Shivika TS - The Bracelet (Part 2 new 27th July 2017)

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Sparkler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#11

So painfully beautiful...I loved your version so much better than what was aired Archie! Please do continue soon...looking forward to reading more!

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Archie

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Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: Tremors
Brilliantly penned... it was a treat to read..
Thanks..
Please update soon..

Thank you so much! Glad you liked it😊

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Archie

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Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: Gurveen
Superb update
Poor Anika has go through so pain for Shivay
Update next part soon

Thank you so much😊 Hopefully the update will be here by day after tomorrow!

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Archie

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Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: ithihaas
I really really loved your version on the events from the show. This looks more realistic and plausible.

You have given words to the feelings that Annika went through between the lines spoken and it really gave a lot more meaning to the words which were uttered by her in the pool.

Your version had a flow to it. Will be eagerly waiting for the next updates.

Thank you so much for the beautiful comment!

When I watched this scene I felt like there was so much missing from it, like it could have been way better but the writers as usual had to rush through it to get to the comedy parts. So I tried to write it my way and put more meaning into it, and also make the characters behave like they really should have. I'm so glad that you liked my version😳

Will be updating soon :)

Much love!

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Tadibaaaz

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Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#15

Amazing work
Really loved your version
Wating for next part

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Mummyoftwo2012

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Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

#16

Wonderfully written story.
I'm eagerly waiting for next update

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farinaks

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Voyager

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Posted: 8 years ago

#17

Beautifully penned down
Emotional nd painful
Continue soonish
Do pm me if possible

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javeria

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Rocker

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Posted: 8 years ago

#18

Awesome

Looking forward to read more.

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Archie

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Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: sarcasticsmiley
The episode on which u r writing is one of my favourites..!!
Awesome start dear..
Shivaay has confessed his feeling to annika..
But poor girl.. she can't even tell him that she also loves him..
All thanks to pinky..
But nvr mind.. i m sure shivika will be together no matter what..
Loved ur update..
U have written it in a exceptionally unique way dear..
Will be waiting for nxt updates.. Do PM me if possible..
Till then - gud wishes 2 u from my side..!! 😊

Thank you so much🤗 Will PM you!