RiKara FS - Humari Doosri Shaadi Part 4 on Pg 18 (28/10) - Page 12

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: tasnimrodela

Aye..!! My ShivKara rocks..their plan was successfully executed..Ahoo..!! The Dhaba scene was too good..finally our Chiraiyya can happily introduce herself as Mrs.Omkara Singh Oberoi..Balle balle...doing happy dance...Genie you made me hold on my breathes..the bangle scene was damn sensuous...


Haaye Tasnim yaara...

You make me smile everytime I read your comments.

Thanks for being such a wonderful person!

I'm glad I was able to make you happy with my writing.

Stay tuned for an update soon!
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: fariah25

This was beautiful !👏

I badly need to improve my vocabulary to be able to describe these type of works properly ! I really need to learn the best adjectives out there ! I feel so miserable when I'm at loss of words to express u writers write makes me feel !😊
I heard the writers were not inspired enough to write on RiKara recently... Why don't you SS OS FF writers send your works to inspire them ?!
I love aaalll that you write genie...
You are our Aladdin ke chiraag ka genie who fulfills our rikara related wishes ! 😃
I would love that "wife" scene on screen while rikara are on their way back to mumbai from bareilly...😃
Thank you for this !
#stayblessed #stayinspired
❤️


Aap jaise absolutely wonderful readers jab hain, hum kaise nahin inspire hote?

Thank you so much for the beautiful comment my friend... It warms my heart to know you like everything I've written on RiKara.

I am super glad ki aap ko ye update pasand aaya. Stay tuned for the next one soon!
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: arshifansiri

Awesome update!!

Loved it.
Very beautifully written..
Thanks for d pm:)


Thanks for the luv Siri

Update should be out soon!
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: roaiba

GENIEEE! Yet again, I have no words! You amaze me! You truly amaze me 👏 I've missed this one so much and you just did so much better than what my expectations would have been. It proves to me how much you keep improving as a writer and it's just so amazing!!! 😭 my heart is literally slamming so hard against my chest after I've read this and god, I can't wait for more love, your biggest fan haha ❤️


Roaiba! My luv...🤗

You are so sweet to have said all the things you did!

Thank you for being such a beautiful person and thanks for being a part of this facet of my life.

I'm glad you liked the previous update... I'm hoping you like the next one too!

your biggest fan in return, Genie
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: aaradhaya1688

Just loving their doosri shaadi

And confession was adorable


Thanks for the support luv

Update should be out soon!
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: ipkknd-fan

amazing update

thanks for the pm


Thanks for the luv

Update should be out soon!
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: GoWithTheRhythm

👏

you deserve standing ovations for that chapter
loved each word each moment between Om and Gauri
his feelings his love out in the open for his wife
wonderful work dear
update sooon


*Takes an awkward bow*

Thanks for being such an amazing friend and supporter!

I'm glad you liked the previous update and I'm *crosses fingers* hoping you like the upcoming one too!
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Aarathi85

Genie it is an amazing one...the best plan ever made by om and shivayy...their so innocent beautiful wives went on a short date with them...omkaras most precious gift to gauri ...his talk with her..everything was beautiful...amazing...


Thanks for the lovely comment Aarathi!

I'm super stoked that you liked the OBros ka plan... and their wives bent on chaupat-karofying it. But the day out and the chuda thing was fun wasn't it?

I'm glad you liked it all... hopefully you'll like the haldi waala update coming now...
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: indigal07

Wow such a fabulous update genie!! I really love how long this was. I already can't get enough of your writing, so the more there is the happier I feel. 😃 Every paragraph just kept getting better and better. I love your portrayal of RiKara, how you capture their feelings so accurately.

I really love how this chapter was an outdoor thing. I think ShivKara's plan was brilliant and I am sooo glad that that RiKara got some alone time outdoors and then in. Om is so sweet and thoughtful and caring and handsome and romantic and and and...I could just keep going on

Thank you for making my weekend so lovely with your update! Thanks for the pm, and I'm so looking forward to the next update! 🤗


First off, thanks for such a lovely comment!

Secondly, I'm glad you liked the outdoor aspect of it. I needed to get them out of OM for a bit.

This was not a planned and written update... Rudy ke character ka sathyanaash dekhne ke baad there was no way I could write the original Sangeet chapter I'd planned. Tho this happened quite by chance.

I'm glad it all worked out reasonably well.

Stay tuned for an update soon!
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: rikara94

Hey gen🤗you back..hwz your trip?

Its wonderfull update and lonnngg update dear and those outfits are amazing..especially the yellow one for gauri
Omkara missing his lil chirraiya bcoz of dadi's 2feet wala stupid sa plan and made a plan..wait a min omkara made plans like seriously?😆 aa gya zid pe or plans bna raha hai😆
Thank god..nooo thanks to you shivkara's plan successfully worked and rikara went for a short but most romantic date
Same dhaaba..same rikara but now as a hubby wifi..she is really happy that now she can introduce herself as GOSO..every wife desrves respect from her huby but glad for gauri..dhaaba scene is really romantic..they went for mandir also..golgappasss haye mere muh mein pani aa gya look😛
Back to OM surprise fo gauri...simple but unique just like gauri..richa made those bangles..
Banngle scene was really amazing and sensational and sanskari☺️
Which one is the next function sangeet or haldi..eagrly waiting for haldi😉
Waiting for the next loong update


Jyoti! Behna aap ke comment ne to humein blush karvaa diya!

Thanks for writing such a long and lovely comment...

Aayega zidd pe to qayamat to honi hi hai na?

Wo dhaba waala scene I wanted to sudhaarofy from the day Omki ruined everything... accha hai mauka mila. I loved writing it too!

And the gift shows ki Omki is aware of his wife's likes and dislikes. Knows he cant win her over with expensive gifts and loves her enough to go the extra mile.

Thoda sa sanskaar to jaayaz hai right? Waise, if you're expecting sanskaar for haldi, jaise show mein mila tha, tho sorry... mera sanskaari dimaag so gayaa.

I hope you like the haldi waala update too!

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