RiKara FS - The Secret Oberoi Part 5 on Pg 30 (18/08) Complete

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hi y'all!

This is a not-so-little 'Thank you' from me to all you wonderful readers, friends, sisters and brothers I've found in the RiKara fandom. You've stayed with me through 1000 posts, given me the encouragement to write when I was about to quit, been patient through my writer's blocks, written lovely comments on all the stories I've posted and inspired me to be a better person, a better writer and a better friend.

Thank you from the bottom of my heart for all the love and positivity you've given me in the past four months. I hope to continue this lovely relationship with you all for the foreseeable future!

A special 'thank you' to my lovely friends FayeMia, Sakura24, rikara94, _PrincessPooru_, Annabella, Yayini, tasnimrodela, Shraddhadikshit, AYUSHIVISHU, Sara1990, A-musing-Me, Aarathi85, Annika_Ishqbaaz, DamseLInActioN, Naina280599, twerping... and a whole lot of other lovely people who have been with me from my first post, and in some cases, their first post. IF has been a lovely experience due to you all. I am grateful to have you guys in my life.

Without further ado, here's a sneak peek into the OS for you all... it's about 3/4th of the way done and should be ready to post in a day or two.

Do let me know what you think...

Lotsa love and hugs,

Genie

Chapter Index:

Sneak Peek - 01

01 - Pg 03

02 - Pg 09

03 - Pg 18

04 - Pg 24

05 - Pg 30
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"Gauri! What are you doing sitting in the library! Haven't you heard the hot news around campus about who's supposedly coming to the graduation ceremony?"

Smrithi pulled on Gauri's arms, making her hastily pack up her pencils and pads and walked her out of the library into the sunshine.

"Sorry Smrithi... I'm a little out of it today... Sort of had an argument with my Nandi before I left home and anyways, you know I really don't care about all this gossip and rumor..."

"Are! You'll definitely care about this! Do you know there's a whole lot of gossip going on that someone super famous is coming to the graduation ceremony though no one quite knows why?"

"Do I need to remind you that I'm married Smrithi? And majorly in love with my jatadhari, thank you very much."

Gauri pointed to her mangalsutra, a fake frustrated expression on her lovely face as she walked beside her friend

"And you know I don't care which hotshot they are bringing in this time to lord it over us during the ceremony..."

"I am sure you will change your mind when you come to know just who's coming! And don't think I've forgotten about this elusive jatadhari of yours... I thought at least today I'll get to see this guy, who I was sure will have to finally show up around here at least for your graduation. Two bloody years yaar!... abhi tak tere husband se mulaqat nahin karvaya tu ne. Hamesha uske gun gaati rehti hai magar kabhi ek picture bhi nahin dikhaayi. Agar maine us se baat nahin ki hoti phone pe aur tum donon ke saikdon sexy waale messages nahin dekhe hote to I would surely not believe ki tumhara jatadhari even exists."

"Since I am sure I can't stop you from telling me, I'm gonna let you just get it all out. Go ahead... I'm all ears. Tell me about this amazing and I'm sure entirely undeserving, empty-headed gasbag they're planning to make us hear this year" Gauri said, neatly sidestepping the whole invisible jatadhari question.

"It's Shivaay Singh Oberoi! OMG! Now you're interested... Right?"

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So... what are your thoughts?

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Naina280599 thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Congrats on turning goldie!! You're one of my favourite writers whom i love to read. You're the sweetest person I've interacted with after joining IF ❤️
Coming to this OS, i am loving it already. This sneak peek is too interesting. Can't wait for the OS. Post soon!
Much love 🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Well Smriiti, I'm very much interested but for something entirely different. That is, knowing how this story will proceed and what will be the reason SSO is gonna be there.
I believe it is to watch his sister in law's graduation ceremony on the pretext of visiting the event. Or is there something different this time around?
Keenly waiting Genie, please update soon!
Love,
Sakura
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Interesting teaser. Looking forward to read more
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Good Morning Humaari Sone Mein Saji Hui Genie 😳🤗

I Agree the RiKara gang is more of a family now ...

Okay ... So this one is the secretive surprise!

First of all, I like the title ... It intrigued me that how can a heir of assets worth millions can manage to be a secret? Phir mujhe laga do Ri and Kara do Secret mancing? Then I thought are they married and she does not know that he is an Oberoi?

About the story, Gauri ... A college student about to have a graduation ceremony, its delicious food for thought. I like Smriti ... She is very bubbly and Chirpy.

Ahaan, Gauri is married to her beloved Jatadhari and so is not interested to know which hot and handsome chief guest they are going to have! I agree jab Pati Nandi jaisa ho toh kahi aur dhyaan hi nahi jaaega ...

Even Smriti does not know that to whom is Gauri married? Okay, such an attempt to not reveal your husband's identity is a task difficult enough ...

It is understandable that why Gauri is not being vocal about being Mrs. Jatadhari ... Not wanting all the special attention coming with it ... I feel she wants a college life of any normal girl... I am happy with her decision to do do ...

We get to know her relationship with her Hubby is very much romantic and sexy but with that we also see how particular and caring her bade bhaiyya is ... Making the most accurate effort to be a part of Gauri's convocation ... Three cheers for Mr. Kanji eyes ...

Analyzing the whole situation I figure out that I was wrong in assuming who the secret oberoi is and now my wrong is right.

You know Genie, in the Obahu perspective I have thought of all the younger Mrs. Oberoi's trying to adjust according to the lavish lifestyle but the way you have outlined the story ... I feel so good reading it ...

This Gauri reminds me of many disnep characters
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hi GOLDIE GENIE...
Congratulations & Celebrations bae on this victory...
& I felt overwhelmed with emotions when u mentioned me as ur special friend...sniff...
I've always been in in love with all stories, but specially amor intermissus & hide & go seek ...feel so calm when I read ur stories.

& This is something very very interesting I feel I actually thought omkara will be the guest but it's SSO & poor gouri hasn't revealed anything about her hubby I feel...or has she??.

Anyways waiting for next & ek jhaap de Dewar pe satjayebe if u don't pm me...( lol)...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wow
What a concept
First of all congratulations

Superb shot
Gauri is completing her studies
Completely in love with her jata Dhari
With all the hype that smrithi was creating
I thought it would be Omkara
It's not her fault
She doesn't know who her husband is

Wonder how will Gauri react to this
Shivaay is coming
Hope Omkara too accompanies him

Waiting eagerly to read more
Update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hello my golden golden goldie 🤗
Oh wow mera name bhi add hai woh bhi no 3 pe main toh sharma hi gyi☺️gauri sharma wala sharma nahi blushing wala sharmana😆 again congratulations dear sis🥳🥳 yun hi rang badlte rahiye😳
Back to the story... promo itna acha hai toh picture kitni achi hogi
At the starting of this i thought smrithi is talking about hot news i mean cheif guest is omkara but then gauri cleared that she is married so it obvious she is married to her jatadhari omkara...hmm dts why she was not interested in any other hot guy..well about smrithi i love her character here..bubbly girl..jo hot hot guys pe marti h😆 but poor she is gauri has not tell her about her most hot and sexy hubby😉 so guest is sso han
Anyways update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Oh genie...
I am waiting this is excellent...
Plz update sooonnn
Plzzz
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hehe this is really nice pls continue 😆

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