Old Complaints, New Promises - RiKara OS (Changed #8)

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Ann17

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Posted: 7 years ago

#31

hawww... kashishh... after soook many days of waiting ... u finally had time! thanks .. n I could recognize the princess as Aadya n the baby as Gauri only! 😛 isn't it?????

great update n u knw already waiting fr nxt...do update a bit soon if u can!

stay blessed!

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Poorva Chakraborty

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Posted: 7 years ago

#32

Omkara

Gauri 😎

Aadyaa ❤️

RES 😃

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UNRES

Kashish

You took a long time to update I took the longest to comment 😆 *Cute Waale Eye Blinks*

This is a ' JISKA MUJHE THHA INTEZAAR JISKE LIYE DIL THHA BEKARAAR ... WOH GHADI AA GAYI AA GAYI.' Moment for me ... Finally Gauri meets Omkara.

"an onslaught of intrusive personal questions" This is saansaarik cetirus paribus for every person and every situation ... People can actually not mind their own business.

The Daddy Kara Feels ❤️

Oh my goodness ... Hemaji krupya karke zabaan ko aaraam dijiye ... Aapko andaza nahi hai ke aapki Oh My Mata ho sakti hai 😆

Again The Daddy Kara Feels ❤️

Ruchi Suchi ki Mata ji kya aap meherbaani karke apni opinionbaazi apne pass hi rakhengi yahaan koi nahi jaanta ke aap Gauri ke baare mein kya sochti hai ...

Such socialistic hypocrites I tell you ... Just nonsense they have to talk ... Gossip collect Karo, headlines frame Karo aur backwaas Karo is their favorite hobby ...

Kara is becoming Husband Goals now ... I loved the way he took a stand for all the single independent mothers when it came in Gauri's name ... Very good Om.

The Ultimate Daddy Kara Feels ❤️

How he wants to hold and protect his little princess for a lifetime ...

And then we finally have Ri and Kara ...

Gauri was obviously supposed to panic but with that I loved how calm composed and collected Omkara behaved ... A tinge of his real self ... Trying to take care of both his wife and his daughter.

Gauri has changed ... Gauri as a woman, Gauri as a bread earner ... Gauri as a mother ... This is a different Gauri Kumaari Sharma altogether. Yeah she has known Omkara and has not conceptualized this man to be risky business.

I like this Angry Ri with a mincing pepper seasoned tongue ... Omkara himself knows he has to deal with it!

With that I loved how Omkara explained to her in the most logical and practical way possible that he is important in her life ...

His goal of becoming a good father makes me want to cook Kadhi Chawal for him .

The thing I did not like is Opinionated Auntyji ... The thing I liked the most is Daddy Kara

Okay we have Obros coming up in the next update ... I trust you with writing family moments and conclusively I suggest that Omkara should establish a papad factory because he has to bellofy so many papad now ...

And ... Are Ruchi Suchi two bimbette sisters ... Looking forward to AdKara bond, Rikara Equation and Shrimati Hemaji's alliance proposal ...

Edited by _PrincessPooru_ - 7 years ago

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kashishsr

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Posted: 7 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: SanyaEterna
Oh this was so damn cute❤️ just perfect!
Princess- Aadya
Baby- Gauri😆

Thanks for reading and commenting.

Find out who's who in the Changed#9 😉.

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kashishsr

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Posted: 7 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: guy3
Lovely read in the middle of the night! Thanks a lot, Kashish! Seems to go a bit slow but am loving it. :)

Time difference complicates things😆. Glad you're enjoying it - what's the rush? Abhi toh Omkara has a lot of grovelling to do😉.

Thanks for reading and commenting.

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kashishsr

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Posted: 7 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: tasnimrodela
Kashish...it's just wow..
You know we all had an idea that Omkara will be a great father...but you proved that he's simply the bestest...the way he cuddled his daughter in his arms was too adorable...seems like little Aadya recognised her father very well...that's why she slept in his arms feeling that warm only her mother provided her till the day...
Loved how you shown him as a protective father promising himself of taking care of his little daughter and making sure she experience the best in her life...
Feeling pata nehi kya for that Hema aunty who tried to start a conversation with him...little did she know he was least interested in her beti gungaan and gossips...but when it came to his wife he couldn't stop himself from defending..
As expected Gauri was shocked seeing him in her house...but she was more surprised how the man hold her daughter in his arms and comforted her...he's just so perfect...
Omkara was on action...he didn't even give it a second thought before calling Aadya as their daughter..it caught my attention he called Aadya their daughter conveying the silent message to Gauri that he already considered Aadya as his daughter..but just to make that understand to his wife he had to talk about legal marriage and divorce...
Gauri definitely didn't expect this much calmness from him...she was awestruck with his behavior...but bechari couldn't react much as her own daughter defended her father...
Omkara finally left leaving a demo of a how much caring father and a loving husband he was..aww..!! That's so cute...his princess and the badi baby or should I say biwi is going to get the best of him I believe...
The update was worth waiting..but hope you won't make us wait for too long for the next update..continue soonish...

Aadya feels at home with both her parents and Omkara gave him her love the moment he first saw her. I really do think he would be father goals.

Omkara cannot bear anyone talking ill about his wife and the way he sees it Hema was also questioning their right to parent their daughter so two big no's.

Aadya is already a Daddy's girl, no? Defending her Papa in her sleep😆.

Thanks for reading and leaving a lovely comment like always😊.

Edited by kashishsr - 7 years ago

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Poorva Chakraborty

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Posted: 7 years ago

#36

Aakhirkaar saare grah apne sahi sthaano mein viraajmaan huye ... Ek shoobh muhurat nikla aur Maine live reporting kardi 😆

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guy3

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Posted: 7 years ago

#37

Madamji waapas gaana padega kya agle part Ke liye?;)

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kashishsr

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Posted: 7 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: guy3
Madamji waapas gaana padega kya agle part Ke liye?;)

Koshish karne mein kya jaata hai? 😆

My coursework submission is tomorrow so after that I will have the next part up asap. I've written most of it already.

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guy3

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Posted: 7 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: kashishsr

Koshish karne mein kya jaata hai? 😆

My coursework submission is tomorrow so after that I will have the next part up asap. I've written most of it already.

Ok dokie, looking forward to it:) in the meanwhile, this time pesh hai situational song from your viewpoint:
Aye mere humsafar
Ek zaraa intezaar...
Sun sadaayen
De rahi hai
Manzil pyaar ki
Good luck with your submission. I have to work on mine this weekend

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kashishsr

@kashishsr

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Posted: 7 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: guy3

Ok dokie, looking forward to it:) in the meanwhile, this time pesh hai situational song from your viewpoint:
Aye mere humsafar
Ek zaraa intezaar...
Sun sadaayen
De rahi hai
Manzil pyaar ki
Good luck with your submission. I have to work on mine this weekend

Thanks and good luck on yours too❤️

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