Smoke and Mirrors - a RiKara OS

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Faye

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Posted: 7 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: Spyngli
Nice story dear...😊 Loved it...liked gauri's outburst and how much om is desperate for convincing her...he is afraid that she will leave him...it was good...😊

Thank you, love!

Love your dp. Om is really scared of losing her the same way he was during the dilpreet. What he doesn't understand is that he has already lost her because yeh to 'tu hai ki nahi?' wali baat ho gayi na?

Thank you for the support!

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Posted: 7 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: writer_prasi
A different apporoach with a strong Gauri. Loved it ❤️

Thank you, Prasi!

I'm glad you liked this.

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Faye

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Posted: 7 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: ..LittleLiar..
Viola Honey!
Such an emotion filled OS! I loved Gauri's dialogues..they directly touched my heart ❤️ (kudos to you for that ;D)

I won't say Omkara got what he deserved, but he got what he should get...what Gauri did was justified..Omkara gave her pain and misery for months even without her fault..so it's only justified if he gets the taste of his own medicine..

At the last Gauri said that Omkara's punishment would be to see his mistake everyday inform of their failed marriage in Gauri as she would not divorce him..but I think if that would ever happen..RomanticKara will woo her eventually 😆

I am more interested in how Gauri would make his life living hell...just imagining it gives me chill..❤️

So it's not too much for you can you continue it? I would love to read what would happen next :D

Thank you! What do I call you?

I'm glad you like the dialogues.

RiKara have damaged each other too much, with Om having the upper hand because of Gauri's kryptonite issue. and yet they manage to gravitate towards each other, always and also manage to keep us hooked too. Even though it's not Gauri-like to do something like this, I so wanted to see Omkara suffer even if just a bit but...

Oh yes no one can resist WooingKara, especially if he is being his doe-eyed, shaayari sprouting self. because how can you? and Gauri ka to sawaal hi nahi aata. 😆

I'd love to continue and I'm currently wondering how best to take this forward. keep a lookout!

thank you for the love.

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Faye

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Posted: 7 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: priya_86
Faye...that was awesome...really awesome...i loved the intensity...Karthi...Pooru and you are really the awesome threesome...🤗

thank you, Doctorji!

Karthi, Pooru aur meri taraf se ❤️

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Posted: 7 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: AfrinHrid
Amazing story!!

thank you, Afrin!

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Posted: 7 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: GoWithTheRhythm
My heart broke it just broke
You managed to find the percet words for Gauri to voice out her pain and all the hesrtbreak and humiliation she suffered when Om accused her of infidelity
The parallel at the end of Jhanvi -Tej brilliant and said at the perfect time in your Os

👏

I'm sorry for breaking your heart. you can have this ❤️

thank you for the love, I'm really glad you liked this. the parallel is the very thing that Omie is scared of na, to yeh to hona hi tha!

PS: may I know your name?

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Faye

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Posted: 7 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: tasnimrodela
Gosh..!! Gauri's outburst gave me goosebumps..she reacted the way she should..after all he always accused her without any proof and she was there with proofs in her hand...her each words pierced Omkara's heart..but didn't he get what he gave to her..??
Tej-Jhanvi's parallel was suited the part perfectly..can you plz continue it...?? Would love to read how they continue their relation with broken hearts..

Tasnim 🤗

I'm happy you liked this, because Gauri reacting normally is something we all wanted, especially after everything Om put her through after accusing her of being a home-breaker and all.

I was worried of a backlash but I just had to pen this down. I love Omkara and I love Gauri, so it really hurt me to do this but I had to...

I'm thinking of writing another shot. will surely drop you a pm! anything specific you wanna read?

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Faye

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Posted: 7 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: arshifansiri
Awesome os!!
Loved it.
Liked guri outburst...
Very beautifully written..

thankooo Afrin!

happy you liked it 😳

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Faye

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Posted: 7 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: yayini
Hey chutki.. this is beyond awesome.. even a reversal wouldn't have this impact .. I lau lau the way gauri says am gonna use u.. couldn't have been more cruel.. yes.. intoxicated isn't a escape way and they ain't children to dance with random girl. Sub conscious mind ko toh pata hi hai, wo galat hai.. the last line was so powerful and me laus u again for that.. mmuahh😊

thank you ❤️

Happy you loved it. mujhe laga I'll get thoda sa sandals

Gauri can be the cruelest and ofcourse it is already established that Om is the weak one in this relation.

drinks don't mean you just lose your senses. not completely atleast. thoda sa to you know what you are doing and he is not even sure ki what exactly happened. I'd have let it go, but would he give gauri a pass if situations were reversed?

Me lauusss ya too❤️

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Faye

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Posted: 7 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: Radiant_Eyes_
Wow...Just the way I wish The story should mold as Gauri Forgiving Om so soon and easily seemed dumb I want their story to be realistic as their characters are...Guess I asked alot from CVS.

Anyways...Do cont and pls pls pls PM me as i Due to exams miss out updates

-Sakshi :)

Lovely username and even lovelier feedback 😳

thank you for the love.

half the tracks in the show end up being silly and useless, ab to I've stopped complaining too. why waste precious energy?

sure, I'll pm you, you seem to be on my buddy list! all the best for your exams!