RiKara FS - Jo Na Keh Sake Hum Part 5 on Pg 15 (30/09) Complete

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lourel24

@lourel24

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#11

beautifully written.a very well portrayal of gauri's frustation.She has done enough and om's commitment issue is taking a huge toll on her.

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priya_86

@priya_86

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Posted: 7 years ago

#12

oh Genie...i am so glad you are back. 😊

Indeed tough time for the hurricane affected people...Karthi was telling the same...take care.

And awesome one as usual...i just loved the ending...😊

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Genie

@writergenie17

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Posted: 7 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: KrazyKripzy
This was amazingly written! Something I am looking forward to read, do continue! And pm me please...
I love the way you have put Gauri's dialogues, they were beautiful!!!

Kripzy!! 🤗

Thanks for your lovely comment yaar...

I'll definitely PM you as this develops. You're gonna regret it in the future ki bhai maine is crazy person ko kyun bola ki PM karo

Stay tuned!

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Genie

@writergenie17

Voyager

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Posted: 7 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: music1
Another beautifully etched story of our beloved Rikara.. anxiously waiting for the upcoming parts:).. gauri's agony strikes the right chord and hopefully Om will soon mend her broken heart and his confused one ..

Thanks luv!

I'm very glad you liked the story so far.

There should be an update soon... so stay tuned for a relatively low-angst look into Omki's thoughts

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Genie

@writergenie17

Voyager

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Posted: 7 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: tasnimrodela
This is something I wanted to see in the show after Kara's denial of their relationship at the roadside chai ki dukaan...I know he has some commitment issues that need to be sorted out before accepting Ri as his wife...but it's high time he should speak to let her know about his insecurities...I'm glad that she spoke about her inner turmoils and decided to give a break to their relation...it was much needed..and I really hope they especially he'll speak out his heart and he'll give a thought to his own feelings regarding her and their relation...I love your choice words..it gives pure RiKarastic feelings...okay..enough of my bakbak..hope to see you back with the next update soon..

Tasnim yaar... 🤗

Kitne din ho gaya aap ke comments padhe... din khush ho gaya!

I'm very happy you liked the story so far. Jab RiKaratastic feelings ki baat ho rahi ho to you know ki kuch to theek likha hai... 😆

Ab Gauri ke feelings sun liye, next Omki ki baari. Mr. Bakra yahaan par bhi shaayad main main hi karta rahega ab ke liye😡

Stay tuned for an update soon!

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Genie

@writergenie17

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Posted: 7 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: AYUSHIVISHU
awesome update yar
i really wanted gauri to say this...
The way now om is behaving is too confusing...
he dnt want to give their relationship a name and at the same time he doesn't want her to go also...
neither he is saying that he will try...we should really appreciate gauri's patience level...

Aparna! 🤗

Thanks for the lovely comment yaar...

Omki to hai hi confused soul. Use khud nahin pata ki use kya chaahiye is rishte se. Hopefully a long, hard look into his own heart would yield some answers. Show mein mile na mile yahaan to aap ko fultu disclosure mil jaayega.

So stay tuned for some Omki thoughts soon enough!

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Genie

@writergenie17

Voyager

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Posted: 7 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: minamma
Beautiful update
Go girl
Omkie needs to speak now

Thanks for the comment luv...

You're right... Omki needs to speak now or forever hold his peace. Let's see what's going on with him...

Stay tuned for the next chapter coming soon!

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Genie

@writergenie17

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Posted: 7 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: AfrinHrid
Awesome update
loved it

Thanks for the comment luv...

I'm super glad you liked the story so far

Stay tuned!

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Genie

@writergenie17

Voyager

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Posted: 7 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: ...Anabella...
Hey you're back that calls for a party🥳.. and your entry is just so dhamekadar.. this what am craving for right now.. just in case I get lost while reading plz don't mind clg is just too hectic.just know that am always reading.. I really want separation so that Om's ki dimag ki batti Jake.. continue soon and thanks a ton for the pm

Annabella! 🤗

Thanks for the lovely comment... party to zaroor karenge!

I'm super glad you liked the story so far. Most of the angst is done with... some introspection on Omki's part and some Dabangg Gauri in the offing.

Omki ke dimaag ki batti shaayad fuse ho gayi hai... 😆

The fact that you read is more than enough for me. If you don't have the time or energy to comment, koi nahin, just hit that like button. That's enough. Baad mein jab time mile, and if you want to, comment.

Stay tuned for the next chapter soon!