~Pain~ Shivika OS: On Separation track

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-AppleOfMaEye-

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Posted: 8 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: AYUSHIVISHU
Awesome...loved it
you portrayed their emotions,pain beautifully...
The pain of seperation...it was too heartbreaking
eachothers presence is wat they needed

thanks

am glad you liked it.. 😳

they need each other.. but CVs are making them to look like idiots for now..

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-AppleOfMaEye-

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Posted: 8 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: shonasyl
Separation 💔 and quite sad . They need each other 😭... yur story, Super se bhi Upar 👏 ...

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am glad you liked it.. 😳

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-AppleOfMaEye-

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Posted: 8 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: farinaks
Beautiful emotional painful...yet magical
Lst part was so perfect... They both got peace in each others embrace
Loved it frm the core of ma heart

thanks

am glad you liked it.. 😳

i so wished CVs had ended the track like this only..

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-AppleOfMaEye-

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Posted: 8 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: jeness
If only this exact thing would happen onscreen!.
Oh the possibilities!
You described their painful emotional turmoil so well.
Honestly, this is one of the best shot I have read here, on the current track,
Well done Writer😊

thank you so much

am glad you liked it.. 😳

i so wished CVs had ended the track like this only..

they need each other.. but CVs are making them to look like idiots for now..

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-AppleOfMaEye-

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Posted: 8 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: coolhi1988
wow this was wonderful
it was painful to read it though..
but liked it very much

thankss

am glad you liked it.. 😳

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Pixiepixel11

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Posted: 8 years ago

#16

Amazing brilliant piece of writing.

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..Damon..

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Posted: 8 years ago

#17

i love it Maliha

will you write more like that? 😳

i will love to read more!

i have followed your shots since Qabool hai

i am not following Ishqbaaz much but somehow know whats happening in show! and i love it in context.

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falsePromise

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Posted: 8 years ago

#18

I just finished reading it

Its awesome..

Beautifully written <3

How i wish the makers also do a similar reunion

Looking forward to read more os from u 🤗

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LittleBeasty

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Posted: 8 years ago

#19

My...my...my GOD...this is jst so beautiful❤️.. Maliha...u have penned down it brilliantly 👏...while reading this shot my eyes were getting moist everytime 😭...how beautifully u jst managed to bring out the pain of Shivika💔...shivika's inner turmoil creating havoc in their life 😭...they r so hurt...so lost...they jst need each other bas...thats the only cure of their pain
Aww ..poor shivay how he wanted her to cme out nd see him getting beaten by those goons ..but Anika didn't appear ...but Anika cud feel him being into a dangerous situation...something is not right wid his shivay...I love this ..shivika's senso-meter😳😆...
then she found him hurt ...her bagad billa was in so much pain ...she realized what she has done to him...!!

Loosing him was a big loss but seeing him loosing himself was even bigger.
Ahh...this line ...ouch..saying everything ❤️Anika can't afford to lose her tadibaaz Billu Ji like this ...❤️ she left him coz she thought he cud be happy wid his family nd he cud move on easily...but lil did she knw that it wud be totally opposite ...the pain that she gave him it wud turn out this much dangerous for him?He is nothing without her nor she is!!!
Omg...the kiss was indeed the healing for shivay ☺️...he jst needed his soul to cme back to him nd make him alive again❤️😳
How I wish to see such thing on the show ...but*sigh*...!!!😆
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Maliha...thanks a ton for writing such awesome shot🤗 ...keep writing more...All the best🥳