RiKara TS - SAUDEBAAZI - SHOT THREE UPDATED Pg 1 *COMPLETE*

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Naina

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Posted: 8 years ago

#31

This is amazing. Loving the story. Post the next part soon.

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Monidipa konar

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Posted: 8 years ago

#32

O wowww... it's amazingly beautiful...loved it completely.. Thanks for the pm..

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Poorva Chakraborty

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Posted: 8 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: tasnimrodela
Yeeeyy..!! New update of Saudebaazi..I told you before that I'll look forward to this as it's gonna give me some kind of peace after watching the not so good episodes of the show...and look..mujhe shaanti mil gayi..

You explored so many shades of emotions...Omkara's wrath, his confusions, his frustrations, his realizations everything looked so natural...forced scenes dekh dekh kar dil toot gaya tha..but this update gave me so much of sukoon...I loved this innocent and devoted, yet to independent Ri..she's love...and you did justice to both of their characters..

He's coming out of the darkness of the misunderstandings and letting his emotions overpower his judgements about his circumstantial wife...he's smart enough to identity his place in her life...and Pyaare Mohan- the lover boy and jealous Kara..!! Ahaan..!! 😉 I laughed hard after reading this part..

So somehow Gauri felt low after knowing about his past..most importantly his social status...but Omkara, being a perfect hubby tried to make his wife understand... 😳

Will be waiting for the next part...it was awesome..aab isse padhne ke bad chain ki neend ayegi mujhe... 😃

Tasnim 🤗

I am contended and thankful that tumhare Mann KO shanti mil gayi ❤️ ... Always happy to help you

I tried to keep both the characters as realistic as possible ... Here Omkara is not the angry young man on baseless accusations and Gauri even when a devoted wife is not clingy... None of the two is blind

The situation of their marriage was so sensitive ... It had to be handled with care and if both of them are responsible for the marriage ... They should be the one sorting out the mess ... They are young mature adults.

Omkara is always the one who thinks over action and execution ... The basic nature of him is introspection, he was blinded in judgment because his life happenings instigated him but he is a man more than that.

Gauri is ought to have such positive effect on him ... She is strong, independent yet naive and innocent ... Something he did not expect out of her ... Plus now she is his wife.

Ahaan pyaare Mohan 😆 ... Wanted to highlight the dialogue ...

"Gauri toh humesha apne Shiv ke pass hi rahegi"

This being the final hammering to Om's continuous over thinking ... He deserved to know that she held him with her god

Knowing the life of OSO ... Gauri is scared, self conscious and even doubtful of whether the RiKara marriage will work or not ... She does not feel that she is good enough to be the Kara wife.

The concluding hug was Omkara's reflex to many realizations, for them the confrontation is yet to come.

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Poorva Chakraborty

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Posted: 8 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: roaiba
Holy s*** !!! This is so good 👏 I literally can't wait to read more 😛😆

Thank you Roaiba 😳 will try and update soon

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Poorva Chakraborty

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: DeewaniMastaani
It's really nice! Update soon! 😊

Thank you 😳

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Poorva Chakraborty

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Posted: 8 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: perfictionist
you are magical! It broke my heart with the way om was portrayed all this while, blinded by judgements and assumptions, accusing and assassinating Gauri's character without ever bothering to crosscheck his suspicion with facts... from the most unconventional ML he became the most riddiculous...
And now you give us the REAL Omkara!! the understanding, mature omkara who is only too willing to give the erring a second chance, to be able to see the truth in people's eyes and most importantly...a thinking omkara... wow... after what we have been subjected to this read has made me very very veryy happy😳😛...so thankyou! Also added to the softykara you added the sexy parts of nastykara.. the jealousy, the possessiveness...that kiss was oh so sexy!😳😆
Loved it poorva! im so glad you are back❤️🥳

Adishree 🤗

Tumhaari baat padhke dil bhar aayaa 😭 ... Thank you for appreciating me ...

What I do is nothing out of the world or hatke ... I just try and keep RiKara normal with their basic instincts authentic

Even I have hated the potryal of Omkara in Dil Boley Oberoi ... Even after he was the one responsible for marriage, he never cared to know Gauri ... And then her character certification is ridiculous!

What I wrote here is the Omkara we were introduced to ... The one who justified people who wronged and threatened Obros, the one who was truthful and not egoistic. Omkara is thinking over his detailed observations right now ...

Whatever happens we know ... Kara is never going to change for anything bad so I put moments of SoftyKara and the jealousy quotient was absolute love