RiKara FS - The Secret Oberoi Part 5 on Pg 30 (18/08) Complete - Page 5

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Posted: 8 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: fraser

Aise friends ho toh svetlana ki kya jarurat h..
Seriously funny scenario it is
Update soon


Are abhi to vilain ki entry bhi nahin hui!

Thanks for the comment luv

Keep a lookout for an update soon!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: sosweetsumi

he obahus reaction will be hilarious


Thanks for the lovely comment sumi!

Stay tuned for an update soon!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: lovesick23

Hehe this is really nice pls continue 😆


Originally posted by: lovesick23

This ff is really nice and different. Keep writing!


Thanks for the lovely comments my friend!

Stay tuned for an update soon...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: arshifansiri

Awesome sneak peak.

Loved it.
Eagerly waiting for the update.
Plz continue soon.


Originally posted by: arshifansiri

Awesome update!!

Loved it..


Thanks for the lovely comments amigo!

I am so glad you liked the story so far...

Stay tuned for an update soon!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: AYUSHIVISHU

Hai genie...

First of all congratulations for turning Goldie...🤗
I really loved your stories so much and I never missed reading any of your stories... wishing to become a well known writer...Totally loved the sneak peak...I am so eager to know wat is in the store. ... will be waiting to read this


Originally posted by: AYUSHIVISHU

awesome update yar...

Totally loving it


Aparna! 🤗

Thanks for the lovely wishes and taking the time to comment...

Aap to mere pehle story se mere reader aur friend rahe ho... I am grateful for your unstinting support and encouragement...

Hope you like this story too!

Stay tuned for an update soon!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: Rumadiv

Dear Genie,
Nice start of the story with different concept. But you left in cliffhanger. Please update soon.

With love,
Divya


Thanks for the lovely comment Divya!

Will update soon... so stay tuned!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: tasnimrodela

Hey Gen..congratz for turning goldie..we always appreciated your hardworks and efforts of bringing something new to us...and we'll always be there to cheer for you...I'm really excited for this OS..the sneak peak made it tough for me to wait..hope to get the update soon..


Originally posted by: tasnimrodela

Hey Genie..sabse pehle, a warm hug for you for writing this...Ri is doing her graduation..yeeeyy..!! It's one of my fav concept for RiKara...personally I like Ri's character in the show..but I believe she has the right to continue her education..and I really want her to continue her studies..as well as her work of designing clothes of bhagwan...thanks for coming with this idea..okay..back to the story..so she hid the fact from her friends that she belong from Oberoi family...she never wanted to be the central attraction...but the Oberoi has their plans...I'm really excited to read what's gonna happen when SSO ki entry hogi with his brothers...Obros pe toh sab ki nazar hain...so humein jealous Ri milne wali hain...it'll be a treat to read..dekhte hain apni jatadhari ko kaise bachati hain deewanis ki nazron se...superb yaar...can't wait to read more of it...


Tasnim... 🤗

Ye lo... warm hug right back!

Thank you so so so much for the beautiful wishes and the lovely comment.

I couldn't have gotten to this stage without amazing friends like you... Aap apne college aur coaching ke beech mein time nikaal kar yahaan stories padhte hi nahin, you also take the time to write such amazing comments! Goldie to aap ko hona chaahiye...

I've always wanted to write a Gauri who goes back to school. I actually want to attempt to write an AU with an educated Gauri, and I'm trying to do it without affecting her core personality. It's coming along but slowly... I'll start posting that once I reach a particular stage in the story.

I'm very glad you liked this story so far... Hope you'll love the future updates too!

Stay tuned for an update soon...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: yayini

Oh.. Genie..This is another interesting take on Rikara.. Ri as a student and still a secret oBahu.. Her jatadhaari picked up fights with her to distract her.. how light and entertaining it s to read such a work of yours, amidst all these stress in the show..

Jealous Ri is a delight and i am eager to know how she handles all the attention that his husband gets from this so called "Extremes" 😆 I want to read their duel on this.. like om teasing her and she getting all frustrated at the fandom's extreme reactions..😆

Excellent.. is the word..!!🤗


Karthi! 🤗

Thanks for the lovely lovely comment!

I'm glad you like student Ri and teasing Kara...

Ek extreme to abhi next installment mein introduce hone waali hai...

Duel waala idea accha hai... might include it in the parts I'm still writing.

Thanks for the love...

Keep a lookout for an update soon!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: vrindagupta

Wow

What a concept
First of all congratulations

Superb shot
Gauri is completing her studies
Completely in love with her jata Dhari
With all the hype that smrithi was creating
I thought it would be Omkara
It's not her fault
She doesn't know who her husband is

Wonder how will Gauri react to this
Shivaay is coming
Hope Omkara too accompanies him

Waiting eagerly to read more
Update soon


Originally posted by: vrindagupta

Fabulous update

So Oberoi's have it all planned
To show up at the graduation ceremony

Gauri is gonna have a tough time
Here she was finding it wierd
With smrithi's interest in shivaay
But her husband too
This is really too much

Smrithi is no danger I know
But with all the other girls in campus
Her brothers & husband is in danger
And GKS ..ooops. GOSO
Will never let anyone lay a finger on her family

Waiting eagerly for the graduation ceremony
Update soon


Vrinda yaar... 🤗

Take like a dozen hugs from me!
I just love to read your amazing comments every time!

Thanks for the lovely wishes... ye sab aap jaise khoobsurat friends ki badaulat hai.

I'm very glad you liked the story so far.

Keep a lookout for an update soon!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#50

Originally posted by: -Rhea-

I don't read RiKara fictions much. But will start reading soon cause I love them. Didn't watch DBO. But man, RiKara's chemistry. ❤️

And I'm so glad I opened this read it. The title pulled him. 😆
Absolutely love the concept. Love love love it. Fantastic start. Continue soon. :)
And do PM me if possible?

Much love,
Rhea


Hi Rhea!

I am so glad you decided to give this story a chance!

You will get a PM from me from now on... glad to have you on the RiKara bandwagon!

We don't have cookies but we can give you naariyal ke laddoo which is the only sweet Omki eats. 😆

Keep an eye out for an update soon!

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