Rikara OS | Attention|

Tasnim

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Aahaaan..!! Attention is one of my fav songs...the title was so well suited with this..Ri knew very well how to make his man jealous..aww..!! Loved the jealous and possessive Kara...I think you wanted to portray Swetlana blackmailing Ri to leave Kara as a price of that injection that saved his life...I just think so..maybe I'm wrong or maybe right..anyways..it was amazing as always..waiting to read more of your writings.

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Rex

@StarLord_Owen

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Originally posted by: _PrincessPooru_
Hey hi🤗
This one is a real good read ...
Undivided attention never sounded so desperate on hot white flames ... I love it ...
The way he pushed her away ... The way she made him jealous ... It was being felt ... Possessive Kara is one of my favorites and then we read the Mrs. Part ... Well well that came as a surprise and some papers and Svetlana became the reason of their separation ... I like the strong headed characterization and stronger emotions ... The end was definitely hot and with that I would like to say that this story deserves a part two about what exactly happened and where are the papers and why did she file a divorce ... He needs to know the reasons and love has to prevail ... What's with Svetlana? ... Many questions in my head

Thank you so much Pooru! I am sooo glad that you enjoyed it ❤️ possessive and jealousKara are my favourite too 😆 Omkara is the hottest in those two avatars of his 😛

Now about papers and all...I never gave it much thinking while writing(sweatdrop) I have like zero idea about whatever svetlana did to Rikara before Ratan track because I don't use to watch the show then :P now if I will write next chap I'll have to make my own ''mystery"

Now about writing the next part..I have been thinking about it too :) (as I have got fairly good response for this OS) so hopefully I'll update it :D

Once again thank you very much for reading and commenting on my story!
-love Rex!

Edited by ..LittleLiar.. - 7 years ago

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Rex

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Originally posted by: Ms.Lizzie
Well written
Lovely

Thank you very much! ❤️

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Rex

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Originally posted by: tasnimrodela
Aahaaan..!! Attention is one of my fav songs...the title was so well suited with this..Ri knew very well how to make his man jealous..aww..!! Loved the jealous and possessive Kara...I think you wanted to portray Swetlana blackmailing Ri to leave Kara as a price of that injection that saved his life...I just think so..maybe I'm wrong or maybe right..anyways..it was amazing as always..waiting to read more of your writings.

Thank you sooo much Tasnim! ❤️
Attention is my favourite song too! 😆
And I didn't have anything in particular about what Svetlana must be blackmailing Gauri with...it was planned to be left open ended, according to reader's imagination.. 😛
And thank you once again for the wonderful comment! ❤️

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