... Sweetest friend Tasnim with a big heart of gold. And yes ... This idea struck me that night when we both were craving pastries and talking about chicken 😛 ... I got some delicious thoughts.

Even I really like simple stories, writing them makes me feel so happy ... Imagining happy RiKara gives such exciting vibes to me and then I keep thinking agar aisa hota toh ... Agar waisa hota toh ... Trust me its not always about drama, writer mein akkal honi chahiye to find meaningful excerpts from their characters.

Jahnvi liked Gauri ... This happens so many times Tasnim. Marriage is just a matter of one photograph and one positive reply. I find it quite awkward but I have not experienced it yet! So I cannot say ... For RiKara its vibes and heartstrings.

Adorbs!!! You know this was exactly the word I wanted to take for composing the way he proposed her. She did not realize anything ... Omkara just came across as a beautiful birthday surprise for her.

Who would be able to believe it Tasnim? Like a handsome and extra tall Jatadhari inviting you and directly asking you about marriage. That moment was quite too much for Gauri ... She did not have him in mind forget thinking about him and he actually proposed her with a birthday cake.

We know our Kara right ... He likes to keep his feelings in check and keep everything sorted. He got it. He called her and asked her and talked to her. Baat aage badhaane se pehle baat sambhal li.

That shirt *DEAD* I am so much in love with that shirt. He looks so handsome and she will make such a doll wearing it.

In the baking session ... I just wanted to explain what a normal husband and wife feels like ... Its no shame or sharam as they say in being close to your wedded spouse. As amel said to me. They should take whatever is theirs. Adding to it ... Its not always that ek baar sirf SR manaake baby expect ho jaaye. It can take time ... Humesha garuntee nahi hoti and even after being pregnant ... A couple can do whatever they want! ... See how crazy I am behaving 😆

They have come a long way ... Happily married and pregnant.

And you again understood my perspective Tasnim. Bohot mehnat lagi hai ... Isse sochte, samajhte aur likhte waqt. And you know what happens jab tak likh na lo tab tak shaanti nahi milti.

Thank you ... I labh you

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poornimar

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Posted: 7 years ago

#12

Beautiful story and hot. Great writing. Lovely year ending gift. Thank you.:)

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Poorva Chakraborty

@Cinnamon_Kisses

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Posted: 7 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: poornimar
Beautiful story and hot. Great writing. Lovely year ending gift. Thank you.:)

Your most welcome Poornima 🤗

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Tasnim

@tasnimrodela

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Posted: 7 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: Cinnamon_Kisses

You know how much I love you right. You are one of my cutest ... Sweetest friend Tasnim with a big heart of gold. And yes ... This idea struck me that night when we both were craving pastries and talking about chicken😛... I got some delicious thoughts.

Even I really like simple stories, writing them makes me feel so happy ... Imagining happy RiKara gives such exciting vibes to me and then I keep thinking agar aisa hota toh ... Agar waisa hota toh ... Trust me its not always about drama, writer mein akkal honi chahiye to find meaningful excerpts from their characters.

Jahnvi liked Gauri ... This happens so many times Tasnim. Marriage is just a matter of one photograph and one positive reply. I find it quite awkward but I have not experienced it yet! So I cannot say ... For RiKara its vibes and heartstrings.

Adorbs!!! You know this was exactly the word I wanted to take for composing the way he proposed her. She did not realize anything ... Omkara just came across as a beautiful birthday surprise for her.

Who would be able to believe it Tasnim? Like a handsome and extra tall Jatadhari inviting you and directly asking you about marriage. That moment was quite too much for Gauri ... She did not have him in mind forget thinking about him and he actually proposed her with a birthday cake.

We know our Kara right ... He likes to keep his feelings in check and keep everything sorted. He got it. He called her and asked her and talked to her. Baat aage badhaane se pehle baat sambhal li.

That shirt *DEAD* I am so much in love with that shirt. He looks so handsome and she will make such a doll wearing it.

In the baking session ... I just wanted to explain what a normal husband and wife feels like ... Its no shame or sharam as they say in being close to your wedded spouse. As amel said to me. They should take whatever is theirs. Adding to it ... Its not always that ek baar sirf SR manaake baby expect ho jaaye. It can take time ... Humesha garuntee nahi hoti and even after being pregnant ... A couple can do whatever they want! ... See how crazy I am behaving😆

They have come a long way ... Happily married and pregnant.

And you again understood my perspective Tasnim. Bohot mehnat lagi hai ... Isse sochte, samajhte aur likhte waqt. And you know what happens jab tak likh na lo tab tak shaanti nahi milti.

Thank you ... I labh you

Thank you so much for considering one of the sweetest friends of you..you know I'm not that expressive about my feelings..so I never told you how special you're to me...I never interacted with someone who's living far away from me..but believe me it never let me feel like we aren't connected to each other...I realised that a relationship, be it friendship, love relation ya jo bhi ho is the matter of heart..if your heart is connected, distance is nothing..and I labh you too behna..you've no idea how much I pakaofy my friends talking about the things we discuss..and today I met a girl named Poorva...she's my cousin's college mate..I even told her that she's sharing her name with one of friends...
Coming to Rikara..they're more than a couple to me...they're soulmates actually who are bound to meet in a way or another...
Even I've no idea how it feels when someone sends a proposal of marriage by seeing just one photograph...I don't even know how it works between a couple..but the idea definitely worked with Rikara..they never met in a filmy way...but their journey wasn't anything less than a beautifully love story..
I think physical intimacy isn't something people should shy away from..if you love someone, it obvious to feel that pull towards the person..and if you're showing how you feel it's nothing about shame...
To be honest mujhe do teen saal pehle bhi lagta thha ki ek saath so jane se one can produce babies..but gradually I discovered, having a baby isn't that easy..you need to try again and again..consummating marriage for once cannot make a girl pregnant..par show mein toh aisa hi dikhate hain..main bholi chiraiyya phas gayi thi yeh shows dekh ke...
Chalo I'm glad that I could understand what you're trying to convey..I know how much effort you put in each words to present anything for your readers...and I'm glad I made you contented with my words..
Again I'm gonna say I love you..and I really hope we'll be always like this...behnas.. 😳

Edited by tasnimrodela - 7 years ago

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Ishqfeel

@Ishqfeel

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Posted: 7 years ago

#15

Sweet update... loved it.. red velvet is now my favorite

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GoWithTheRhythm

@GoWithTheRhythm

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Posted: 7 years ago

#16

LOVED LOVED LOVED It😳

😭😭😭 Dear thank you so much for your lovely words. You are one of a kind and I am thrilled that we met❤️ May you have a happy new year and may Allah swt bless you and your family. May you always be successful and happy.

Coming to the Update:

LOVED it The way he tried to assure her that she was the one he wanted to marry that he was the one he can imagine being happy with. Gauri first scared than equally happy.

Loved how they hugged each other and then he had ordered her favorite cake for this important question.

😳

I died and came back just to reread their hot and sticky romance. No one holds a candle to you when it comes to sensual moment between Om and Gauri

And pregnant Ri is my favorite

Thank you for giving us stories like these❤️

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Aarathi krishnan

@Aarathi85

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#17

Wow it's amazing delicious one...perfect goodbye for 2017 with your creative talented craving of rikara...its absolutely a bliss to read them in a sweet situation without any drama and emotional baggage...continue soon with another one...happt new year in advance

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Poorva Chakraborty

@Cinnamon_Kisses

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Posted: 7 years ago

#18

Tasnim

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😭 😭 😭

Thank you ... Thank you so much ...

Even I cannot explain how important you are to me ... Because friendships don't some easy to me. I think a lot and I complicate stuff. My proffesors say that I being 21 behave like I am 26, and I just cannot tolerate people who seem to fake, sugarcoat or annoy. For me its like stay honest or stay away ... And I drift when I feel things are getting messier but trust me girl you are an honest person.

About marriage and babies ... I should tell you I realized the real deal at 14 in the eigth grade when the ma'am taught us reproduction in biology ... Tab tak even I thought that its a matter of sleeping and its just a woman getting married and delivering babies ... We were too innocent.

About the photograph and proposal, here I would really say its jahnvi's insights recognizing Gauri and even I feel RiKara are soulmates ... They are just destined to be ... 'Anjaane mein Jo banne ... Ek duje ke vaaste.'

Physical attraction, longing and attachment is not necessary for when you fall in love with someone ... I feel so having an experience of a heartbreak myself but what psychology says is that its basic human need like hunger and thirst ... Again I cannot go any further ... I don't have experience but for me physical intimacy is natural with RiKara being husband and wife.

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Poorva Chakraborty

@Cinnamon_Kisses

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Posted: 7 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: Ishqfeel
Sweet update... loved it.. red velvet is now my favorite

Thank you so much ... I love red velvet too!

Edited by Cinnamon_Kisses - 7 years ago

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Poorva Chakraborty

@Cinnamon_Kisses

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Posted: 7 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: GoWithTheRhythm
LOVED LOVED LOVED It😳
😭😭😭 Dear thank you so much for your lovely words. You are one of a kind and I am thrilled that we met❤️ May you have a happy new year and may Allah swt bless you and your family. May you always be successful and happy.

Coming to the Update:
LOVED it The way he tried to assure her that she was the one he wanted to marry that he was the one he can imagine being happy with. Gauri first scared than equally happy.
Loved how they hugged each other and then he had ordered her favorite cake for this important question.

😳
I died and came back just to reread their hot and sticky romance. No one holds a candle to you when it comes to sensual moment between Om and Gauri
And pregnant Ri is my favorite
Thank you for giving us stories like these❤️

Amel 🤗

First of all I want to tell you that I really like your name.

About how I am unique. I can explain, I am like a 21 year old disguised Kara ... An impulsive and whimsical artist, a person who can repress emotions and a loner. But with that I am very important for my own self ... Just like kareena says ... Main apni favorite hoon.

Happy new year to you too ... For your 2018 ... I wish you health and happiness for your family and fulfillment of your prayers. May your goals be achieved and may your wishes be fulfilled.

I know Omkara very well. He likes to be sorted and so he considered Gauri's word about a new relationship. She did not even know him. He was all well tempered and sophisticated and after the moment she agreed ... He became the possessive man.

Just like you said to me ... They should take what is theirs! After all if married couples don't come close ... Which human this will? I am seriously over the shy shy heroine when we talk about their routine life ... It is totally normal for them to make out or make love ... Like the way you wrote in your story ... Both of them like being together. No big deal and no need of any babaji ki prem booti also ... See I am going crazy again 😆