RiKara FS - Jo Na Keh Sake Hum Part 5 on Pg 15 (30/09) Complete - Page 5

Originally posted by: Naina280599

Genie 🤗
It feels so good to have you back. Hope you and your family are well; heard about the hurricanes. Take care.
I am in love with this FS already. The title is so lovely, brings so many feels. The first part was wonderfully written. Loved how you portrayed Gauri's thoughts, feelings, emotions, inner turmoil and her beliefs with the words so amazingly well. I'm glad she said she wants a break and she left for Bareilly. I wanted a separation since so long in the show; Sigh! Moving on to the next part; I've always loved your choice of words, specially when explaining Om's perspective. I loved reading his thoughts, his feelings, specially how he missed his wife, he kept on looking for her subconsciously and that he finally knows he has to bring her back. It's high time he opens up to her and I'm already anxious to know how you'll go on with this. It is so beautifully written.
Thanks a ton, for the PM.
Much love ❤️

Originally posted by: music1

Om's POV has been clearly stated .. Now we get to know how insecure and broken he is from inside.. Thanks for the update .. Waiting for their reunion patiently:)

Originally posted by: AYUSHIVISHU

Awesome update yar...

Totally loved it...

you beautifully portrayed om's emotions yar...

Ya he is so broken...he had only seen the bad side of relationships...he witnessed the pain his mother had gone through because of the commitment and heis too afraid

so he grown up developing a commitophobic... and riddhima and ishaana increased it and he totally changed into another version of SSO and gauri paid for it... he MU her...insulted her but she forgive him... gauri changed him but he doesn't realised it because he is the same om who we met at the beginning... he changed in to SSO version and gauri brought the real om back... but for him he is the same... gauri had taken the right decision... only her absence taught him wat she means to him

Originally posted by: TheInkMistress

RES

Originally posted by: tasnimrodela

Again you made me fall for your writing..you wrote the best of Omkara's perspective...he was always a commitment phobic because of the experience he had from his parents relationship...but he didn't deny the fact that she's the first who made him comfortable without entering his personal space...glad that you didn't use the word "Love" when he realised how much he need her...though they comfort each other, they have a long journey before declaring their mutual feeling as love..continue soonish...and hope you're well...just take care of yourself and your family... 😊

Originally posted by: roaiba

This was so heart wrenching yet so beautiful! 👏 Would've loved to see this kind of conversation between RiKara. Even though it really hurts to read this, I know this is what they need, this is what HE needs and you explained it so beautifully 😭 I'm seriously speechless 👏

About part 2: AGAIN, S.P.E.E.C.H.L.E.S.S! Damn, how do you do it? How do you portray someone's emotions so well? It is just beyond my understanding. You have described his thoughts and emotions so well! This is some whole other level of writing. This is just W.O.W! 👏 👏 👏

Originally posted by: arshifansiri

Awesome update.

Loved it..

Very beautifully written.

Thanks for d pm:)

Originally posted by: rikara94

Wohooo again intersting and amazing update

This shot totally on omkara..and you described his emotions and point of view very well genie..beautifully written👍🏼

We already knw that he has commitment phobia and this is just becoz he seen only the bad sides of realtionships..pain in relationships and fights in relationships..so that is why he is borken soul..and about ishana and riddhima both girls only increased his pain and his past is the reason he does not trust gauri..always misunderstood her *sigh*

So now he realised her value in her absence..achi bat hai

Yarr show mein bhi aisa milta toh omkara ko realize hota kuch but nahh😒

Anyways update soon hann

Originally posted by: ipkknd-fan

I loved how you described omkara's emotions and thoughts so clearly

I can't wait to read the next chapter

Thanks for the pm