RiKara FS - Jo Na Keh Sake Hum Part 5 on Pg 15 (30/09) Complete - Page 7

Originally posted by: AfrinHrid

beautiful update

Originally posted by: minamma

Haha loved the update

Brilliant chapter

Originally posted by: KrazyKripzy

Hehehe, uss gadhe ne Gauri ko insult kiya tha! Woh bhi humari Jatadhari Nandhi ke saamne😆😆

This was a light read unlike the first two chapters!!! Loved em!!!

Long comment likh deti, par filhal busy hu😔 zyada intezaar mat karana, update soon!!!

Waiting to read the next part

Originally posted by: tasnimrodela

Ahaan..!! A dhamakedaar chappy..you know I was imagining the scenario of the AngryKara todofying the haddis of that idiot...aur haddi tootne ki awaz bhi sunne ki koshish kar rahi thi...par afsos mere imagination HD mein nehi tha na..naa hi proper dikhai diya naa theek se sunai diya...par next time pakka theek se imagine karne ki koshish karoongi...this light hearted chapter was much needed..but the best of this chapter was the information you included about the tortures Ri had gone through..finally he got to know...aab dekhte hain Ri ki paglaait chirota kaise usse wapas chalne ke liye manata hain..I'm really excited for the next part as they're going to have a proper conversation...continue soonish dearie...and thanks for leaving a pm...

Originally posted by: arshifansiri

Awesome update.

Loved it.

Eagerly waiting for the next part.

Thanks for d pm:)

Originally posted by: AYUSHIVISHU

awesome update yar...

wow angrykara is a treat to watch...

the way he saved her ...it was was superb...

ofcourse we know our Dabaang gauri... she will always think about other... I am eagerly waiting for their talk...om is getting too much worried thinking about she said OM as his house.

Originally posted by: roaiba

*starts fanning herself because she had an interaction with genie* don't thank me, I should be thanking you for having better ideas than the writers. Your concepts are always so beautiful and just simply amazing to read and the way you portray those feeling and everything else is beyond words. Your'e probably one of my most favorite writers in this fandom hihi and I love the way your brain works 😆😳 I may be young but it doesn't stop people from believing I'm married and have kids, they say I'm mature! 🤣 But that's why I probably understand RiKara's relationship a bit more on the depth 😳❤️

And about part 3: it was amazing and amusing haha. I so miss Dabangg Gauri and hope to see her back on my screen soon. This was really funny and great to read after a long day of stress and fatigue. Thanks for turning my day around

Originally posted by: rikara94

Thankyou gen for giving daily updates..luv u

So mr omkie ko gauri ke bina acha nahi lag raha han..#omgobareilly mission😆

And here you go.. he reached bareily..my all time fav track..bareilly wala track kash cvs hume ek bar fir bareily track dede..but koi nahh yaha to mil hi raha hai

You know it was nice way..inderctly he got to know about her..her pain..her journey during kali she suffer..sab kuch.. he got to know her uncle aunt sold her to kali and about bedi..feeling relax

Hayeee lovely dialogues khabardar meri patni par ek ungli b lgane ki koshish ki toh..kya khoob dhulayi ki un idiots ki *dishoom dishoom* i enjoyed that dishoom dishoom😆 when idiot ki finger broke hui toh golmal return movie yad aa gyi..AD broke finger whenever someone show to finger to him😆

And that suman..haha we got suman shadi track on show also

Eagrly waiting for the next part and their convo..excited for #ommnayogauri

Oh han last part also very funny..do din mein kitne logon ko bachne ke liye gundon se panga liya..she said do and he was like kya🤣

Update soon gen

Originally posted by: Naina280599

This is amazing! I loved this update so much. Omkie realised that he has to get his wife back. Loved how you got suman ki shaadi here and the KT related talks too. Gauri ka pati aa gaya *happy dance* The way he said "khabardaar jo meri patni ko ungli laganay ki koshish bhi ki tu.." And the fight scene that followed was too good. And when he asked her "...kitne logon ko bachanay ke liye.. gundon se panga liya?" "Do" That's hilarious xD This sure was a light read and I totes loved it. Can't wait for their 'talk'

P.S sorry for being late. I slept at night while typing this, probably forgot half the stuff I wrote then *hides face*

Looking forward for the next update. Much love 🤗