RiKara TS - SAUDEBAAZI - SHOT THREE UPDATED Pg 1 *COMPLETE*

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Poorva Chakraborty

@Cinnamon_Kisses

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Posted: 8 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: AYUSHIVISHU
Awesome update yar...
Om had got a jhatka...
He tried to seduce her to bring her truth out but it was indeed a shock for him... wat he thought about gauri was not at all true... The mohanji confession part was hilarious... awww jealous kara was superb...
Now gauri came to know about he being the Omkara Singh Oberoi and she thinks that she doesn't fit the Oberoi style... I really hope that om will be able to convince her

Ayushi 🤗

Om is going to get a bigger jhatka soon ... About Omkara realizing the truth ... Every little aspect of her behavior has helped him to understand that she is not what he supposed her to be ... Gauri is flabbergasted to know OSO ... Let's see what happens next

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Neha

@A-Musing-Me

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Posted: 8 years ago

#52

Pooru.. hats off man.. so many tangents you've covered .. all their fears judgements insecurities go for a toss as they get to know each other better .. that's how relationships are made unlike the gross mess that's served on the show .. I loved each n every emotion that's you've touched .. n as pre conceived notions fall apart we have them supporting each other n realising each other's worth too .. a really nice read .. thanks for writing these stories makes me realise that I haven't invested in the wrong couple .. :)

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Poorva Chakraborty

@Cinnamon_Kisses

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Posted: 8 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: A-Musing-Me
Pooru.. hats off man.. so many tangents you've covered .. all their fears judgements insecurities go for a toss as they get to know each other better .. that's how relationships are made unlike the gross mess that's served on the show .. I loved each n every emotion that's you've touched .. n as pre conceived notions fall apart we have them supporting each other n realising each other's worth too .. a really nice read .. thanks for writing these stories makes me realise that I haven't invested in the wrong couple .. :)

Neha ❤️🤗

Bohot badi baat kehdi tumne ... I feel responsible as a writer & You know I feel mutual because writers and admirers like you make me feel that giving away a part of my time in writing RiKara is worth it ... For the update, as I said I wanted a normal husband & wife relationship for RiKara ... This is one way in which it can be sketched ... You cannot get away from observing a person who lives under the same roof as you and we know how intricate of an observer Omkara is ... Gauri being the better half is trying to adjust and understand where her life is heading ... She is a hurt aching soul.

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LAKSHMI KRISHNA

@lakshmi32

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Posted: 8 years ago

#54

un res pg no :1

Edited by lakshmi32 - 8 years ago

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Poorva Chakraborty

@Cinnamon_Kisses

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Posted: 8 years ago

#55

Lakshmi 🤗

Thank you so much for the chocolates ... I simply love chocolates

Coming to the story

YES YES & YES!

Gauri is a hurt and aching soul who is naive according to behavior ... She is a Bareilly Chirraiyya trying to adjust in Om's space for the last two to three days ... She owes her life to Om, Not having any idea about his belief of her ...

Omkara who thought that Gauri is wicked and vile is questioning his own conclusions now because he has seen the truth ... He has understood that Gauri is too innocent to become a gold digger

I was highly angered by the way the whole MU situation was handled ... So keeping the characters authentic ... I will finish the story ...