Shivika TS - The Bracelet (Part 2 new 27th July 2017)

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Archie

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Posted: 8 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: Mummyoftwo2012
Wonderfully written story.
I'm eagerly waiting for next update

Thank you so much, glad you liked it!😊

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Archie

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Posted: 8 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: farinaks
Beautifully penned down
Emotional nd painful
Continue soonish
Do pm me if possible

Thank you so much Fari😳

Will PM you :)

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Archie

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Posted: 8 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: Javeria3991
Awesome
Looking forward to read more.

Thank you so much Javeria😊

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Archie

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Posted: 8 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: LoveToWrite
Archie, this was love ❤️ Let me say first how much I loved your title or else I might forget it. 'The Bracelet'... Ah, it sounds... beautiful, you know.

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Well, I'm in love with the title myself😆 I really wanted to write something that was centred around the bracelet, and this came up😃

Thank you for reading, glad you liked it!!🤗

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Rohini

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Posted: 8 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: _SilverLining_

Thank you so much for the beautiful comment!

When I watched this scene I felt like there was so much missing from it, like it could have been way better but the writers as usual had to rush through it to get to the comedy parts. So I tried to write it my way and put more meaning into it, and also make the characters behave like they really should have. I'm so glad that you liked my version😳

Will be updating soon :)

Much love!

@bold. Thats exactly what I felt too. Shivaay was ready to apologize but Annika didn't let him and then there was a dialogue saying that they would only end up fighting if they discussed this further. When you added the angry mode to Annika coupled with the already modes that she is going through because of Pinky's challenge, those words make more sense.

Normally when novels are adapted as movies and then when you already have read them, I sometimes feel the missing gaps when watching movies. When reading the novel, normally the writer gives words to most of the thought process. But in movies not every thought can be incorporated.

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Archie

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Posted: 8 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: NarbhiForever..
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Sorry for being late dear😳

This was amazing!!
Just loved it!!!
This was beautiful and awesome

Superb dear
Everything felt so realistic anyone can imagine this happening in front of their eyes⭐️⭐️
Loved it totally

Waiting for next part
Continue soon...

Thank you so much🤗

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Archie

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Posted: 8 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: ithihaas

@bold. Thats exactly what I felt too. Shivaay was ready to apologize but Annika didn't let him and then there was a dialogue saying that they would only end up fighting if they discussed this further. When you added the angry mode to Annika coupled with the already modes that she is going through because of Pinky's challenge, those words make more sense.

Normally when novels are adapted as movies and then when you already have read them, I sometimes feel the missing gaps when watching movies. When reading the novel, normally the writer gives words to most of the thought process. But in movies not every thought can be incorporated.

Very true! I think that scene had many layers in it - a lot of emotions came into play and maybe it wasn't possible to portray them all on camera. Maybe that's why it looked like something was missing.

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Tremors

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Posted: 8 years ago

#38

I wish u could show this to the writers.. would have made bettr sense!!!

Loved it..

Thankx fr the PM..

Update soonish!!

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Rohini

@ithihaas

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Posted: 8 years ago

#39

Just done reading the 2nd part and I must say that it was absolutely brilliant piece.

Annika giving back to Pinky and in turn challenging her to make Shivaay hate her. That was simply awesome. Even Shivaay using his brains to find out truth. Loved it.

Now that makes me more hungry for next update 😉

Edited by ithihaas - 8 years ago