RiKara DRABBLE SERIES - EPISODES REVIVED -DRABBLE FOUR - UPDATED Pg 11 - Page 7

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Posted: 8 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: tasnimrodela

Pooru dear..you created magic...how do you always manage..?? Yaar, it was amazing...

The new version of "Jay jay shiv shangkar" ana "Didi tera devar deewana" was hilarious...lekin humein unhe deewar pe na satana...haha..kya lyrics hain..I laughed really hard...I can imagine Ri's expressions while singing...

Their moments was pure bliss...DrunkRi's confession and his hug..God..!! Iske bad aur kya chahiye..but you wrote more as bonus for us...JealousKara ka sapna bhi poora ho haya..waise yeh MANGU JI kaun hain..?? Ekdin phir mulaqaat karwana humse...inke saath saath jealous Omkara ka bhi darshan ho jayega...

Rikara under the shower..haye..!! Pani mein bhi aag laga di...

Can't explain how much I loved this..aab jaldi wapas aa jao...we miss you...

Aur haan..I'm really sorry for the late..lunch ke bad tuition classes gayi thi...lekin wapas aate ki harharaike padh li...aur comment bhi kar diya... 😃


Tasnim 🤗

Saahiban dosto se maafi nahi maangte ... Yaad nahi humaari Gauri ke favorite salman ji ne kaha thha ... Dosti me no sorry no thank you ...

I am glad you liked the parodies and my song selection ... I made extra efforts for them

Mangu ji zarur waapas aaenge par jalte bhunte Kara se pehle humme jaan jalane waali Ri milegi

RiKara under the shower was a treat for me to imagine and write but knowing that Gauri consumed Bhaang ... Sanskaari dimaag mein aise khayaal pehle aate hain!

I say I will be back soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: coolhi1988

D drabble is superb

But lyrics of song we're just hilarious...
Laughed so much
Thanks 4 pm

Thank you so much 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
#63
Awww pooru .. this was so so awww ❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: writergenie17

Haaye Princess...

Aaj ka poora din isi expression ke saath katega mera.

I am just drowning in feels here my dear.

Abhi lamba comment nahin likh sakti but I wanna let you know, you've literally made my day! This drabble was one of the best RiKara moments I've ever read... and trust me, I've read a lot of RiKara!

Thanks for sharing some perfection with us on the day we got some dominatrix waale bees.

Eagerly awaiting the next installment of your drabble series!


Genie 🤗

About the composition I say khoobsurti padhne waalo ki nazar mein hoti hain and about the composer I say khoobsurti dil waalo ki qadar mein hoti hain ... Thank you so much

Whether long or short ... I am more than happy to see you comment ... Kam shabdo mein bohot badi baat kehdi tumne

Even I feel this is one of my best RiKara compositions

My version of today's episode coming soon ... Jealous Ri on her way!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#65

Originally posted by: AYUSHIVISHU

Awesome update yar...

I am totally loving this...

Thank you Ayushi 🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
#66

Originally posted by: perfictionist

WHAT-THE-FARAQ?!?!?! Waali dialoguebaazi Shivaay aur Anika ki bachkaani harkaton ke liye rehne do " ~ slayed

like i said before..you truly make magic!
dialogues on point! your jalan interpretation bang on! so wanted a long rikara conversation and clarity on that but now-a-days Gauri has taken over the responsibility of walking out from omkara! 😭😕 leaving us to suffer the confusion! loved this much needed update poorva!👏

Thank you AdiShree 🤗
I am eagerly waiting for my version of the jalan dialogue to come true ... Mutually agreeing that even I am getting impatient to hear their conversation ... I don't want to trust the writer's team of the show now ... Isiliye Jo chaahiye ... Jaise chaahiye khud hi likho 😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
#67
Pooru yaa .. thanks so much for this.. you've actually made the bhang incident so much more meaningful.. this is way better than suddenly having love confession bombs dropped on our heads,. But that's what's going to happen on the show .. but for now I super enjoyed this take.. n all your nuanced writing made it super fun too.. right from befuddled minion to smoky eyes to reptiles dancing to temple earrings n the dress details .. loved it all n then the shower romance.. wow yaa.. that's the way events are made interesting n not with random fall n catches n taking actors n audience for granted.. anyway beyond all ranting now .. simply enjoy everything as bonus .. n this was great.. thanks yaa
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Posted: 8 years ago
#68

Originally posted by: tasnimrodela

Behna..har roz aise hi perfect drabbles likhti rahi naa, then I swear mujhe onscreen RiKara moments naa milne ka jalan nehi hoga...you always write their moments with so much intensity that sometimes I feel like I'm watching those scenes before my eyes...and that's the magic of your writing..the way you penned how much jalan our Kara felt was mind blowing...they aren't complicated in your writing..they talk..they express...and they make us feel their emotions..all thanks to your amazing writings...aab toh har roz episode se zyaada tumhari drabbles ka intezaar rahega..jaldi wapas aana...theek hain..??


Tasnim 🤗

You know naa main RiKara se emotionally kitni attached hoon isiliye whatever I write is heartfelt both on you part as well as mine ... Main sab kuch imagine karti hoon ... Khud dialogues deliver bhi Marti hoon, I feel yeh scene merit nazron ke saamne ho raha hain ... Isiliye you are able to feel this sort of connect ... I quote our hero here ...
" Sach Mein Dhal Jaate Hain Kisse ... Dil Se Jud Jaane Ke Baad ..."
Again as you know Om is my spirit character ... These lines aptly described how and what I feel ... RiKara se bohot pyaar karti hoon main isiliye I try and make their stories emotional, romantic and simpler ... Initiated this series with the intention of updating my version of every RiKara moment ... Will be back with Jealous Ri
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#70

Originally posted by: Rati0992

Awww pooru .. this was so so awww ❤️

Aaawww ❤️😎 Thank you Rati 🤗

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