Tangled: A Rikara SS. *Completed* (Note on Page 44) - Page 5

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Posted: 7 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: Ms.Lizzie

Really a very interesting story line

For some reason I think this Shivay will not be hate worthy...
Who was om trying to call?
And who Shivay called?

Interesting

Wonder what Gauri s reaction will be

Rudra is sweet brother... hope he makes Gauri understand om's plight



Thank you. Shivaay's just a bit lost. Om's caller will remain a mystery for now. Shivaay's will be revealed in the next chapter. Gauri has been a quiet character so far. Rudra is doing his best to diffuse the situation.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: AfrinHrid

Very very interesting!!

What will be Gauri's reaction after knowing all this?
Continue sooon



Thanks. What do you think Gauri should do?
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Posted: 7 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: priyadil

superb...

what will do shivay now?

how about Ri's reaction when she find out her husband is not shivay but omkara?

waiting for the next update...



If he gets out of that closet, Shivaay will try and stop the wedding.

I think Gauri will surprise you.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: tasnimrodela

This is getting more interesting..waiting for Gauri's reaction after knowing that she's married to Om, not Shivaay..I loved Rudra's character..he's matured and sorted out of his thoughts I guess...I'm curious about whom Omkara and Shivaay called..continue soonish..



Poor Gauri. Always stuck with others' decision for her. Also she has never met Om. I tried to retain his playfulness in some of the dialogues. Dunno if anyone noticed. Om's caller will remain a mystery for now but Shivaay's will be revealed soon.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Part 3

Tej Singh Oberoi knew every nook and cranny of this house. He knew the quickest routes and of the disused hallways and it was one of those that he took to enter the Oberoi Mansion undetected.

Today was a big day for his family and he didn't want to cause any drama. He made his way to Shivaay's room as fast as he could and unlocked the closet door. The door opened to reveal a troubled looking Shivaay who was relieved to see him. 'Dad!' Shivaay hugged Tej. 'Who did this to you?' Tej asked. 'Om,' came the answer. On hearing Omkara's name, Tej was shocked. 'Why would he do this to you?' I don't know Dad but we've got a wedding to stop.' Shivaay didn't want to waste any more time. 'Not we son, just you. I don't want any trouble.' Shivaay sprinted downstairs hoping he wasn't too late.

'Vivaah samparna hua,' (the wedding is done) stated the Pandit. Rudra and Omkara were relieved, for now. Shivaay who was now at the top of the stairs heard it too. 'I'm late,' he thought to himself but he could still create some drama. After all, the only thing worse than a bride who was jilted at the altar was one who was cheated. Shivaay was about to climb down the stairs when he felt himself being pulled back.

Shivaay came face to face with a worried looking Tej. 'There's nothing we can do son. They are married now. Let's just wait for the family.' As much as Shivaay wanted to ruin Gauri. He didn't want to make himself himself to look bad. 'There'll be other chances' he thought.

Slowly the guests began to leave one by one until it was just the family left. 'Oh my mata. I can't believe my little girl is married. Tere Papa hote to kitne khush hote,' (Had your father been alive, he would've been so happy) Pinky spoke through teary eyes. Rudra put a hand over her shoulder. 'Acha to samdhan ji, ab hum bhi chalte hai. Kal Pag Phere ki rasam ki tayyari karni hai.' (We'll take your leave now. We have to prepare for the pag phera ritual tomorrow) 'Mom I think we should stay.' Rudra said with a serious face.

Gauri who stayed mum throughout the whole dialogue felt uneasy due to Shivaay's silence so she touched his face to make sure he was okay. What she felt shocked her. Instead of Shivaay's clean shaven face, she felt a full beard. She quickly knocked the turban off only to come face to face with a long haired man. 'Who are you?' Gauri demanded. 'Om,' Jhanvi answered, shocked. 'Oh my mata, ye Shivaay nahi hai!(This isn't Shivaay) Pinky said, stating the obvious. 'Om? Why are you here and what have you done with Shivaay?' Gauri shouted. 'Ri, let me explain,' Rudra cut her off. 'Beech mein mat bolo Rudra. (Don't interrupt me) Why did you take Shivaay's place? Shivaay warned me you were a psycho. Now I know why. Now will you explain yourself?' Gauri spoke in a tone she didn't know she possessed. Omkara opened his mouth to answer but nothing came out.

'Main batata hoon,' (I'll tell you) Shivaay's voice echoed through the now empty house as he made his way down the stairs. 'Omkara knocked me unconscious so he could take my place.' 'But why would he do that?' Jhanvi spoke trying to make sense of it all. 'Because he ruins people. That's just what he does. He just wants to have everything of mine. First Dad, now Gauri.' Shivaay smirked at Omkara. 'That's not true,' Omkara said silently. Omkara narrated the events of this morning to them. When he was done, they all looked shocked. Shivaay broke the silence 'You always were good at making up stories.' 'Actually he isn't making anything up. I spoke to my sister and she confirmed the story. I asked Omkara to marry Gauri,' this time it was Rudra who spoke. 'Shivaay is this true? Jhanvi asked. 'Of course not Mom,' before he could even finish, Shivaay felt a hard slap across his face.

'Not another word from you Shivaay! I can't believe you would stoop so low. This is why you were in such a hurry to stop the wedding. You have proved that it is my blood that courses through your veins,' Tej spoke with fury in his eyes. Shivaay went up to his mother 'Are you seeing this Mom? Dad slapped me for him.' Jahnvi ignored Shivaay and went up to Omkara, 'Why didn't you come to me Om?' 'Even you Mom? You ignore your own son for him, the one who broke your house and our family. Woh sautela hai!,' (He is illegitmate) Shivaay spoke in a broken voice. 'Enough! He is my son but the sad thing is you weren't. I will deal with you later. For now, make yourself scarce.' Let's go son,' Tej held on to a broken Shivaay.

'I want an annulment,' Gauri who had been quiet all this time finally spoke. 'Gauri give Omkara a chance.' Rudra tried to pacify his sister. She raised her hand to stop him and Rudra thought it was best to leave it at that. 'All my life people have been making decisions for me. Take up the family business, marry a stranger who turns out to be my sister's ex.' She looked at Pinky, who now looked guilty. Finally get married to someone I barely know who wants to be my saviour and a brother who thought I couldn't handle being jilted,' Gauri finished. Jhanvi just wanted to take the poor child into a hug. 'To say we've had a long day would be an understatement. Let's sleep it off and we'll talk about it in the morning' Jhanvi now turned to Gauri. 'Gauri beta go to your room,' Gauri looked in the direction of Shivaay's room. She knew she wouldn't be able to step in that room, let alone sleep in it. As if reading her thoughts, Omkara spoke up 'my room is to the left.' Gauri made her way up the stairs. Rudra and Pinky left too. Omkara was about to follow her when Jhanvi stopped him. 'I think you should sleep in the guest room tonight.'

Once inside the room, Gauri fell to the floor. She waited for tears to come but nothing happened. She felt numb. She knew sleep wouldn't come easy to her so she looked through the room to keep herself occupied.

In the guest room, Omkara was finally making sense of what happened. He ran his fingers through his hair and that's when he noticed the ring. He got his phone out and hit redial. Upon receiving no answer, he gently removed the ring and placed it in a drawer.

Part 4: Page 10

Edited by StarryStarryNyt - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#46
Nice Update dear
Loved that Gauri stood up for herself that she doesn't want anyone else to decide for her
Hopefully she will accept Om
I like it that he wanted to save her from a life full of misery
can't wait what you have in store for them :D
Update soon and do pm me :D

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Posted: 7 years ago
#47
Good one
Now some things clear over ShivKara's relationship

Liked hope gauri spoke up to everyone

Wonder what will Annika do

Guess om was calling his fiance , let's see what happens
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Posted: 7 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: GoWithTheRhythm

Nice Update dear

Loved that Gauri stood up for herself that she doesn't want anyone else to decide for her
Hopefully she will accept Om
I like it that he wanted to save her from a life full of misery
can't wait what you have in store for them :D
Update soon and do pm me :D



It would have been too samey samey if Gauri just accepted the relationship. Well this Gauri is very stubborn. Om has his work cut out for him.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: Ms.Lizzie

Good one

Now some things clear over ShivKara's relationship

Liked hope gauri spoke up to everyone

Wonder what will Annika do

Guess om was calling his fiance , let's see what happens



Originally it was Shivaay who was the step son but I made a last minute decision. Gauri is just tired of it all. I dunno if Anika is gonna feature much. Mainly because I don't know her character enough to write about her. Om could be calling his secret wife too 😛
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Posted: 7 years ago
#50
nice update dear!!
cracked relationship between om and shivay...😭

what will be the decision of gouri?

more facts regarding the family and relationships were revealed

hope more to be revealed also...

what will be the om and gauri's decision regarding their relationship

excited to know in next update...


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