RiKara FS - Humari Doosri Shaadi Part 4 on Pg 18 (28/10) - Page 11

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Posted: 7 years ago
Take a bow my writer friend,what an absolutely heartwarming update this was.

So coming to this FS,I assume somehow in this universe issues have been sorted between them and Omkara has come out of his commitment issues.Honestly this is how exactly I visualise Omkara will be totally and irrevocably in love with his wife.Sensitive,Attentive,Caring to an extreme never missing any detail about her,treating her as his most precious treasure.Raising hope of all us single girls :v.

I haven't followed shivay and anika's story so dnt have a say in that but loved how Omkara had planned everything to the T.From selecting her dress to the ring and then himself designing the mehendi
Designs.He is being all sorts of adorable like dilpreet is onscreen these days.Though the last update took the cake.Missing his wife,planning the getaway,coming a full circle and giving gauri the status she holds.Cnt get more surreal and I am partial towards their names as Gauri and Omkara when one hears,its like its meant to be.

I am glad that you showed even gauri has her desires regarding her husband and there is nothing to be apolegetic about.She is expressive when it comes to showing her love,the way it should be.For a moment it was like they were going to share their first kiss but I am sure you have saved that moment for something more special to come.

The last sentence is the highlight gauri staking her claim on her aim,that "My Om was the best.And i hope you continue to continue this series and add more inpromptu updates including the ones you have planned because I cnt get enough.Also can in one of thse updates gauri fell ill may be due to her allergy or anything and a caring and motherhen kara be seen hovering around his chirraiya being quite rebellious about dadi's two feet rule.

Update soon and I read in one comment in the passing that youerean arshi shipper as well,I do
Hope you were in the minute potion of people who actually got the enigma named ASR as you get Omkara to the T.

PS- ignore the typos through phone.
Edited by asrkasr - 7 years ago
minamma thumbnail
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Posted: 7 years ago
Genie i m already desperate for the next update please update soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
Wow such a fabulous update genie!! I really love how long this was. I already can't get enough of your writing, so the more there is the happier I feel. 😃 Every paragraph just kept getting better and better. I love your portrayal of RiKara, how you capture their feelings so accurately.
I really love how this chapter was an outdoor thing. I think ShivKara's plan was brilliant and I am sooo glad that that RiKara got some alone time outdoors and then in. Om is so sweet and thoughtful and caring and handsome and romantic and and and...I could just keep going on

Thank you for making my weekend so lovely with your update! Thanks for the pm, and I'm so looking forward to the next update! 🤗
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Posted: 7 years ago
Hey gen🤗you back..hwz your trip?
Its wonderfull update and lonnngg update dear and those outfits are amazing..especially the yellow one for gauri
Omkara missing his lil chirraiya bcoz of dadi's 2feet wala stupid sa plan and made a plan..wait a min omkara made plans like seriously?😆 aa gya zid pe or plans bna raha hai😆
Thank god..nooo thanks to you shivkara's plan successfully worked and rikara went for a short but most romantic date
Same dhaaba..same rikara but now as a hubby wifi..she is really happy that now she can introduce herself as GOSO..every wife desrves respect from her huby but glad for gauri..dhaaba scene is really romantic..they went for mandir also..golgappasss haye mere muh mein pani aa gya look😛
Back to OM surprise fo gauri...simple but unique just like gauri..richa made those bangles..
Banngle scene was really amazing and sensational and sanskari☺️
Which one is the next function sangeet or haldi..eagrly waiting for haldi😉
Waiting for the next loong update
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Posted: 7 years ago
Feels so good to have you back! Hope you had a great trip!
Hayeee!! What an update I can't get over this beautifully written getaway! I totes loved it! You amaze me every single time with your every new update! I'm not good at words to tell you how much I love your writings! This update just took the cake tbh! So many feels with every single line! I so love this Om, I want him to be like this in the show; being all caring, loving, sensitive, possessive for his precious chiraiyya, his Gauri! Loved how he missed her and so planned a getaway along with Shivaay! I so love ShivKara ❤️ I loved that part where he was busy adoring his wife and shivaay had to nudge him to bring him back and continue with the plan xD ShvKara and their face-palming moments, hehe! Love them a lot! RiKara car conversation was lit! Loved that specially when he said that she has no idea how he felt of not seeing her for two days ❤️ And that 'wife' moment was so lovely! I don't have words to describe that! It was so beautiful! Can't get over that one! And the bangle scene, Mann! That sure is my favorite one! I so loved it! Best bangle scene ever tbh! And her "Om... My Om" made the scene even more beautiful! Thank you so much for writing this! It's always a treat to read your writings, hence reading this length felt so good! Can never get enough of your writings! Waiting even more anxiously for the next update now.
Much love to you, my forever favorite writer 🤗
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Posted: 7 years ago
Ginie, sorry for late reply. I read it all but was a bit busy couldnt leave any comment. You know how bad I am, in leaving comments. How are you? Well, Its great that Om is trying to give Gauri a perfect marriage without her knowing. I wonder how Gauri will feel when she knows about it. Well now, he is also facing the two feet rules. I guess it is a payback for him for trying to Shivay's leg earlier. ShivKara are desperate to see their AniRi and they even came out with a plan and here our Dabangg Gauri and Khidikitod Anika trying to flop their plan. Well glad Dadi didnt agree and allows them to go out. Om is trying to rectify his mistakes, lets see how Oberoi's conduct the rest of the wedding ritual ceremonies without our chiraiyaa's knowledge.
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Posted: 7 years ago
Awesome update
Eagerly waiting for the next part
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Posted: 7 years ago
Genie ji where are you?.Update warranted and can we please have o and g take their vows in
Private as sacred as their love is.
Edited by asrkasr - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: minamma

God my hearbeat is so loud

You provoke such sensual feels
That bangel scene is so passionate
But all in all such a nice chapter
That dhaba scene is so romantic
Finally om declared her his wife..
Wow
But please update soon
We have been waiting for ages for this you know


Thank you for such a lovely comment yaar!

I can't tell you guys just how awesome it is for me to read such comments from y'all. You're such a lovely person minamma...

I'm glad you liked the getaway waala chapter. I've wanted to do the dhaba scene since the day Omki chaupat-karofied the situation. I'm glad you liked it.

Stay tuned for an update soon!
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: AYUSHIVISHU

awesome update yar

Totally loved it...
you beautifully portrayed the emotions yar...
it was superb


Thanks for the lovely comment Aparna...

I'm glad you liked the update.

There should be the next one coming soon!

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