What IB could have been after the leap.

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Posted: 7 years ago
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I was writing a post when I ended up writing this. I thought I should share it here since its a version IB could have gone in. I would have written a FF on this but I have no time to do that and I still have my previous once to finish so i'll just drop this here in case I never actually write an FF on this. at least the people will know what it could have been😆

the raaz comes out, anaika's father was blamed for that fire at the factory by oberoi's to save their skin, people burnt her house after that or something and her mother died with her sister being pulled away from her coz somebody saved her from the fire. Anika is hurt but doesn't blame shivay but he can't stand being part of an empire that was built on her parents' grave and decided to leave the business. just then the whole Om blaming Gauri happens and Shivay feels responsible for that coz he asked Gauri to join those classes and a huge fight breaks out between Om and Shivay. Gaui pleads with Shivay to not clear her side to a man who never even bothered to ask her for an explanation but Shivay stills tells the truth to Om coz he considers Gauri his sister and finally leaves the oberoi mansion with Anika and Gauri. Rudra asks Shivay to take him with him but Shivay tells him to stay with Om since he already has no financial security now and he doesn't want to make Rudra go through hardships with him. Rudra is hurt and swears that he will become so responsible that never Shivay will ever feel that he is a burden on him.
leap happens.(5 years thing.😆)
Shivay and Anika have built a hotel chain and are so busy that they hardly get time to spend with each other. Gauri on the other hand has become a famous actress(coz its the filmcity, duh.😆)
Omkara has relapsed to drugs coz he lost his wife and brother and Rudra has taken over Shivay's place in the company.
an attack happens on Rudra during a press conference and he is given security by the police and who else do we have but Bhavya in the whole department to take care of that.😆 it turns out Bhavya married Maanav and then he died.(coz I don't like him😆). now it's time for rudy to deal with his feelings for not only a girl older to him but also a widow.
the attack also makes Shivay for the first time contact Oberois and he meets up with Rudra. whent hey meet Rudra doesn't tell him about Om and drugs. but we come to know that he is hiding more. somehow Svet has made a comeback and has made a claim of her being Om's fiance.(coz writers love rebooting everything so why not reboot DBO😆) svet is also now attending the board meetings as a representative for Om and making Rudra's life hell. om is too drowned in drugs to care and anyways he never cared for the business and pretty much hates Oberois for what happened to Anika.
but then finally fed up with Svet Rudra approaches Gauri and tells her everything and asks her for help. Gauri out of love for Rudy makes a comeback in OM. turns out that even though Gauri had sent the divorce papers to Om, he never signed them and instead this is what trigged the whole relapse to drugs. Om finally sees hope and starts to work towards recovering and Gauri helps out feeling guilty for his current condition.
Anika and Shivay try to find moment in between their busy schedule to be with each other. then one day Anika comes to know she is pregnant and calls Gauri to tell her the news and also asks her to tell this to dadi. when Gauri is telling this to Dadi Svet over hears and she panis coz now she has to get rid of this new child along with Gauri coz this child might act as a catalyst to bring Shivay back into the business.
here Anika tells Shivay about the news and he is too overjoyed and postpones all his meetings to take her out on a dinner. Svet is informed by her informant about this and she plans to kill Shivika.
as they are returning from the restaurant their car is hit by an oncoming truck. it becomes a huge incident with media and cbi involved and the oberois are shattered by the news.
Gauri fearing that this might trigger Om to go back to drugs hides the news from him. Only rudy goes to the hospital and is told about the situation by the doctors. he breaks down and Bhavya comforts him.
suddenly the news comes out that Anika has gone missing from the hospital. oberois are worried.
when rudy comes home everyone hoards him with questions and he tell them that Shivay is no more. all are shocked and dadi asks about Anika. he tells them that Anika has gone missing.
people are dealing with the loss and we get another leap of a few months.
the oberois get another shock. apparently the company stock are at an all time low and the only way to save the company is to get another huge Empire in to the company. Svet comes to Om and tells him about Shivay's death and in his grief he signs the papers by which his shares are sold. and now the board is going to hold a meeting to decide who will be the next Ceo.
Svet tells Rudy that now he will be ousted coz the shares she sold were bought by a third party which is under another board member who had bought half of Shivay's shares when Shivay had left and the shares were made public in order to save the sinking oberoi empire. this making that board member the largest party share holder. no one has ever met her but know her as Ananya Khurana. and with this she has destroyed the Oberois and their empire and now her revenge is complete coz her father too died in that kalyani mill fire.
as they all sit for the board meeting Svet is totally smug but to her surprise the board member enters the meeting and it turns out that it's none other that Anika. after her enters Om and Gauri and the board unanimously takes the decision to kep rudy as the Ceo and throw out Svet. Svet is angry and asks how did this happen and Anika starts telling her.
she tells how after Shivay's shares were made public, shivay still worried about the oberoi future decided to slowly slowly buy back all the shares but in her name as he believed she deserved this more than him. but then half way through the accident happened and before he could buy back all the shares Svet got a chance to destroy the oberois. so Om purposely signed the papers and gave her the shares to make Svet put down her guard and in the mean time Rudy and Anika worked behind the scenes to secure the rest of the shares to gain a clear majority under police protection provided by Bhavya. Svet screams that a child like rudy could never defeat her and Rudy agrees that in fact it was not him but his Shivay bhaiya who defeated her.
just then Shivay enters and everyone is shocked to see him alive. then Shivay explains that in fact it was Bhavya who had suggested to make the world believe that Shivay is dead because she had suspected some foul play in the accident and so that he gets time to recover from his critical condition and no one attacks him or Anika they would do it. Anika too was under police protection all this while so that no one would try to harm her or her child in any manner.
Finally all oberoi sons and bahus tell Svet how she lost big time and Bhavya arrests her for trying to murder Shivika coz all this time she has gathered enough proof against her.
in the end all oberois ask Anika to forgive them and she does.(coz Anika is Mahan.)
Rudy finally realizes that it is only bhavya who he can spend his life with and he asks her to be his girlfriend officially so that they can try to learn to put up with each other's flaws before marriage.
Anika's first baby shower happens and Shivika are damn happy.
Guari approaches Om in between the function to ask him about why he never signed the papers and he finally confesses his love for her and asks her to marry him and that this time he'll do his best to deserve her. Gauri cries saying that she would never leave him again coz she can't see him destroy himself in her grief. and they have an actual wedding this time. Guari's mom comes to the wedding and comes to know about Anika and finally reveals that Gauri is Anika's long lost sister and that it was her who had pulled Gauri out of the fire that day.
gauri and anika hug and resta ll join in and they end the show with a dil boley oberoi.

the end😆




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travelholic thumbnail
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Posted: 7 years ago
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lovely as always dear but expecting too much from the lazy writers! the old AT members are the only ones looking for depth in shivika story now 😆
baaki sab are happy with the lolipops being given without a proper story! chalo, that works too as we cant do much

miss u all 😉
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: NYCForever

lovely as always dear but expecting too much from the lazy writers! the old AT members are the only ones looking for depth in shivika story now 😆

baaki sab are happy with the lolipops being given without a proper story! chalo, that works too as we cant do much

miss u all 😉


I miss you guys too.
lol. I just wish they had finished Shivika as an ideal couple. like a sort of example of how ideal couples are with real life problems.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Amazing storyline. Id def. Watch
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Posted: 7 years ago
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would be awesome if show went this way
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Amazing but this is far above standards for our writer and no hope to closet of it happening in the show..

However if it does happen am just imagining the world war that can happen if Shivika takes Gauri w/ them causing the Rikara breakup 😉
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Posted: 7 years ago
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This is good..there is so much momentum in the story and no dearth of drama...thank you..
Edited by mandu - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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You have way more talent and creativity in this high level story map than GulNeet has had in many many months of the show!!! Like Ruzzie says...I miss you gals from the AT!!!❤️🤗
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Wow! In just a few hundred words, you've made an amazing story! I wish we could see that in the show but...I'm happy I can at least get to read it!
-Sanu
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Posted: 7 years ago
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.Awesome...amaaazing... Loved it...
It deserve a standing ovation
U truly are a brilliant writer

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