RiKara TS - SAUDEBAAZI - SHOT THREE UPDATED Pg 1 *COMPLETE* - Page 3

Originally posted by: _PrincessPooru_

Jyoti 🤗

I was missing you more

Maine pehle OS type karne ke baare me hi socha but then this one is lengthy and I wanted to see the response ... Now I shall continue the story ... U know I posted this because Neha insisted ... Will complete now.

I must say you are on point with calculation ... Prediction perfect hain ... Tum toh meri writing ki rag rag se waakif ho ...

Yeah Dandi is the detective who will do what he did in the show but I hint Omkara is not Stupid Kara here!

woaah! look who's back ! hiii poorva how have you been.

Originally posted by: sara1990

Is Om gonna suspect and investigate the Barielly incident. I really hope he believe Gauri and not Kali Thakur. Looking forward for the next update.

Originally posted by: perfictionist

woaah! look who's back ! hiii poorva how have you been.

A fresh take on rikara is an awesome idea! looking at their story from a different perspective is always exciting!😳😛 i just hope this omkara doesnt tread the dark road too much😛 diehard optimist at heart!

Originally posted by: A-Musing-Me

Pooru 🤗 ... thanks so much for sharing this one with every body else .. you have no clue how these works act like elixir .. else the RiKara on the show are less said the better .. anyway.. no diversion.. just glad that you still get inspired .. else I also know of people who are like on a writers block cause of the crap that's being dissed out in the name of story .. just hope you keep writing for a long time .. :))


Coming to the story.. I Iove all the different situations that you explore stemming from one single event .: well done girl.. n I like the way RiKara behave individually here .. n with you m sure mus will be handled fine .. just thanks a ton for posting this story .. super glad .. really enjoyed it

Shot Two updated guys ... do read and let me know how you like it ... comments are awaited and before that do hit the like button😳

Yeeeyy..!! New update of Saudebaazi..I told you before that I'll look forward to this as it's gonna give me some kind of peace after watching the not so good episodes of the show...and look..mujhe shaanti mil gayi..

You explored so many shades of emotions...Omkara's wrath, his confusions, his frustrations, his realizations everything looked so natural...forced scenes dekh dekh kar dil toot gaya tha..but this update gave me so much of sukoon...I loved this innocent and devoted, yet to independent Ri..she's love...and you did justice to both of their characters..

He's coming out of the darkness of the misunderstandings and letting his emotions overpower his judgements about his circumstantial wife...he's smart enough to identity his place in her life...and Pyaare Mohan- the lover boy and jealous Kara..!! Ahaan..!! 😉 I laughed hard after reading this part..

So somehow Gauri felt low after knowing about his past..most importantly his social status...but Omkara, being a perfect hubby tried to make his wife understand... 😳

Will be waiting for the next part...it was awesome..aab isse padhne ke bad chain ki neend ayegi mujhe... 😃

Holy s*** !!! This is so good 👏 I literally can't wait to read more 😛😆

It's really nice! Update soon! 😊

you are magical! It broke my heart with the way om was portrayed all this while, blinded by judgements and assumptions, accusing and assassinating Gauri's character without ever bothering to crosscheck his suspicion with facts... from the most unconventional ML he became the most riddiculous...