RiKara DRABBLE SERIES - EPISODES REVIVED -DRABBLE FOUR - UPDATED Pg 11 - Page 5

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Posted: 8 years ago
#41
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Abhi padhti hoon
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Aww poorva behna love the way write the another version bhaang wale ladoo

its a funny romantic awesome fantestic superb update yar...loved the parody behna

first one is jai jai shiv shankar..what is the last line..han jo tune mujhe getout kaha😆😆

and the second one is unplugged version of didi tera devar diwana😆😆



too funny yar...and the third one abhi na jayo chod ke ahhh such a romantic song😳
and that zulfi se thandi mithi kulfi was best han and then she pulled his cheeks usko lgta hai she was dreaming haha 😳
Banda dying to see his wife desperate ho raha tha aur ghar pe aa ke kuch aur hi dekhne ko mil gya..😆
Awww caringkara very helpful also..uska smuged kajal clean kiya earring remove kiya and about to remove the pin from duppatta she said mangu ne kaha hum isme pari jaise lagte hai😆now who is he?? Plz tell us...waise indian version of cinderella wala best idea tha apka and and she confessed hum apke bina jee nahi payenga hayeee loved that how cutely she confessed na
End mein mahol romantic ho gya...uff i am still blushing☺️
My personal fav parody that you used
Woh jane ke humko pasand hai mithaai
Phir bhi unhone karele ki sabji khilayi
Bhaujaai ka zulfi devar dewaana
Lekin humme unhe deewar pe nahi stana
Haha 🤣🤣
I wish show mein aisa milta but koi umeed nahi ab toh9🥱
Edited by rikara94 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#42
Fabulous update
Plz focus late on mangu
Love to see green Kara

But all in all

Very romantic funny and cute

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Posted: 8 years ago
#43
Amazing update sweety
thanks alot for pm...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#44
how do you take simple moments like this and turn them magical! oh god! i thought yesterday's episode couldnt get any more perfect but bam!.. you came up with this and poor harneet can never really satisfy us with you, her nemesis, wielding your pen in masterpieces!😆😳
oh this is just wondeful!. omkara's desperation to meet his wife!.. the phonecall background.. him adoring his little princess and taking care of her.. sooo wholesome and fulfilling...
Gauris heartfelt confession and distress.. omkara finally understanding what she has been going through behind that brave smiling facade!.. so beautiful. thankyou poorva!🤗
Rikara is indeed blissfull❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago
#45
Hey pooru jab itni acchi story writers yaha h toh show ki story gyi tel lene .. so romantic, so soothing, so full of love story 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Pooru dear..you created magic...how do you always manage..?? Yaar, it was amazing...

The new version of "Jay jay shiv shangkar" ana "Didi tera devar deewana" was hilarious...lekin humein unhe deewar pe na satana...haha..kya lyrics hain..I laughed really hard...I can imagine Ri's expressions while singing...

Their moments was pure bliss...DrunkRi's confession and his hug..God..!! Iske bad aur kya chahiye..but you wrote more as bonus for us...JealousKara ka sapna bhi poora ho haya..waise yeh MANGU JI kaun hain..?? Ekdin phir mulaqaat karwana humse...inke saath saath jealous Omkara ka bhi darshan ho jayega...

Rikara under the shower..haye..!! Pani mein bhi aag laga di...

Can't explain how much I loved this..aab jaldi wapas aa jao...we miss you...

Aur haan..I'm really sorry for the late..lunch ke bad tuition classes gayi thi...lekin wapas aate ki harharaike padh li...aur comment bhi kar diya... 😃
Edited by tasnimrodela - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#47
D drabble is superb
But lyrics of song we're just hilarious...
Laughed so much
Thanks 4 pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
#48


TUM SAATH HO


"Teri Nazron Mein Hain Tere Sapne

Tere Sapno Main Hain Naaraazi ..."


You need a psychiatrist Gauri ... Tumhe sachmein apne saare paagalpan ke liye medication ki zarurat hain! Omkara growled at Gauri. He was very angry with his small sized wife's Two-Rupees Idea out of her small sized brain ... he actually felt how the pulsation of his heart gave up one life in a moment when she tripped down the staircase almost breaking her hands and legs, her neck was saved because of Shankarji's grace. He ran to hold her in his arms because she seemed to have lost consciousness. Busy roaring, abusing and cursing everyone to call for a doctor, he realized that she had put up a drama to bring the Vikram-Anika wedding preparations to a halt when she winked chuckling against his chest.


Tum theek ho? Zyada dard toh nahi ho raha ... Hum abhi doctor ke paas chalte hain. He instructed after seeing maroon and purple bruises on her shoulders and swelling in one of her ankle.


Arre Omkara ji aap bilkul chinta mat kijiye. Hum bilkul theek hain, zara si toh chot hain... do teen din mein theek ho jaaegi ... koi farq nahi padta ...Gauri said in her usual casual tone.


Pehli aur aakhri baar keh raha hoon Gauri, yeh saari WHAT-THE-FARAQ?!?!?! Waali dialoguebaazi Shivaay aur Anika ki bachkaani harkaton ke liye rehne do ... tumhe suit nahi karta. Omkara argued curtly.


Humara plan toh fail ho gaya toh ab Rudy Bhaiyya wala plan try karke dekhna padega ... JEALOUS SSO ROCKS!!! Gauri was so excited.


Please meri baat maano Gauri ... Dumbbell Singh Oberoi ka ek bohot dumb idea hain yeh ... yeh poora raita mere bhai aur bhabhi ne phailaya hain ... unhi ko sametna padega. Om's voice sincerely affected Gauri.


Par humme Bhaujaai ki madad karni hain Omkaraji ... pehle woh jis pool mein Bade Bhaiyya ke saath prem ras bhare geet gaati thi, aaj-kal ussi pool ke kinaare baithkar judaai ke aansu baahaati hain. Gauri explained


I agree ke Shivaay aur Anika idiots ki tarah behave kar rahe hain, par woh bachhe nahi hain Gauri, apne aap ko sambhal sakte hain, apni shaadi sambhaal sakte hain. Ab better yeh hoga ke tum apna Bhaujaai-Jaap chhodo ... aur Patidev-Jaap karo. Omkara chuckled seeing a strange change in her expressions with the mention of the word jaap.


Aapko Pata hain Omkaraji Bade Bhaiyya aur Anika Bhaujaai taiish mein aake apni zindagi kharaab kar rahe hain ... abhi toh dono ek doosre ke saath hain, ek doosre ke paas hain phir bhi kitne dukhi hain ... hum nahi chahte humari bhaujaai ko sachmein dil tootne ka zara sa bhi ehsaas ho ... woh bardasht nahi kar paaengi. Gauri gripped the lining of her kurta and shut her eyes tight recalling how such pain felt.


Omkara was not able to bear with the sight of her trembling in the current of insecurities and fears. It frightened him as well. He felt helpless being the very reason of the negativity in her emotions.


Tumhari neeyat bilkul sahi hain Gauri par soch aur tareeka bulkul galat. Do you realize Shivaay ko jealous feel karwaane wala plan kitni buri tarah backfire kar sakta hain? Om started talking about RuRi's plan in order to distract her.


Yeh jalan bhi badi natkhat chirraiyya hoti hain Omkaraji ... bass chingaari ko hawa dene ki der hain phir thande paani mein bhi aag laga degi. Gauri declared in her quirky signature style.


Omkara stood in front of her with his hands crossed against his chest with her not so favourite WHY-DO-YOU-LIKE-TO-DEBATE look.


Yeh JAL JAL KE DHUAN hone waali baatein aap rehne hi dijiye Omkaraji ... aap nahi samjhenge. Gauri put a full stop on this discussion and started asking some questions to her internet chachi on her phone.


Tumhe aisa kyon lagta hain ke main tumhaari baat nahi samjhunga? Omkara asked her in a broken voice.


Kyonki jalan wahi ho sakti hain ... jaha ehsaas ho ... pyaar ho. She replied not paying attention to him


Main bohot ache se janta hoon jalan kaisi hoti hain... woh ehsaas kya hota hain jab kisi baahar waale ki nazar mere kisi apne pe ho. He explained struggling to control his tears.


Toh jisse chahenge ussi se jaake yeh baat kehna ... humme aapki ishq aur jalan ki concept clarity jaanne mein koi interest nahi hain. She shrugged him strongly feeling the pretence of a Ruthlessly Angry Kara at the back of her mind ... her memories making her blabber.


Jis din tumhe pehli baar dekha thha, uss din tumhaare baare mein ek galat opinion banaane ki jalan, ussi opinion ki wajah se tumhe baar baar judge karne ki jalan ... tumhe kaali thakur ki haveli mein dekhne ki jalan ... pyaar se nahi, nafrat se tumse shaadi karne ki jalan, tumhe zindagi ke liye tadapta dekhne ki jalan, tumhaare character pe ungli uthaane ki jalan ... baar baar tumhe khudse alag karne ki koshisho ki jalan... tumhaare har narazgi bhare sawaal ki jalan ... sach keh raha hoon Gauri, tum mere paas ho isiliye khudko sambhal paa raha hoon nahin toh issi jalan ki wajah se khatam ho jata ... Omkara admitted to Gauri holding her painfully close.


Gauri had been the one who asked him about her value in his life. She was truly, madly, deeply in love with him but his aloofness excruciated her. Now that he had begun to become expressive about his feelings and repentance, it was hard for her to tolerate the truth of their relationship. His furious red eyes were burning her entirely.


Tej Singh Oberoi ki ego ki wajah se maine apne Papa ko kho diya, Svetlana ki harkaton ki wajah se maine apni mom ko kho diya ... Parivaar ke naam par mere paas ek OH-MY-MATA karne waali Chhoti Maa hain, Chhote papa jo kabhi kuch bolte hi nahi aur daadi inhi sabko ko sambhaalte sambhaalte pareshaan ho jaati hain ... pyaar par kabhi yakeen nahi kiya thha maine lekin Ridhima par kiya thha ... usne bhi mujhe dhoka diya ... Omkara told Gauri Everything with a lowered head.


You deserve to be happy Gauri, I deserve a chance. He pleaded holding her hand and interweaving their fingers.


Aap jaante hain naa ke iss Gauri ne apne Shiv ko paane ke liye kitni tapasya ki hain toh ab yeh bhi samajh lijiye ke itni aasaani se peecha nahi chhootne wala. She challenged him clutching the collar of his kurta.


Both of them smiling through their tears.

Edited by _PrincessPooru_ - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#49
Haaye Princess...
Aaj ka poora din isi expression ke saath katega mera.

I am just drowning in feels here my dear.

Abhi lamba comment nahin likh sakti but I wanna let you know, you've literally made my day! This drabble was one of the best RiKara moments I've ever read... and trust me, I've read a lot of RiKara!

Thanks for sharing some perfection with us on the day we got some dominatrix waale bees.

Eagerly awaiting the next installment of your drabble series!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Aisa lagta hai ke baatein dil ki
Hoti lafzon ki dokhebaazi..tum sath ya na ho...
You know i love this song and you made this as a title...aawww love you so much... and love so much for this beautiful and wonderfull drabble poorva😳totally worth it behna...i enjoyed the whole part of this drabble..i love the way you eloborate the different version of jealous sso rocks 👏
Perfect dialogue delivery..perfect timing of dialogue and perfect emotions😳
Sahi time pe sahi dialogue...wah wah👏👏
I toh loved it yar😳
And faraq ki toh bat karo hi mat mujhe ab faraq word se koi faraq nahi padhta ab 😆😆
And kara is right bhaiya bhabhi ko ki rayta smetna padhega ab but gauri is gauri jealous sso rocks plan pe focus krna hai use and that pati jaap superb and that jalan wale dialogues ahhh dil ko thandak hi mil gyi...hope show pe bhi yahi matalb ho uska..uske emotions and expression during jalan scene i am crying😭😭
And finally gauri apne shiv ka itni jaldi picha nahi chodegi
I loved it yar..superb..one of the bestest drabble👏👏
Waiting for more😳
Edited by rikara94 - 8 years ago

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