Smoke and Mirrors - a RiKara OS

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RingsOfSaturn

@RingsOfSaturn

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#11

Nicely done.

Now,

A bit of silent treatment from Gauri and pining from Omkara !

Fab.

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Z.A.A

@Z.A.A

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#12

This was such an amazing read. CVs have taken it upon themselves to humor us with ridiculous plotlines. Would have loved to see something along the lines happening on the show.

Loved reading it, thank-you Faye <3

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ActionChirraiya

@ActionChirraiya

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#13

Nice one, Faye. You know, Ananya and I have been discussing this ever since this dumb track started. If Omkara had seen Gauri do anything like this, we know he'd have lost it. It sucks that playing this just for the laughs. But at least you're here to give us something realistic. Cause lbr, rikara's relationship had just started healing before Omkara up and left for Goa and did god knows what with Piya. Gauri had just started trusting Omkara again, seeing this should break her fragile trust and faith in him. She should rage and question him like she did in your OS. I felt bad for Omkara too, but it's true he'd have lost it if he ever saw Gauri doing something like this and I'm glad Gauri questioned him about this and noticed his reaction too. She always asks the tough questions, doesn't she? And omkara almost never has the answers. Nothing really changed. Both of them were in character. Gauri, broken and untrusting, Omkara, guilty and repentant. Thanks for writing this and giving us a dose of realism in this surreal show. Lol. I truly loved this. Dil ki muraadein poori kar di aapne. Thank you ji.❤️

P.S: I love smoke and mirrors. Such a fitting song for this OS too. ❤️

Edited by ActionChirraiya - 7 years ago

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Ann17

@Ann17

Explorer

Posted: 7 years ago

#14

ohhh... it was a bit serious! but my heart broke at the LAST word of gauri just like as Om.. as if I can feel what he's going through! all credit obviously goes to ur writing skills.

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KairaZindabad

@KairaZindabad

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 7 years ago

#15

very well written gauri is such a strong woman good writing 👏

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Aarathi krishnan

@Aarathi85

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#16

Wow it's brilliant... gauri's each and every dialogue make omkara to felt his own bad deeds and cruel words towards her..its fabulous writting...

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Anathema

@SRKisLove

Sparkler

Posted: 7 years ago

#17

This is so well-conceived and well-written. 👏

This OS is so in sync with their characters, and most probs, this is how the scene would have played out if we still had DBO. But ab normality ki umeed chhod di hai maine writers se.

Like I always say Faye gives us what CVs don't.

Love your work ❤️

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ArVi-licious

@ArVi-licious

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 7 years ago

#18

Beautifully written Faye..lot of depth to Gauris character.. and the last few words must have been the worst for Omkara.. to be likened to Tej..

It be nice to read Omkara version after this..

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Jahnavi

@IndianFariyTale

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#19

Faye, hey 😊

First, amazing work 👏This the Gauri I kept dreaming of . I've not been watch ishqbaaz of late , and what little I do watch , annoys me 😡

I'm not sure ,if it's just me , but I feel like they're slowly eroding the strength the female characters had . Annika , Gauri, even Bhavya no longer seem to have that fire . That spark, that knew how to both warm the o bros, and to burn them , when they got out of line .

Also WHAT is with all the random new entries ? So, thank you for giving us characters that are real, flawed and intreresting . For making sense of pointless plots , and giving me a Gauri, who can and does hit back just as hard as Omki does.

I was reaching my limit, of passive Gauri .😕