What IB could have been after the leap.

Ujwala

@Freebird_91

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Posted: 7 years ago

#11

If only gulneet had such brains. 😆 You have covered everything(though you dint tell us how SR happened 😆) , Shivika vanvaas , chutiki track , anika past 😆

loved your manav comment 🤣

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zooni

@zooni.blue

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Posted: 7 years ago

#12

Oh wow I love this track

So much scope for drama n trpy

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soumya

@Ayuzawa

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Posted: 7 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: xxMATSxx
Amazing storyline. Id def. Watch

Originally posted by: adventure_gurl
would be awesome if show went this way

Originally posted by: guy3
This was nice.

thanks for saying that. 😊

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soumya

@Ayuzawa

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Posted: 7 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: Santhi_40
Amazing but this is far above standards for our writer and no hope to closet of it happening in the show..

However if it does happen am just imagining the world war that can happen if Shivika takes Gauri w/ them causing the Rikara breakup 😉

lol. true that. but then break up toh hona hi tha. why not make the most of it.😆

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soumya

@Ayuzawa

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Posted: 7 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: mandu
This is good..there is so much momentum in the story and no dearth of drama...thank you..

thanks. yeah, I was thinking if this story had momentum or not, so thanks for saying that it has.😊

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soumya

@Ayuzawa

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Posted: 7 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: --Nargis--
You have way more talent and creativity in this high level story map than GulNeet has had in many many months of the show!!! Like Ruzzie says...I miss you gals from the AT!!!❤️🤗

miss you too baby. nice to see you and Ruz again😆 and thanks too.

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soumya

@Ayuzawa

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Posted: 7 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: SanyaEterna
Wow! In just a few hundred words, you've made an amazing story! I wish we could see that in the show but...I'm happy I can at least get to read it!
-Sanu

Hey Sanu. thanks a lot. I seriously wish that atleast some part of this is shown in the story simply so that we can see the couples grow together.

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soumya

@Ayuzawa

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Posted: 7 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: farinaks
.Awesome...amaaazing... Loved it...
It deserve a standing ovation
U truly are a brilliant writer

Thanks a lot dear😃

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soumya

@Ayuzawa

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Originally posted by: freebird_91
If only gulneet had such brains. 😆 You have covered everything(though you dint tell us how SR happened 😆) , Shivika vanvaas , chutiki track , anika past 😆
loved your manav comment 🤣

thanks. but if I had written an FF on this then I would have started with SR. otherwise how would Anika become pregnant🤣

lol. and seriously, idk why but I didn't like maanav at all.

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soumya

@Ayuzawa

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Posted: 7 years ago

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