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Posted: 8 years ago
#11
Fantastic concept
Update soon please
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Posted: 8 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: -Rhea-

Great start dear. Absolutely loved it.

Takkar ki ishqbaazi tho. 😆
Looking forward to read more! :)

Haha,, thanks dear
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Posted: 8 years ago
#13

Originally posted by: GoWithTheRhythm

Interesting Start

Can't wait to see what happens next
Why would Gauri need protection?
How will Anika react feeling Shivaays Arm around her Waist
And Rudra and Saumya ;)
update soon

thanks.. With story process u will get to know about rikara.. and shivika? they have a takkar-bazi in their first meeting... 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
#14

Originally posted by: S.love1

Wow shivikas first meet and annikas misunderstaimg is so funny, poor girl sso is going to not leave her now,

Rikara know each other, what relationship do they share? And y is Gauri not safe?

Rudy did wrong for not clearly professors wrong accusation on Bhavya, but our super girl bhavya is awsome for slapping him.
This is an awsome fiction

Please do continue soon
Much love!

thanks dear d keep reading
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Posted: 8 years ago
#15
Awesome nd khidkitod encounters
Tq for pm Continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: _crystal_

Hey guys, I'm going to post another story. But this story based on three couple - Shivika, Rikara and Ruvya.. I hope you'll enjoy the story coz there going to have a takkar ki ishqbaazi...


Okay... Here's goes the sneak-peak.. Enjoy...!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


Ishqbaaz Fiction

(Shivika, Rikara, Ruvya)


|| ... And They Fell In Love ||


Sneak - Peak


She looked at the guy and got furious. "Mera dimag gusse se phat raha hain.. Baad mein baat karti hoon." Saying this, she hang up the call and again looked at the guy who was talking with the waiter who points his finger at her.

"Mera ek ghanta barbaad kiya hain isne.. Isko toh mein chodungi nahi." She thought eyeing him and saw him coming to her table but she ignored him.

He walked to her table, "Excuse me?"

She looked up at him and gets up from her seat. Seeing him opposite to her made her more furious, she held the glass and splashed the water on his face.

"What the...!" He yelled wiping his face. "Have you lost your mind?"

"Ahh.. Apko kya laga mein aarti lekar swagat karungi apka. Don't you have manners? Ek ladki ko ek ghante se wait karwaya aur aakar no sorry nothing, upar se itna tadi dikha rahe hain..!"

"What..? What tadi..? And how dare you to talk like this? Do you know who am I? I am Shivaay Singh Oberoi."

"Ahhh..!" She acted as if getting panic. "Mein toh darr gayi.." In next moment she sternly looked at him and goes close to him. "Aap desh ke PM ho ya Shivaay Singh Oberoi.. Mein apse darne..." But she paused as she remembered her buaji told the guy name 'Rishab Kapoor' bit this guy calling himself in different name.

"Shivaay Singh Oberoi..?" She looked up at him and realized her mistake.

"Yeah, Shivaay Singh Oberoi." He repeated.

"Ohh.. I.." She was finding way to escape from this mess when the manager came to them saying, "Ma'am.. We are sorry.. Humare stuff ne aapko galat table number de diya hain.. Yeh table pehle se hi Mr Oberoi ne book kar liya tha.. Aapka table woh hain..!" He pointed at the table when she looked back and saw a guy sitting there.

She turned back at the manager and again looked at Shivaay who was glaring at her dangerously as anytime he can burst. But before Shivaay could react, she yelled at manager, "Kaisa ghatiya shop hain.. Aur kaise ghatiya stuff.. Mujhe yaha ek minute nahi rukna.." She said in one go and quickly grabbed her bag and was going to leave when her feet swirled but couldn't control herself and fall on Shivaay who immediately placed his hand around her waist.

***********

Bareilly,

"Aap chale jaiye yaha se... Aapke liye yeh jagah theek nahi hai.." She said.

"Kya tumhe lagta hain, mere chale jane se tumhari takleef kam ho jayegi..?" He asked, meanwhile she looked on. "Tum samajhti kyun nahi ho Gauri, tum yaha safe nahi ho. Aur mein tumhe yaha akele chodhh kar nahi jaunga." He said sternly.

"Aur mein aapke saath nahi jaungi.. Aapka parivar aapka intejar kar raha hain, ab faisla aapko karna hain Omkaraji.. Aapke liye kaun zyada khas hain.. Hum ya aapka parivar?" Omkara looked on. "Hum aapke samne hath jodte hain, laut jaiye.. Humein humare haal pe chodhh dijiye."

"Yehi tumhara akhri faisla hain?"

"Jee..!" She said looking into his eyes.

"Theek hain. Lekin mein yaha se ek shart pe jaunga, promise karo agar kabhi bhi tumhe meri zaroorat padhe toh tum mujhe phone karogi." He asked for promise.

"Hum aapse wada karte hain Omkaraji." She smiled and they walked opposite direction.

************

Mumbai, St Xavier College.

Exam hall,

He was looking around and trying to see what his next student was writing but couldn't able to see anything. "God, kal se mein push ups kam aur padhai zyada karunga, please iss baar pass karwado." He prayed.

He looked on and saw few students were passing cheats, he called them and trying to get the cheats, Soumya saw it. "Rudy, don't do this.. Agar pakde gaye na toh.."

"Tu chup kar Somu.. Aapna kam kar.." Rudra said and get the cheats.

He quickly opened them and started writing, many of students saw this but kept silent - Bhagat was one of them. Seeing Rudra writing, the professor gets suspicious, Rudra also sensed it, so he quickly throws the cheat somewhere, the professor checked him but didn't get anything.

"Sir, bhale hi mein pass na karu, par cheating nahi karunga." He acted innocent.

"Dramabaaz.." Bhavya murmured.

After professor left, Rudra tried to take the cheats but those were away from him, he saw it was near Bhavya, so he tried to call her when professor saw the cheats.

"Bhavya..?"

As professor called, Rudra again composed himself. The professor received the cheats and blamed Bhavya.

"Sir, yeh mere nahi hain..! Believe me." She cried.

"But yeh tumhare paas se mili hain.. I am sorry but I have to take you to the principal, now he will decide, come." Professor took her while Bhavya left crying.

After the exam, Rudra was having fun with his boys gang where he confessed how professor target Bhavya when suddenly Bhavya came there and pulled him by his collar and slapped him on his face in front of the entire college, everyone looked on shocked while Rudra looked on furious.

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Hope you liked it, don't forget to comment.

Note : To get Pm's buddy me.


It's awesome...pls update soon...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#17
Awesome promo
Totally loved it
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
#18
Awesome.
Shivay hates pinky and pinky has been motherin Anika...wah kya twist hai.
Takkar was fun.

Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
#19
Fantastic update
Totally loved their tashan
My Shivika rocks😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
#20
wow that's unexpected...
shivaay hates his mom and she is taking care of Annika... so she is the who is going to bring the mother and son closer...wow

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