~Pain~ Shivika OS: On Separation track - Page 3

Originally posted by: NarbhiForever..

Totally Loved it..

Amazing

Originally posted by: jarir2010

its beautiful.khirkitord.⭐️👏

Originally posted by: bAkChOd.

I just finished reading it

Its awesome..

Beautifully written <3

How i wish the makers also do a similar reunion

Looking forward to read more os from u 🤗

Originally posted by: ...Tahsu09...

My...my...my GOD...this is jst so beautiful❤️.. Maliha...u have penned down it brilliantly 👏...while reading this shot my eyes were getting moist everytime 😭...how beautifully u jst managed to bring out the pain of Shivika💔...shivika's inner turmoil creating havoc in their life 😭...they r so hurt...so lost...they jst need each other bas...thats the only cure of their pain
Aww ..poor shivay how he wanted her to cme out nd see him getting beaten by those goons ..but Anika didn't appear ...but Anika cud feel him being into a dangerous situation...something is not right wid his shivay...I love this ..shivika's senso-meter😳😆...
then she found him hurt ...her bagad billa was in so much pain ...she realized what she has done to him...!!

Loosing him was a big loss but seeing him loosing himself was even bigger.
Ahh...this line ...ouch..saying everything ❤️Anika can't afford to lose her tadibaaz Billu Ji like this ...❤️ she left him coz she thought he cud be happy wid his family nd he cud move on easily...but lil did she knw that it wud be totally opposite ...the pain that she gave him it wud turn out this much dangerous for him?He is nothing without her nor she is!!!
Omg...the kiss was indeed the healing for shivay ☺️...he jst needed his soul to cme back to him nd make him alive again❤️😳
How I wish to see such thing on the show ...but*sigh*...!!!😆
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Maliha...thanks a ton for writing such awesome shot🤗 ...keep writing more...All the best🥳