RiKara SS Fall For You Ch12 Teaser! pg.60 06/07/18

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Tasnim

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Posted: 7 years ago

#431

Pehle toh I'm really for commenting so late. 😒 I was caught up with exams. But luckily it got over yesterday..

Oh gosh !! I've so many stories to comment. 😲 Starting with this as it is one of my favourite chapter of the story. 😳

I loved the way Gauri stood for her love. She gave it back politely to Riddhima who was publicizing her past relationship with Omkara. With the kind of patience she has handled the whole situation was my favourite part of this chappy. GKS raackss anywhere anytime. 😉

I'm glad Riddhima is not a negative character here. She somehow loved Omkara abd asking for a closure wasn't wrong I think. Yet I'll not forgive her for trying to taint Rikara's relationship.

This the Rikara I dream of. They've immense trust on each other which makes them the power couple.

I can't wait to see how they deal with the Ajay thing.

Take care while fasting Mel. You know it's not easy to fast for 18 hours of a day.

Updates can wait. Try to catch some sleep. Okay ?

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Aarathi krishnan

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Posted: 7 years ago

#432

Oh no again trouble coming for them?not fine...nice update

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jennifer

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Posted: 7 years ago

#433

Nice update...and really a wonderful read.

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GoWithTheRhythm

@GoWithTheRhythm

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Posted: 7 years ago

#434

Originally posted by: Aarathi85
Oh no again trouble coming for them?not fine...nice update

Don't worry they will manage whoever comes their way 😉

But someone will die 😲

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GoWithTheRhythm

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Posted: 7 years ago

#435

Originally posted by: jennifer
Nice update...and really a wonderful read.

Thank you :D Happy you liked it 😳

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GoWithTheRhythm

@GoWithTheRhythm

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Posted: 7 years ago

#436

Originally posted by: tasnimrodela
Pehle toh I'm really for commenting so late. 😒 I was caught up with exams. But luckily it got over yesterday..
Don't worry! I told you several times you exams are more important.
Oh gosh !! I've so many stories to comment. 😲 Starting with this as it is one of my favourite chapter of the story. 😳
Happy to hear 😳

I loved the way Gauri stood for her love. She gave it back politely to Riddhima who was publicizing her past relationship with Omkara. With the kind of patience she has handled the whole situation was my favourite part of this chappy. GKS raackss anywhere anytime. 😉

Gauri knows that Omkara is hers and she would fight even her shankarji for him. Seeing that Riddhima tried to win him back wasn't pleasing for our Dabang Ri 😆

I'm glad Riddhima is not a negative character here. She somehow loved Omkara abd asking for a closure wasn't wrong I think. Yet I'll not forgive her for trying to taint Rikara's relationship.
I always felt sorry for all the Girls in Om's life. They had their reasons for their behavior so I wanted Riddhima to go with some dignity.
This the Rikara I dream of. They've immense trust on each other which makes them the power couple.
That is RiKara 👏

I can't wait to see how they deal with the Ajay thing.
Take care while fasting Mel. You know it's not easy to fast for 18 hours of a day.
Updates can wait. Try to catch some sleep. Okay ?

I will try to take care of myself don't worry. you Take care as well okay?? And don't worry Ajay is nothing against RiKara

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Shivomru695

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Posted: 7 years ago

#437

Very interesting one! I liked how you didn't keep ridhima negative. I always thought she loved omkara in her own way. In the beginning of IB she was more of a attention seeker using his name for her benefit at times but not necessarily negative. And of course our Gauri showing her place and not falling under her trap...that was amazing 😊
Ajay is returning...eager to know what his role is going to be 😲
Can I make a suggestion? Can you at some point in the story make rikara have an intense fight or disagreement? And in a way that will make them even closer and more passionate for each other 😳 it's just a request. I love your writing so I know if you write something like this you'll do an amazing job!

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GoWithTheRhythm

@GoWithTheRhythm

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#438

Originally posted by: Shivomru695
Very interesting one! I liked how you didn't keep ridhima negative. I always thought she loved omkara in her own way. In the beginning of IB she was more of a attention seeker using his name for her benefit at times but not necessarily negative. And of course our Gauri showing her place and not falling under her trap...that was amazing 😊
Ajay is returning...eager to know what his role is going to be 😲
Can I make a suggestion? Can you at some point in the story make rikara have an intense fight or disagreement? And in a way that will make them even closer and more passionate for each other 😳 it's just a request. I love your writing so I know if you write something like this you'll do an amazing job!

Hey dear so happy you enjoyed this chapter and you liked the way I portrayed Riddhima. I never wanted her to be fully evil.

Fun Fact: In the initial version of their honeymoon trip I wanted Om and Gauri to have a fight because of Riddhima at a party and then have gauri stand up for rherself later on :D

But then I thought an intense fight should have a better reason so yes :D There will definitely be a disagreement ;))

I love suggestions so please never shy away of making some.😳

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GoWithTheRhythm

@GoWithTheRhythm

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Posted: 7 years ago

#439

I know I have been the worst when it comes to updating any of my stories but even I am a human with some stress in my personal life which is why I was not able to write anything. This is a teaser for a Chapter that will Change all their Lives! Please tell me what do you think will happen...and I hope you haven't forgotten me or my stories.

Omkara tried to open his eyes yet the pain was too much. It felt like a thousand needles pricked him everywhere possible and just the thought of opening his eyes hurt.

He heard the Ambulance, People talking and crying but he didn't know why.

"Omkara! Please Open your eyes. His Brother's voice reached his ears and he finally opened his eyes. It took a minute for him to adjust to the sudden light and colors that flooded his mind and then he realized where he was and what happened.

He was lying next to the car that was totally damaged after they crashed with a Truck and all Om could think of was Gauri and her Mother. Where were they? Were they okay?

"Shivaay...Rudra...where is Gauri? Om tried to stand up but was stopped by the paramedics who treated his wounds. They told him he had a concussion and needed to rest but he couldn't. His heart told him that something was wrong. Something was lost.

"Shivaay...Where is my Wife? He asked his Voice getting louder again and then he looked to the car wreck. Some paramedics were treating a person he couldn't see and another one was carried away under a sheet. Dead.

"Rudra...Who is that under the cover? Who died?

He tried to see any indication of the person's identity on their faces but nothing.

"Where is Gauri?.

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So what do you think happened that lead to the Car accident?

Is it connected to Ajay? And who died?