RiKara FS - The Secret Oberoi Part 5 on Pg 30 (18/08) Complete - Page 6

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Posted: 8 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: perfictionist

aaarrghhh! you built the suspense a little too well!

what are the oberois planning exactly! Gauri graduating is so wonderful! An educated independent dabang Gauri 🤗❤️ so fulfilling!
Also special mention for the romantickara who is oh-so-adept at handling his wife..a little too well😳😉😆


You made me sooo happy with this emotion filled comment of yours!

I am very glad I was able to give you guys something that made you feel happy...

Keep a look out for an update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#52
Very intriguing and nice story... Loved it... Plz update the next part soon..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Oh no. I missed teaser. Thank you so very much for pm otherwise I would've missed this beautiful piece of art getting started.

Secret Oberoi haan.. it's quite interesting. Gauri is already in love with him and I'm sure om is too. It's obvious. They are also married (yay) I'm so excited to read upcoming parts

Smrithi. (I hope I spelled her right) she is just like us. Fangirling. Her all points are true. Obros are hotness ki dukaan.! i love her already

Waiting for Oberoi's Fake doesn't know attitude with teasing smiles meeting tensed don't-know-what-to-do gauri. She's smart I hope she could make Oberoi's panic or stun with her stunt at party 😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: Rishrabh

Sounding interesting .


Originally posted by: Rishrabh

Wow... I m loving it genie. Plz plz plz update soon.


Thanks for the lovely comments amigo!

Keep an eye out for an update soon...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: sara1990

Congratulation Ginie. I love the concept. So basically no one know who is Gauri's "Nandi @ Jatadhari". I guess she never mentioned his name and only called him as Jatadhari. Even her friend talked to him over the phone. Now hide and seek game will start. I was actually thought Omkara might be the chief guest, Well Bade Bhaiyya is coming. It will be fun to read and imagine the entire scene later. I hope Smiti does not mistake Gauri and understands the reason behind why she hide her identity. I wonder if any one knows that the younger Mrs.Oberoi is also studying in the same college. Chiraiyya is graduating, where is our Nandi? Why he is not there? Is he gonna make any surprises for his Chiraiyya. I wonder what they fought about? Must be something silly. Please update soon. Can't wait for the update.


Originally posted by: sara1990

Gauri is jealous. Smirti gonna get shock of her life when she finds out who Jatadhari is. Well I dont really think Smirti could be a villian. Can't wait for the next update. I was always wanted to read this kinda of concept for our Rikara.


Thank you so so so much for such beautiful comments and the lovely wishes.

You've been my friend pretty much since I started posting here and let me tell you, I am super grateful for your unstinting love, support and encouragements.

I hope we can be friends for a long time...

Smrithi is definitely not the villain... you'll meet my villain in the upcoming chapter so stay tuned for some drama!

And trust me... Nandi will be there for his Chiraiyya!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: rikara94

Hello my golden golden goldie 🤗

Oh wow mera name bhi add hai woh bhi no 3 pe main toh sharma hi gyi☺️gauri sharma wala sharma nahi blushing wala sharmana😆 again congratulations dear sis🥳🥳 yun hi rang badlte rahiye😳
Back to the story... promo itna acha hai toh picture kitni achi hogi
At the starting of this i thought smrithi is talking about hot news i mean cheif guest is omkara but then gauri cleared that she is married so it obvious she is married to her jatadhari omkara...hmm dts why she was not interested in any other hot guy..well about smrithi i love her character here..bubbly girl..jo hot hot guys pe marti h😆 but poor she is gauri has not tell her about her most hot and sexy hubby😉 so guest is sso han
Anyways update soon


Originally posted by: rikara94

Hey gen🤗

Amazing start dear...superb..
So it is pre planned that oberoi's are going to be attend ceremony..whole family knows about it...but now gauri is able to understand whole situation about cheif guests..rikara's fight and family behaviour...gosh...it is going to be tough for gauri bcoz no one in the collage knows thatt she is the part of famous oberoi'family
Now she finding it wierd bcoz her friend smrithy's interest in obros hahha..wierd situation for gauri when she found smrithy's interest in shivaye but she jealous when her friend talk about her jatadhari lol..gosh tab smrithy ka reaction kya hoga jab use sach pata chlega😆
Waiting for tthe next part


Jyoti!!!! 🤗

Meri taraf se ek nahin kaiii hugs lo aap!

I just adore your comments yaar! They're so good fro my soul...

I'm glad you're so into this story.

Smrithi is cute na? Oberois Gauri ko surprise dena chaahte hain... ulta heart attack ho jaata agar apni Ri ko pehle hi pata nahin chalta.

Waise har acchi story mein villain ko to hona chaahiye na? So we'll meet our villain in a bit...

Stay tuned for more soon!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#57

Originally posted by: AfrinHrid

jealous Gauri 😃

interesting update...
continue soon


Thanks for commenting friend!

stay tuned for an update soon...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#58

Originally posted by: rithika2015

awesome plot line and update.. loved it to bits and eagerly waiting for the next update..

want to see whether just shivaay will turn up or is it gonna be the whole O family..
loved the part where gauri was feeling uncomfortable when her friend was talking of om.. update sooner..


Hi Rithika!

Thanks for giving this story a chance and commenting!

Welcome to my cray cray world of RiKara...

I'm super stoked that you liked the story so far. Oh don't worry... the whole paltan will turn up.

Stay tuned for an update soon!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#59

Originally posted by: SanyaEterna

So interesting! Wondering the reactions of Gauri's college mates when they realise she is an Oberoi! Update soon n thanks for the PM!

-Sanu


Thanks for the lovely comment Sanya!

Please don't mind that my villain's name sounds a lot like yours...

Stay tuned for an update soon!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#60

Originally posted by: Aarathi85

Goldie genie...cingratz at first...thanks for your special mention...about story its an amazing sneak peak...waiting eagerly for the story...iam sure it will be a wonderful story...please continue soon...


Originally posted by: Aarathi85

Its simply amazing...loved to read gauris panick reactions on hearing that her mad family is preparing such a surprise...i eant to know smrithi's reactiin up on knowing that OSO is gauri's jatadari...if the story have a villian it will be nice...but dint want to make a lot of problems in their life...


Thank you from the bottom of my heart for the beautiful wishes and the lovely comment Aarathi!

I'm glad you're loving the story so far... hope you'll like what I have planned for the future too!

The story does indeed have a villain, you'll meet her in a bit. Villain ke bina mazaa thodi aayega?

Stay tuned for an update soon!

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