RiKara FS - Humari Doosri Shaadi Part 4 on Pg 18 (28/10)

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hi y'all

My muse seems to be working overtime today! I finished JNKSH, updated SIIC and now am back with a new 5S!

This one's inspired by the debacle that was ShivIka ki Shaadi ver. X.0 (X because we know its gonna happen again... like is there anything to Gulneet's IB other than stretched out tracks about Shivaay getting married repeatedly with everyone else standing around in the background in equally bad clothes every single time??

Right... rant time over.

This is a RiKaralicious look at this iteration of ShivIka ki shaadi... Had Gauri been present, the issues between Om and Ri handled to a certain extent, the stupid Om doubting Gauri track never existed and Tej Singh Oberoi been surprisingly normal... and I was writing it, this is what would happen.

There's going to be 5 chapters, 4 pertaining to a pre-wedding event, the last chapter being the wedding itself. There's gonna be Sagaai, Mehendi, Sangeet, Haldi and Wedding.

This is a sort of prologue, sort of sneak peek... so hope you guys like it!

Chapter Index

Prologue - Below

Sagaai - Pg 04

Mehendi - Pg 08

Getaway - Pg 12

Outfit Pictures - Pg 13

Haldi - Pg 18

Shaadi - Coming soon!
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With all the world and its cousin working toward ShivIka ki shaadi... for god only knew which iteration this was... Omkara was a happy man. His brother and sister-in-law were finally getting married because they actually wanted to, this wedding wasn't about tadi or secret plans or revenge this time... his brother was happy, Anika was happy and so was he.

Things seemed to have stabilized for the most part between him and his little chiraiyya who was participating in everything she could with her typical sunny attitude and cheerful disposition. If he hadn't been observing her so closely while utilizing every opportunity to taadofy his own wife, Omkara might've never noticed the infrequent flashes of sadness that seemed to pass over Gauri's expressive face. Ever since they'd started to plan Shivaay and Anika's wedding, again, Gauri had been an enthusiastic participant throughout... she did everything with her signature gusto and kept everyone happy and on their toes running around like the supposedly happy chiraiyya she was.

But now and then, he would notice when she would go all quiet and a little sad, always going unnoticed by everyone else but her husband. Thinking about it made Omkara want to kick himself. Of course... Gauri didn't have a family anymore, what with her only remaining family member, her adoptive mother at the hospital once again... and her own wedding hadn't really been a celebratory event. She'd never gotten the pre-wedding rasams, the happy memories with her family, the headache of planning, the hectic schedules... hell, she probably hadn't even gotten to choose her own bridal attire.

Even as he watched the rest of the family happily arguing about the pieces of jewelry they would all pick out for each event, he saw Gauri wistfully gaze off into the distance, least bothered about the expensive and glittering pieces of diamond jewelry in front of her. A glimmer of a plan settled into his mind and seeing Gauri dash off a lone tear that made it past her eyelashes quickly before plastering a big smile on her face and plunging into the conversation with Anika and his mom, only made Omkara that much more bent upon executing his plan to fruition.

The first function, Shivaay and Anika's Sagaai... was happening the next day and that was when his plan would go into action too. But before any of it could happen, there were some people he needed to talk to and get on board with his plans.

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Hope that made you hungry for more...

This is mostly RiKara focused but you know me, I like to pull the entire ensemble cast into this so I'mma find a way to do that...

Let me know what your impressions are by liking and commenting your ideas, thoughts and any suggestions you might have.

Oh... this will not update once everyday. Maybe once in two or three days.

Cheers!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Seems like Genie is fulfilling all the Rikarians' wishes these days, and we sure are loving it. Thank you for coming up with this! Too excited for this one. The prologue is really interesting. Can't wait to know Om's plan for his wifey. Waiting eagerly for the updates already!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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awesome update yar
Totally loved it
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Posted: 8 years ago
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My dearest Genie,
As for now I have decided I should take a break from RiKara for the sake of my own sanity plus my impending exams. It's mostly due to how a certain pea brain OSO is all hell bent upon doubting his wife once more. Don't know why, but he is no longer the Omkara I admire and I am blank as to how I continue to write about this version of my once beloved character.
Then there I was all dark and gloomy and stumbled upon this sunny version of a story! Truly, thank you so much for This, for reminding me how sweet things could be and that there's still a handful if silverlines in this ship. For that mere reason, you will always find me reading what you present on RiKara although I have made my peace with abandoning the show.
This goes without saying, as always you're a genius!
Lots of Love,
Sakura
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sakura24

My dearest Genie,

As for now I have decided I should take a break from RiKara for the sake of my own sanity plus my impending exams. It's mostly due to how a certain pea brain OSO is all hell bent upon doubting his wife once more. Don't know why, but he is no longer the Omkara I admire and I am blank as to how I continue to write about this version of my once beloved character.
Then there I was all dark and gloomy and stumbled upon this sunny version of a story! Truly, thank you so much for This, for reminding me how sweet things could be and that there's still a handful if silverlines in this ship. For that mere reason, you will always find me reading what you present on RiKara although I have made my peace with abandoning the show.
This goes without saying, as always you're a genius!
Lots of Love,
Sakura


Sakura, my lovely friend...

I commiserate with you on your decision to take a break. I understand your reasons and support you entirely. But my case is a tad bit different.

I hadn't noticed till very recently but it is only when the show starts going down the road of stupidity and despair when it comes to RiKara that my shipper dimaag starts to work overtime. Gulneet treating RiKara so abominably is probably why I've stuck to writing this ship for such a long time (more than 5 months stuck to one single tellywood ship is a record for me! The only other long term ship I sail on is the Arshi ship... but that's sort of like taken for granted for anyone who knows anything about tellywood.)

As you probably know by now, I tend to write slightly AU pieces where the story starts off working with canon and with a few changes here and there, I tend to take the whole thing in a different direction. Its simply a version of what we all might like to see on the show. Being a fanfic writer is so awesome because you get to pick and choose what parts of canon you want to accept... and you're free to reject everything else as BS.

Though I am frustrated at Omkara for going down the doubt road once more, he really needs some sense kicked into him regarding his stance about Gauri and she's the only person who has any rights to do the kicking. Gauri also needs a boot in the rear for overstaying her welcome at OM... she should've left his doubting ass long back. To get their story finally into gear, a big showdown and a separation is sadly quite necessary.

Provided the CVs don't botch it up horribly (which, who are we kidding? They're totally gonna ruin this!) I am willing to undergo a week's worth of terrible angst if there's light at the end of the tunnel in the form of a reasonably characterized Omkara who's willing to listen, learn and understand.

But... let's cross that bridge when we get to it. As for now, I'm writing some happy and fluffy AU about the dreadful wedding that was built up for three months and basically fell flat due to terrible mismanagement.

Let's redo that and make ourselves happy doing it. Hope you have fun reading the upcoming chapters... and sistah... hang in there! Things'll get better.

Love you!

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Genie..I'm jumping like a kid after reading the prologue only...socho shaadi ki rasams ke dohran kya hoga mera..I just can't wait for their wedding...thanks for fulfilling RiKarians adhoori khwaish...but are they going to get married along with ShivIka..??
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: tasnimrodela

Genie..I'm jumping like a kid after reading the prologue only...socho shaadi ki rasams ke dohran kya hoga mera..I just can't wait for their wedding...thanks for fulfilling RiKarians adhoori khwaish...but are they going to get married along with ShivIka..??


Main to apni adhoori khwahish poori kar rahi hoon my luv!

Are they going to get married alongside ShivIka? Hmmm... good question. Wait and watch... is all I can say at the moment. 😃

I'm super glad you're so excited about this.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: AYUSHIVISHU

awesome update yar

Totally loved it


Thanks for the love Aparna!

Hope you'll like the various functions waale chapters even more!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Naina280599

Seems like Genie is fulfilling all the Rikarians' wishes these days, and we sure are loving it. Thank you for coming up with this! Too excited for this one. The prologue is really interesting. Can't wait to know Om's plan for his wifey. Waiting eagerly for the updates already!


Genie to hote hi hain na wishes poori karne ke liye!

I'm glad you're excited about this concept. Hopefully, it comes out as nice as it sounded in my head.

Om currently has lotsa plans for the wifey... and only some of them are capable of being discussed in public 😉

Aage aage dekhte hain hota hai kya...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Yes yes yipeee
Yuhooo
Always wanted to read rikara remarriage
Arent you adding up their first night in their rasams
Lolzz
Dont mind my gutter mind
Would love to read more

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