Old Complaints, New Promises - RiKara OS (Changed #8) - Page 2

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Posted: 7 years ago
#11
Lovely read in the middle of the night! Thanks a lot, Kashish! Seems to go a bit slow but am loving it. :)
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Posted: 7 years ago
#12
Kashish...it's just wow..
You know we all had an idea that Omkara will be a great father...but you proved that he's simply the bestest...the way he cuddled his daughter in his arms was too adorable...seems like little Aadya recognised her father very well...that's why she slept in his arms feeling that warm only her mother provided her till the day...
Loved how you shown him as a protective father promising himself of taking care of his little daughter and making sure she experience the best in her life...
Feeling pata nehi kya for that Hema aunty who tried to start a conversation with him...little did she know he was least interested in her beti gungaan and gossips...but when it came to his wife he couldn't stop himself from defending..
As expected Gauri was shocked seeing him in her house...but she was more surprised how the man hold her daughter in his arms and comforted her...he's just so perfect...
Omkara was on action...he didn't even give it a second thought before calling Aadya as their daughter..it caught my attention he called Aadya their daughter conveying the silent message to Gauri that he already considered Aadya as his daughter..but just to make that understand to his wife he had to talk about legal marriage and divorce...
Gauri definitely didn't expect this much calmness from him...she was awestruck with his behavior...but bechari couldn't react much as her own daughter defended her father...
Omkara finally left leaving a demo of a how much caring father and a loving husband he was..aww..!! That's so cute...his princess and the badi baby or should I say biwi is going to get the best of him I believe...
The update was worth waiting..but hope you won't make us wait for too long for the next update..continue soonish...
Edited by tasnimrodela - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#13
Daddykara avatar is amazing. Typical Daddies. Princess is of course Aadya and Baby is Gauri. DaddyKara rocks... MummyRi shocked...
Waiting eagerly for more DaddyKara, MummyRi and BabyAadya...
Edited by sara1990 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#14
Totally loved it
Positive omkara instead of a sulking one us good
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Posted: 7 years ago
#15
Awssomeee
Loved it sooo much
Next episode soon plz plz plz plz plz
And pm ke liye thank you
Agli bhi Krna plzzz
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Posted: 7 years ago
#16

@ Kashishsr

Summing up all those words up there in your writeup and the way they are laid in perfect perspective... All I'm left with is a word so common yet that struck me while reading this piece of yours was... Beautiful 👏

Keep writing dear... Love the way you paradoxically named the piece 👏

P.S.: I'm so in love with the name Aadhya
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Posted: 7 years ago
#17
awesome update
loved it
update soon
waiting for the next chappy
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Posted: 7 years ago
#18
Superb update
Gauri was in for some shock
Omkara took his chance
Made her understand
That he is aadya's father

Waiting eagerly to read more
Update soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
#19
Hi kashish I am on a vacation trip with my family ... Will get back home in two days and do my live reporting 😃 till then miss me 😳🤗
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Posted: 7 years ago
#20
awsemm so oso making entry goso life

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